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The video was being played somewhat quietly.
Background music was a bit loud, or you were talking a bit quietly.
"However" was said very often. Try fixing that
Attempt to remove the watermark over most to all of the video]]> 2021-02-12 00:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195072834 https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195072945 Sometimes background music too loud]]> 2021-02-12 00:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195072945 vxq7bk9tuc https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195074164 Is there a significance to the counter on the bottom? If not, crop it?]]> 2021-02-12 00:47:48 UTC https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195074164 https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195074907 Change tone of your voice occasionally ]]> 2021-02-12 00:48:25 UTC https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195074907 https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195075305 A lot of information, difficult to follow]]> 2021-02-12 00:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195075305 https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195075891 Try not to use however so many times]]> 2021-02-12 00:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195075891 Very interesting! https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195077450 Background music a little distracting. I was kind of confused. A few tweaks would make it better. Keep going!]]> 2021-02-12 00:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/2021couzensb2/rdyclidcsvtzm6hw/wish/1195077450