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      <title>English 201-911 Correct Sentences by Michelle Felix</title>
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      <description>For this week, you read Rules for Writers chapters 19 and 20 about fragments and run-on sentences. If you were assigned to complete his Padlet, you have had some of those errors in your first two essays.  Find a couple of those errors. Post the errors and then add the corrections. Explain why you made the correction as you did.</description>
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      <pubDate>2017-02-15 02:27:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Football was my life, it meant more to me.</title>
         <author>casonc1</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/felixm3/rd0qihhvaxih/wish/156625337</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I do not know what I meant here but it is definitely two sentences. I think i'll end it with "Football was my life."</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-02-28 05:33:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>It was homecoming week, the whole school dressed in our team colors</title>
         <author>casonc1</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/felixm3/rd0qihhvaxih/wish/156625439</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I used a comma splice here instead of tying these two sentences together. "It was homecoming week and the whole school dressed in our team colors."</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-02-28 05:35:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title> There were fourhonorary captains selected for this game, I happened to be one of them</title>
         <author>casonc1</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/felixm3/rd0qihhvaxih/wish/156625573</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Again I used a comma splice. "There were four honorary captains selected for this game and I happened to be one of them."</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-02-28 05:36:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>That was just the start of what heplanned to accomplish, he was assassinated April 4, 1968</title>
         <author>casonc1</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/felixm3/rd0qihhvaxih/wish/156625812</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Comma splice. "That was just the start of what he planned to accomplish but his life was cut too short and was assassinated...."</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-02-28 05:42:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>This is a prime example of fightingfor what you believe in, this man should feel proud for what he is trying to accomplish</title>
         <author>casonc1</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/felixm3/rd0qihhvaxih/wish/156625954</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Comma splice. "This is a prime example of fighting for what you believe in and this man should feel proud......"</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-02-28 05:45:33 UTC</pubDate>
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