Advertising Gone Wrong by Erin Donaire

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donairee2024 — 2023-11-02 17:39:09 UTC

-What went wrong was they have a tie hung which represents "bad thoughts" or "suicide" which doesn't advertise the job pretty good but instead negatively.

-The ad should be changed by adding a business' person with a suit and tie normally instead of it being hung.

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donairee2024 — 2023-11-02 17:41:57 UTC

-What went wrong was having blood and person being murdered. It seems like the main purpose of the soap in this scenario is used to get blood stains out for bad purposes.

-The ad should be changed by making the soaps purpose for something more normal and user friendly that's not blood. Maybe getting your hands dirty from dirt outside then using the soap to wash it off.

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donairee2024 — 2023-11-02 17:44:38 UTC

-What went wrong is that this ad seems racist. Although their purpose is to target anyone and everyone, they didn't have to use one white boy, and one black boy. Especially the specific pictures they used, the little boy is dirty. It puts a bad notation.

-The ad should change by using a different picture of the little black boy because they knew what they were doing. Or even adding just a globe and putting more people and races.

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donairee2024 — 2023-11-02 17:47:56 UTC

-What went wrong is that this isn't appeasing. This cheeseburger looks disgusting and not edible, so why would they advertise something that no one would want?

-The ad should change by them putting a nice cooked and prepped cheeseburger. One that is put together well and appeasing.

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donairee2024 — 2023-11-02 17:50:45 UTC

-What went wrong is that they didn't respect woman's rights. By adding this quote, they were saying that the women's just is to cook and clean like how it was before back in the day.

-The ad should change by just taking away that saying or quote that is disrespectful. Maybe adding a meaningful message for mothers day instead.

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donairee2024 — 2023-11-02 17:54:51 UTC

-What went wrong was this is body shaming and judging others. In this case it seems like they are targeting heavier set people and saying if they were to go into the ocean they would harm the whales. So this has a negative connotation to it.

-The ad should be changed by taking out the harsh and disrespectful words/sayings. For example, "Lose the blubber" and "save the whales." They should put a positive and uplifting message to motivate them on why people should go vegetarian.

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donairee2024 — 2023-11-02 17:58:48 UTC

-What went wrong was the fact they said this person had imperfections. Having freckles isn't an imperfection to all, they used their own thoughts and opinions and said this harsh statement.

-The ad should be changed by taking out that negative, and disrespectful quote. Just keep the rest though, so it doesn't hurt anyone's feelings in the end, especially for those who have freckles.

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donairee2024 — 2023-11-02 18:02:54 UTC

-What went wrong is that they kind of failed to promote this product beneficially. Them putting a baby on this ad, and stating that they fail once in a while doesn't help. This product and ad should be advertised to be as safe as possible

-The ad should be changed by promoting the product positively instead of negatively. The baby can be kept on their, along with the product but everything else should go. A saying of use protection so you don't end up with a baby would be better.