Hooks: Drop in the middle of the action Surprise with a fact Question Onomatopoeia by Rachael Torres

allisonmh — 2025-09-08 20:36:09 UTC

allisonmh — 2025-09-08 20:36:15 UTC

CRASH! The baseball shattered the window as I ducked. That's how my summer adventure began. Hooks grab attention by dropping readers into action, surprising with facts, asking questions, or using sound words like BOOM! Which hook makes you want to read more?

allisonmh — 2025-09-09 14:20:01 UTC

The hat flew off and landed right in the middle of the pond.

2025-09-09 14:23:00 UTC

the best thing i learned in swimming is blowing out of my nose in the water so i don,t get water in my nose

2025-09-09 14:23:52 UTC

when I was in the water at hooper pool I jumped in and there was a big SPLASH!

2025-09-09 14:24:06 UTC

we were in the middle of the pool swimming

2025-09-09 14:24:25 UTC

I jumped in the water in the 5ft but I'm only 4ft 9...

2025-09-09 14:24:57 UTC

I was flowting on my back and I panicked.

2025-09-09 14:25:09 UTC

The best part of swiming was to catch fish with a botle.

2025-09-09 14:25:35 UTC

wen I went siwing to learn a bout was barew uder warter

2025-09-09 14:25:51 UTC

MY favorite part about swimming was when we were floating on our backs.

2025-09-09 14:26:28 UTC

it was so fun because in the water and i try to catch a fish but i didn,t catch a fish

2025-09-09 14:27:31 UTC

It was swimming time for me and the class we were about to line up then someone got a big frog .

2025-09-09 14:28:19 UTC

It is fun to swim becous you do cool things like go down the slide.

2025-09-09 14:28:28 UTC

wen arasr cote abigg forg

2025-09-09 14:28:29 UTC

I plopled in 5 foot and swam even though 4ft9

2025-09-09 14:32:52 UTC

Fossils are DINOSORE remains made from rock and bone prints

2025-09-09 14:34:37 UTC

dionsos eats fogs

allisonmh — 2025-09-09 14:34:52 UTC

The oldest fossil found is 3 billion years old.

2025-09-09 14:35:29 UTC

fossils are sometimes are from dinosaurs and bears and stuff

2025-09-09 14:35:36 UTC

a fossil fact is fossils are just bone because when the dinusors skin evaporated in the soil.

2025-09-09 14:37:37 UTC

the oldest dinosor was found in 3 billion years ago

2025-09-09 14:37:50 UTC

fossils are rare you can find tham they are rile cool rare

2025-09-09 14:38:12 UTC

a woleymamith tusk can be offer 10ft long

2025-09-09 14:38:26 UTC

fossils are something form a long time ago like dinosaurs, and there is fossils on mars.

2025-09-09 14:39:20 UTC

A fun fact about fossils are that there really big and that there over a billion years old

2025-09-09 14:39:43 UTC

You can get fossilised poo

2025-09-09 14:40:58 UTC

You can get fossilised poo

2025-09-09 14:40:59 UTC

A fossil is a trace of ancient plants and animals, like bones, teeth that are at least 10,000 years old

2025-09-09 14:41:07 UTC

Did you know Robert plot found the first fossil.

2025-09-09 14:41:31 UTC

fossil fact are dead animals that lade in hot sun and there are skeleton of animals in the grown

allisonmh — 2025-09-09 14:43:21 UTC

Have you ever flown over 12 hours to visit a family member?

2025-09-09 14:44:16 UTC

Have you ever visited Canada? Probably not if you live nere me.

2025-09-09 14:44:49 UTC

Have you ever been to Mexico and travled?

2025-09-09 14:45:21 UTC

have ever thavl 7 hoers to losvags

2025-09-09 14:46:46 UTC

have you ever been to North Korea they have spicy corn dogs and fluffy pancakes with good syrup and the fruit is amazing you should go to North korea its beutiful

2025-09-09 14:46:59 UTC

Have you ever been to Mexico ,I have it really hot there .When I when't to see my family I was sweating.

2025-09-09 14:47:48 UTC

Have you been to another country because I havent,have you ever been on a fourteen houer drive because I have?

2025-09-09 14:48:11 UTC

Have flone to Brazil?

2025-09-09 14:48:12 UTC

did you know South America has 12 countries

2025-09-09 14:48:42 UTC

the Philippines miles 6,781 to United States are miles 6,781 10,913 km

2025-09-09 14:50:03 UTC

My mom floue to south amarica to stay a week there and I had to stay at my Nani's house.

2025-09-09 14:50:05 UTC

have you travel 7 hours to los bags!

2025-09-09 14:51:14 UTC

Is Japan an island country in East Asia?

2025-09-09 14:52:27 UTC

I bet you didn't know the Vatica city is the world,s smallest country, while Canada has the the most lakes of all country

2025-09-09 14:55:09 UTC

Wha pow!! I slammed the table on the floor and it broke.

2025-09-09 14:56:24 UTC

At church me and my brother were playing doge ball and he hit the TV CRASH ! the TV fell down and my brother was in big trouble for that.

2025-09-09 14:56:34 UTC

I when't on my bed to sit down and fell of the bed BOOM!,It hurt OW.

2025-09-09 14:56:53 UTC

CRACK! The Titanic snapped in half before it went in the water, and most still remains on the oeacan floor.

2025-09-09 14:57:19 UTC

BOOOOM Boooom ! me and my dad heard 2 gun shotes will

hunting

2025-09-09 14:57:48 UTC

BONK the baseball hit a car in one of my baseball games.

2025-09-09 14:59:08 UTC

I crashed the car and side ow it hart and I card to my mom and side I crashed the car.

2025-09-09 14:59:10 UTC

As I was walking I saw a car going relly FAST! and as I waltch there was a CRASH!, BOOM!

2025-09-09 14:59:24 UTC

Boom as I herd suting .I lckt a round my room my liveing room but the kitchen I THOT that suthing blup but it was the toster.

2025-09-09 14:59:28 UTC

One night me and my dad heard a baby crying but it was just a fox.

2025-09-09 15:00:07 UTC

at the park me and cousin were playing basketball and I shoot the ball and the net wen,t swoosh and the ball wen,t bump bump bump then I shock the fence and it when,t ting ting ting I shoot the again and the net when,t swoosh .

2025-09-09 15:00:44 UTC

ouch! I slammed my finger on the door and it hurt really really bad

2025-09-09 15:00:59 UTC

Ouch! I was at specials and someone push my friend and I was next to him and he accidently push me and I hit my head in the wall .