Do Now- November 30, 2017 Period 5 by Jill Walters https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70 Reflect on yesterday's media album activity. What were some positives of this activity? Were there any parts of this activity that should be changed for next time? Explain your reasoning. en-us 2017-11-25 19:00:44 UTC 2017-11-30 16:00:23 UTC hello@padlet.com Nikola D. https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211909410 
The good things about having these media albums are that we can get feedback on our work, so that we know what we should fix and what we could fix. I think we don’t have to change anything on the media album activity because it already does what it’s supposed to do perfectly: we get accurate feedback on our work from other people.
]]> 2017-11-30 15:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211909410 Anthony https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211909495 The positives about this activity is that you get to know what you need to improve on and make corrections.These are some positive things about a media album ]]> 2017-11-30 15:47:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211909495 Evelyn https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211909916 Some positives ideas about this activity was we corrected each other’s work and help each other by giving feedback to what they should improve next time and the things that they did well on. Also I think this activity went well so, I think there’s nothing we can do to change it.]]> 2017-11-30 15:47:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211909916 Savannah Pomeroy https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910166 One positive thing about the media album is that your peer give constructive criticism which will help you improve your writing and make it better.Also you practice ''grading'' paper which will help you "grade" your own]]> 2017-11-30 15:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910166 Elizabeth https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910176 I think some positives of this activity was that we all got to write comments and we all got comments. Also another positive was that we got to get good things and also a comment to improve it.]]> 2017-11-30 15:48:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910176 Keri-Anne https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910180 The good thing about this activity was to tell people what the need to work on so they become better writers. This shows that people’s commentary will just be a bit better, their evidence, too. They may just be a journalist one day. You never know. All because they got feedback on what they can work on. It also helped improvement on what you can work on.]]> 2017-11-30 15:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910180 Biannelys https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910345 Some positive about this activity was the your partner could tell you if you needed to improve something.]]> 2017-11-30 15:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910345 Angelene https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910953 Some positives for that activity is that we are learning what we have to do in order to get it right the next time. Something we can fix is the handwriting on some people’s work because when it is sloppy you can’t read anything of what the people are writing.]]> 2017-11-30 15:49:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910953 Benito https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910971 Some positives were that the advice did help and it was from someone who didn’t see what you wrote and it helps us see what we did a good job on and what we need to improve on.]]> 2017-11-30 15:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211910971 Hugo Alexander baruja https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211911315 One positive thing about it was that we go to tell eachother  what we did good and what we need to work on becuase when you read your own work you think it’s all right but it’s not so then when another person reads it they could actually see what’s wrong ]]> 2017-11-30 15:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211911315 Jhenny jhenny2468 https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211911428 Some positives in this activity was other people give a good amount of advice and work on what they need to fix.]]> 2017-11-30 15:50:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211911428 Jaishon https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211911530 Some positives were telling them if they had a good claim, commentary, conclusion etc. Or you could give them suggestions about what they should do next time.]]> 2017-11-30 15:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211911530 Alexis https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211911838 Some positives from yesterday’s activity was we got advice on how to get better on out evidence organizer and what we could do better is be more specific and maybe take less time to do this activity.]]> 2017-11-30 15:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211911838 Diana https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211912044 Well I was not here yesterday but what I think that the positives of the media album activity that we have to change is to get it well organized and improve on the thing that we need to work on.]]> 2017-11-30 15:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211912044 Joseph Alexan https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211912225 Something positive is a learned I needed help on my claim. I don’t feel like anything needs to be changed.Another positive was I got to help someone else’s writing.]]> 2017-11-30 15:51:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211912225 Adriano https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211912245 One positive thing from yesterday is that I got to hear someone else’s opinion about my writing, something that I need to work on is my commentary.]]> 2017-11-30 15:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211912245 Alexandra Lopez ortega https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211913040 I think this activity was cool and the positive was that we got to tell eachother  on how to get better so next time you wouldn’t make the same mistake as you did last  time]]> 2017-11-30 15:52:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jillwalters1/rat22pt76x70/wish/211913040