https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj Sharing is caring - upload your BIPR assignments here en-us 2022-02-02 08:56:39 UTC 2023-06-02 09:08:05 UTC hello@padlet.com https://media3.giphy.com/media/FGTVmzksb2j0k/giphy.gif https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553038733 https://youtu.be/sfCVQEVahhA

She is distracted
Too many hand movements
Not looking in the eye
Too many ‘uhm’ s
Not serious
Not selling herself 
Not prepared 
No structure
Doesn’t look professional 
Too over the top


Xx - PR Pitch Perfect]]> 2023-04-13 12:16:59 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553038733 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553046569 https://youtu.be/KLYwEd15rSg

Reasons why it's bad:
- There is too much background noise that is distracting and taking away from her main voice.
- She sounds highly insecure when speaking.
- She doesn't know the company she says 'I don't really know what you are looking for' which proves she did not do her research beforehand
-she is not well prepared, which causes her to say 'uhh' a lot.
- She is not excited about the specific company she literally says 'you were the first one that came up' which proves she is not specifically interested in their company.

PR Putas agency (Fleur, Luna, Vivi)]]> 2023-04-13 12:20:30 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553046569 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553059064 https://www.elle.com/culture/celebrities/a43147547/selena-gomez-hailey-bieber-drama-timeline/]]> 2023-04-13 12:25:38 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553059064 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553059575 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3kgtpl4Q5OY

Bad recording 
Not maintaining eye contact 
Not confident 
Dressing down during the video 
Uses his notes way too much 
He doesn’t know much about the topic
Bad presentation design]]> 2023-04-13 12:25:52 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553059575 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553063815 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y1io9kSWrPA

- Promoting himself without giving proper experience and evidence. 
- Lacking of acknowledge towards the company. 
- Lacking of certainty that he wants to work for the company.
Minh Anh, Nga My]]> 2023-04-13 12:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553063815 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553077817 Bad elevator speech - YouTube

Dude is not looking at the camera. He sounds very uninterested. He doesn't show any confidence, and he mumbles. His story is not consistent enough; he names examples of his past experiences yet they are not fully connected to the pitch. He is searching for words. This is awful.

The Super Mafia Bros.
Matien, Liam, Bastiaan, Koen]]> 2023-04-13 12:33:40 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2553077817 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2554351674 Why?
- Bad quality
- He’s eating 
- No preparation whatsoever
- Bad Audio quality 
- Distractions by touching his face
- His speech does not have any flow
- Camera falling
- Unprofessional 
- Not proper settings 

Desiree, Divika, Nathalie, Nasywa]]> 2023-04-14 09:25:34 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2554351674 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2554402852 https://www.bbc.com/news/entertainment-arts-65258807

Why this is news?
- it informs people about a current event
- it's a big event which a lot of people are interested in getting information about.
- there is a lot of controversy around the author
- it garners interest due to the stories surrounding the author
- a lot of people will want to read the information this article gives

PR Putas Agency (Fleur, Luna, Vivi)]]> 2023-04-14 10:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2554402852 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2555861452 https://www.bbc.com/news/world-europe-65279818]]> 2023-04-16 16:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2555861452 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2555987995 Sudan: Army and RSF battle over key sites, leaving 56 civilians dead - BBC News

Why is this news:
- although the situation in Sudan was already quite tense, the recent clashes are significantly worse than what was already happening and it's affecting the country in a very negative way.
- just like the Russo-Ukrainian war is affecting Europe, the Sudan conflict is affecting neighbouring countries such as Chad and Ethiopia. Thus the Sudan war has an impact on the (North) African community.
- people, including World Food Programme employees (a UN body), have died and hundreds of people are injured. ]]> 2023-04-16 20:39:03 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2555987995 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2556042287 why this is news:
- announce the status of one of the best singers in the world at the moment
- Taylor Swift is known to be an excellent musician and one of her inspirations comes from her love story. People wonder if she will release an album in the near future
- Caught everyone's attention because Taylor is on tour and her recent songs were supposedly written about Joe
- Taylor has gone through a lot of failed love affairs and the public is curious what the reason she broke up with Joe.
The AA (Asian Angency) -  Phương Anh, Jake]]> 2023-04-16 22:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2556042287 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2556578305 https://www.bbc.com/news/uk-scotland-edinburgh-east-fife-65226163

by Daria]]> 2023-04-17 07:49:30 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2556578305 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2560678859 Why is it good?
- They informed their customers of an important and very relevant topic.
- All information given is used to inform the customer truthfully and with care.
- They used words that are easy to understand even for non-native English speakers.

Are there similarities?
- We do not fully understand what we are comparing it to, so this question is difficult for us to answer.

Template?
- This press release holds very true to the standard template for a press release, in the sense that it start with a clear heading, a date and location, body paragraph, etc.

PR Putas Agency (Fleur, Luna Vivi)

]]> 2023-04-19 20:03:32 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2560678859 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564267970 https://www.thenational.scot/news/23472504.shell-bp-facing-severe-problems-unite-announce-strike/]]> 2023-04-22 15:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564267970 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564553119 https://www.theguardian.com/environment/2015/oct/10/shell-exxon-gas-drilling-sets-off-earthquakes-wrecks-homes
Our answers for your questions: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11qjcbwNQksyfOYdAnVXT4u23c4hBRqbd0-lFi7nKLYI/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2023-04-23 10:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564553119 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564582425 https://sites.manchester.ac.uk/global-social-challenges/2022/07/06/shell-and-its-profit-motives/]]> 2023-04-23 12:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564582425 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564834853 2023-04-23 21:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564834853 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564835141 2023-04-23 21:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2564835141 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2585697367 Warm regards,
PR Putas (Fleur, Luna & Vivi) with help from moral support dog Ayla]]> 2023-05-10 15:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2585697367 emaiemilova https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2587028196 2023-05-11 11:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2587028196 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2587035685 2023-05-11 11:16:25 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2587035685 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2587037017 2023-05-11 11:17:31 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2587037017 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2587852976 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mOd_qgBAd_BKf44gB_77Zq1q6Ap68v7_yhz2mFMM_PY/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2023-05-11 23:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2587852976 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2588437815 2023-05-12 08:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2588437815 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2588499629 2023-05-12 10:00:56 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2588499629 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2588499846 2023-05-12 10:01:07 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2588499846 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2588501024 Charity: KIKA (Children cancer)

The Children Cancer Free Foundation has been working since 2002 on a 100% cure for childhood cancer.

Almost 600 children in the Netherlands get cancer every year. Currently, 81% of these children are cured.

Stunt: We organize an one day event for sick children who want to experience their passions and clear up their minds. We will make a youtube video out of this to not only make their days, but also create awareness and publicity for the company. Which hopefully leads to more donations. We will take the children to Efteling, the park of your dreams. 

We will make a deal with efteling where we get a discount for the children, as our youtube video will also give them publicity, the tickets will go from 38 euros to 20, and there are 600 children, so 600 times 20 is 12.000. We will also manage to strike a deal for public transport. 

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~PR Putas (Fleur, Luna & Vivi)]]> 2023-06-01 19:58:48 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2612170567 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2612281082 We wanted to make a satirical fake documentary that was true to us and our sense of humor. Apologies in advance for the tough watch. - A Bunch’a Pitches]]> 2023-06-01 23:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2612281082 https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2612744245 (Ema, Darina, Nesrin, Daria)

https://youtu.be/CRpCAg6mndU]]> 2023-06-02 08:18:47 UTC https://padlet.com/r_yunitasitorus/ram6honq74f04zj/wish/2612744245