Parkour Civilization (Evbo) by JOHN MCKINLEY

the call of adventure

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:28:34 UTC

the main character lives in an area where he has to parkour everywhere he goes. and his dream is making it to the where the parkour pros live

refusal to the call

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:31:03 UTC

in parkour civilization, the beef would give more than enough food for the day, but it's harder to get but the chicken is easier but it replenishes less . Evbo (the main character) refuses to jump for the beef because he "doesn't want to die a horrible death by falling in the void". (he is a little baby who will never amount to anything in life)

supernatural aid

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:42:26 UTC

Evbo cheats in the contest to get permission to the tower by bribing the pro to place another block down to make the parkour easier

crossing the first threshold

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:43:11 UTC

Evbo is now officially allowed into the tower. He tries to make it up but messes up a jump and falls into the void.

the belly of the "whale" (prison)

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:43:29 UTC

evbo is locked in prison where every 30 seconds he has to jump to a new block or else he will be killed by the pros.

the road of trials

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:44:05 UTC

Evbo tries to escape the prison, but has to do all sorts of parkour to get out of it. He is able to give him free time so he can find a way to escape.

atonement with the father

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:46:02 UTC

If Evbo escapes the prison he will never be able to rank up to reach the parkour pro level. He can either return and never become a pro, or wait out the rest of his 49 years in prison.

apotheosis

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:46:11 UTC

Evbo decides to return to parkour civilization only to find out that everything he owned was bought by some one else. Only for him to fall and now Evbo has to rebuy the house.

the ultimate goon

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 15:46:23 UTC

Evbo returns to his normal life in parkour civilization. but he find out that the painting has a secret room behind it with an old man in it. The old man tells him he can find a ticket to rank up.

the meeting of the "goddess" (portal)

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-19 19:00:47 UTC

The guard that he bribed to get free time from, helps him escape through the portal.

The end

blaisg2025 — 2024-11-21 18:22:50 UTC

It's over now, you can go

peter griffin jumpscare

mckinleyj2028 — 2024-11-21 18:42:33 UTC

hehehehehehe