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Bakso Nuklir

In addition, Gemini also suggested starting the presentation with a short, emotional story, adding interesting data about snake fruit or the local market, including supporting visuals, and ending with a call to action such as trying the product or visiting the website.

From my business presentation practice with gemini it went very well. I presented my idea for a piggy bank from used cans and gemini said my presentation was good, I also conveyed the idea clearly and enthusiastically. My closing sentence also invited the audience to act, overall my presentation was quite good and just needed a little more practice to be a little more confident

My pronunciation was generally clear, and I was easy to understand. I articulated most of my words well, which is crucial for a presentation.

For intonation, I did a great job varying my pitch and pace. This kept the presentation from sounding monotone and helped hold my attention. I spoke with enthusiasm, especially when talking about the delicious taste and affordable prices, which really helped convey my passion for Kedai Thunder. There were a couple of spots where the flow felt a tiny bit rushed, but overall, my speaking rhythm was effective.

The content of my presentation was well-structured and hit all the important points.

I delivered a confident and persuasive presentation. I effectively conveyed the appeal of Kedai Thunder and made it sound like a very desirable option for campus food.

Overall, my presentation was clear and full of energy. With this feedback, I know what to improve and feel more confident to present "Candle Lighter" better next time.

Okay, I noticed you looked away from the camera quite a bit during your presentation. Making eye contact with your audience helps keep them engaged. Also, be mindful of your pacing you rushed a little at the beginning. Taking a breath between sentences can help you slow down. Overall, you're doing great!

I feel much more prepared. The feedback was incredibly helpful. Gemini confirmed that my delivery was clear and passionate, especially when explaining the benefits of Bakso Nuclear. My hand gestures were also noted as natural, which is great for engagement. For improvement, I need to focus on managing my speaking pace so it's not too fast in certain sections, and slightly varying my intonation to keep the audience engaged. I'll also pay closer attention to the articulation of some words to ensure they sound clearer.

Overall, my pronunciation was clear, but I was advised to pay closer attention to the pronunciation of English words, especially those that are similar to Indonesian words.

Gemini also helped me generate ideas for community workshops related to my business, making them more engaging and impactful.

In my opinion, Gemini has been very helpful for practicing presentations and improving my use of proper English.

Your presentation on "Laptop Buddy" was truly outstanding in identifying and offering clever solutions to the common laptop access challenges students face. You successfully presented this idea with clear and easy-to-understand language, directly addressing pain points like sudden laptop breakdowns or the need for specialized equipment.

The main strength of your presentation lies in emphasizing the ease and flexibility "Laptop Buddy" offers—a breath of fresh air for student budgets. By highlighting that we handle all repairs and there are no long-term commitments, you effectively eliminate the biggest worries for potential users.

To make this presentation even more impactful and convincing, it's crucial to anticipate potential questions and further emphasize our core values. Consider reinforcing how "Laptop Buddy" is more than just a rental service; it's a true study partner that supports productivity without the burden. You can highlight how every detail is designed for student convenience, from the simple ordering process to flexible pick-up and delivery options.

Furthermore, provide a clear and specific call to action, inviting your audience to imagine how "Laptop Buddy" will transform their learning experience. This isn't just about renting; it's about a smart solution for an easier, stress-free student life.

Thus, your presentation will not only inform but also inspire and convince that "Laptop Buddy" is the answer to the modern student's laptop needs.

" Canned saving tool"

Presentation : Social

Media Content

Business || “Rujak Pak Kapur”

Local Community Shop "Nasi Campur JL Tunjung"

Get ready for a new way to eat

“Prasmanan KyKy”

“Disco Choco Bananas”

Campus Food Business

-BAKSO NUKLIR-

A simple reflection on how Americans treat time seriously at work, and how it’s different from Indonesian business values.

American business culture focuses on individual achievement, efficiency, and speed. Direct and to the point negotiations are very common.

work, communicate, and define success.

Business Culture : Work-Life Balance

Explanation :

The Netherlands is known for its strong emphasis on work-life balance, prioritizing personal time and family commitments alongside professional life.

1. Pengucapan kata "Netherlands" harus dilatih agar terdengar lebih natural.

2. Penggunaan bahasa yang lebih variatif.

3. Jeda saat presentasi agar audiens mendapatkan informasi yang kita sampaikan.

4. Kontak mata dan bahasa tubuh (hand gesture and expresion) harus lebih ditingkatkan lagi.

Berlatih bersama Gemini sangat menyenangkan dan dapat membantu saya mengimprove presentasi saya dengan baik.

Feedback on my Presentation on Thai Business Culture (Gift Giving)

Here are some suggestions:

1. Pronunciation: Pay attention to the pronunciation of the word "relationship" to make sure it sounds clearer.

2. Grammar: Please review the use of "gift" and "gifts" to make sure they fit the context of the sentence.

You're doing great! Your pacing is good and your pronunciation is clear. I noticed you stumbled a bit on the word "guanxi" earlier, but you're pronouncing it perfectly now. Your intonation is also good, but I'd suggest varying your pitch a bit more to keep the audience engaged.

My pronunciation was clear throughout, making it easy to understand my points about business culture in the Middle East. I also maintained a good, steady pace, which allowed my audience to follow along without feeling rushed. My eye contact was consistent, which helped to project confidence and engage my listeners.

While my gestures were minimal, they were effective when I used them, like to emphasize "building connections." For future presentations, I might consider incorporating a few more natural gestures to further illustrate my points and add dynamism. Overall, I delivered a confident and well-structured presentation.

For example:

Decision should be pronounced “di-si-zhen,” not “desision.”

Solving sounded like “solfing,” but it should be “sol-ving.”

I’ll keep this feedback in mind for my next practice.

Some feedback given by Gemini:

1. Maintain eye contact with the audience and use hand gestures.

2. Pay attention to your tone and volume so you sound more dynamic.

Your pronunciation was clear throughout, making it easy to understand your points about business culture in the Middle East. You also maintained a good, steady pace, which allowed your audience to follow along without feeling rushed. Your eye contact was consistent, which helped to project confidence and engage your listeners.

While your gestures were minimal, they were effective when you used them, like to emphasize "building connections." For future presentations, you might consider incorporating a few more natural gestures to further illustrate your points and add dynamism. Overall, you delivered a confident and well-structured presentation.

feedback on my presentation :

1. isi dari konten presentasi : Baik, pemahaman Anda tentang hierarki dalam bisnis Jepang sudah cukup baik. Pemaparan Anda juga jelas dan terstruktur.

2. pronounciation : Baik, secara umum, pelafalan Anda sudah cukup jelas. Namun, ada beberapa kata yang terdengar kurang jelas, seperti "hierarchy" dan "adjusting".

3. intonation : Intonasi Anda pun terdengar datar di beberapa bagian. Cobalah untuk memberi penekanan pada kata-kata kunci agar presentasi Anda terdengar lebih menarik.

4. gesture : Gesture Anda juga minim, coba gunakan lebih banyak gerakan tangan untuk

Feedback from gemini :

Great job! You spoke clearly and at a good pace. Your pronunciation was excellent, and you sounded confident. You explained the concept of “time is money” and how it affects American business culture effectively, and the comparison to Indonesia business culture insightful. Well done!

Overall, it was a good presentation. To improve, make more eye contact, vary your vocal tone, and add more concrete examples.

You have a good understanding of the topic, and you speak clearly. To make it even better, consider adding a few more details or examples to really bring those cultural differences to life. Maybe a specific story or two would help illustrate your points.

You've highlighted some key differences between Australian and Indonesian business cultures, especially regarding hierarchy and formality. Your pronunciation is clear, and your pace is good. If you'd like, you could add some specific examples to illustrate these differences further. That's a good overview of egalitarian business culture in Australia. You spoke clearly and at a good pace. One small suggestion would be to just watch out for filler words like "um" and "uh," but overall, you did a great job!

Okay, that was a great presentation! You explained the win-win concept really clearly, and your examples were spot on. You also spoke with confidence and enthusiasm.

One small suggestion could be to add a brief conclusion at the end, summarizing the key takeaways.

Overall, great job!

So give me many feedback & suggestions

Feedback from Gemini:

Overall its a good presentation for business culture in UAE

,the content is good. Your pronunciation is clear, and your pace is good. If you'd like, you could add some specific examples

You spoke clearly and good pace. One small suggestion would be to just watch out for filler words like "um" and "uh," but overall, you did a great job!

that's a great point about prioritizing personal sacrifice versus teamwork. You're explaining the nuances of these cultural differences really well. You grammar was good overall, and your pronunciation was clear. The content was informative and engaging. You spoke confidently and maintained good eye contact. To improve, you could vary your sentence structure and intonation a bit more. Also, remember to avoid filler words like "um" and "uh." Overall, it was a strong presentation!

Feedback : The presentation was good and clearly delivered, showing a strong understanding of the topic. However, it would be even better if you added concrete examples of how the ‘art of argument’ is applied in French business culture. This would help the audience better understand the context. Additionally, maintaining eye contact during the presentation is important to build a connection with the audience and keep them engaged.

business culture from US

NEGOTIATION AS A DANCE BUSINESS CULTURE IN THE MIDDLE EAST

Topic Business Culture

Gift Giving from Thailand

Okay, that's a good overview of Australian business culture! You've highlighted the key aspects of direct communication and a relaxed atmosphere. Now, would you like to focus on specific areas for improvement, like your pronunciation of certain words or phrases, or perhaps the flow and structure of your presentation?

Okay, based on your presentation, your pronunciation is clear, and you speak at a good pace. You sound confident, and your enthusiasm for the topic is evident. Your explanation of the direct and laid-back aspects of Australian business culture is concise and easy to understand.

1. Okay, you've got a good flow going! Your pronunciation is clear, and you're varying your intonation nicely, which keeps it engaging.

Now, let's look at the content. You mentioned Howard Schultz's focus on social responsibility. Can you give an example of a specific initiative he championed?

2. One small suggestion – in the phrase "visionary leadership," be sure to pronounce both syllables of "visionary" clearly. It might sound like "vish-nerry" if you say it too quickly.

1. That's a great start! You're speaking clearly and with good energy. I noticed you pronounced "synonymous" as "sinonimous." It's pronounced "suh-non-uh-muss." Also, "embark" is pronounced "em-bark," not "embrek." Keep going, you're doing well!

2. You're doing great! Your vocabulary and grammar are strong, and you're pronouncing most words correctly. Just a few minor things: "grappled" is pronounced "grappled," not "grappled," and "testament" is pronounced "testament," not "testament." Also, "authentic city" should be "authenticity." You're speaking clearly and confidently, and your passion for the subject comes through.

Okay, you've got a good foundation! You speak clearly and your pace is steady. To make it even better, try to vary your intonation a bit more to keep the audience engaged. Also, remember to maintain eye contact with the camera and use natural hand gestures. You're doing great!

pronunciation was clear, and you spoke at a good pace. To make it even better, try to maintain eye contact with the camera. Also, remember to fully pronounce words like "challenges" and "difficult." Overall, you did a great job!

1. Okay, I'm ready to give you some feedback. Overall, your presentation is clear and easy to understand. Your pace is good, and you speak confidently. I noticed that you pronounced "Fore Coffee" as "For-ay Coffee." It's actually pronounced "Four Coffee," like the number four.

2. Okay, a couple of things to note here. You pronounced "challenges" as "cherelenges" and "remarkable" as "rememberable." Also, be careful not to rush when you speak – pausing occasionally will help you sound more confident. Overall, you're doing great!

Found many errors about my vocabulary and pronunciation. For example I am using some good words, but a few need slight tweaks. It's "magnate," not "magnet," and "entrepreneurial," not "enterpreneurial." Also, "giant" is pronounced like the word for a big person, not like "guy-ant."

Overall, you did a good job! Your pronunciation was clear, but there were a few spots where it sounded a bit rushed. Slowing down a little might help. As for grammar, there were a few minor things that could be tweaked to make your sentences flow even better.

Okay, In the first part, when you said, 'Ratna Lawasi is a passionate Balinese dancer and the founder of the Nitri Grahasiwiantari Studio,' try changing 'the' before 'founder' to 'an.' Then, in another part, you said, 'In a world full of new modern trends, they often drive away from their own tradition.' The word 'they' there is a bit unclear because before that, we were talking about Ratna Lawasi. Try replacing 'they' with 'young people' or 'the younger generation' to make it clearer."

"Overall, your presentation was excellent! You delivered the information clearly and enthusiastically, and your intonation sounded confident.

Some minor points to note: for example, in the "this toast challenge" section, perhaps you meant "toughest challenge"? And in the final section, "strong will work out well," it might be more accurate to say "strong will worked out well" or "strong will works out well."

But overall, your presentation was excellent!"

You did a good job overall! Your pacing was good, and you spoke clearly, which are both crucial for a presentation. You maintained eye contact, which helps engage your audience.

Here's a summary of the feedback on your grammar and pronunciation:

* "inspired for many young business people" could be "an inspiration to many young business people."

* "her biggest challenge is growing up in the public eye, same childhood" could be improved to "her biggest challenge has been growing up in the public eye since childhood."

* "being determinate and working hard bring great results" should be "being determined and working hard brings great results."

You were quick to incorporate the feedback, which is a great sign of your adaptability. Keep practicing those specific phrases, and you'll sound even more polished!

To make it even better, you could add a strong concluding sentence to summarize the key takeaways for the audience. Also, be mindful of filler words like "uh" and "um."

Well, you've got a good handle on the key points of Jack Ma's story. You mentioned his founding of Alibaba, his early struggles, and his eventual success, which is great. To make it even better, you could add some specific examples. Maybe a quick story about a challenge he overcame or a particular achievement that highlights his impact on the business world. Also, varying your tone a bit more would keep the audience engaged. And Your grammar was mostly clear and easy to follow. There were a few spots where the verb tense could be tweaked. For example, instead of saying "Ma faced enormous rejection," you could say "Ma faced enormous rejections" to match the plural subject. Also, in the sentence "Jack Ma successful overcome these various challenges," it should be "Jack Ma successfully overcame these various challenges" to use the adverb form and correct tense.

doing well with pacing and  pronunciation is clear. noticed that i said "Indonesia's most well-known public figure." You might want to say "one of Indonesia's most well-known public figures" instead. Also, add some hand gestures to emphasize points. When i am mentioned his hard work, gemini said could give specific examples of his achievements to make it more impactful.

* Pacing: You spoke a bit quickly, which made it a little difficult to follow all the details. Speaking at a slightly slower, more deliberate pace would allow your audience to better absorb the information and appreciate the inspiring story you're telling.

* Clarity: It wasn't always clear who the main character was. Using her name, Sukasih, more consistently would help the audience connect with her journey. Also, the name of her company, PT Global, was mentioned a few times, but it wasn't clear if it was the same as PT Cipta. Clarifying that relationship would make the story easier to follow.

* Structure: Your presentation had a strong beginning, introducing the main character and her initial struggles. To make it even more impactful, you could have organized the information more chronologically. For example, you could start with her challenges (limited capital, remote location), then describe how she overcame them, and finally talk about her success (international recognition and exporting to different markets).

Your passion for the subject came through, and that's a great asset for any presenter. With a few adjustments, your presentation will be even more engaging and effective.

(Andrew Susanto)

Topic “Challange and Accomplishments”

Overall, the presentation I did was good and easy to understand. The pronunciation was clear and the grammar was also good. There were only a few words that might be changed to make them sound more natural in Indonesian.

1. In the sentence "This struggle pushed her hard to learn by herself," it can be changed to "This struggle motivated her to learn independently."

2. In the sentence "Rachel Vennya keep growing and become a role model for young people" it can be changed to "Rachel Vennya continues to grow and becomes a role model for the younger generation."

In Finnish business culture, silence is not a sign of awkwardness it is a sign of respect and thoughtful communication. During meetings, Finnish people often pause before responding to reflect deeply on what was said. They believe in speaking only when there is something meaningful to add, rather than talking for the sake of appearing active. This creates a calm and focused environment where every voice is valued, even in silence. Unlike in some Western cultures where constant conversation is expected, in Finland, silence shows professionalism, respect, and strong listening skills. Understanding this helps avoid misunderstandings and shows cultural sensitivity in global business settings.

You've got a good handle on the core concept of silence in Finnish business culture. To really drive that point home, consider adding a specific example. Maybe a short story about a time when silence was misinterpreted in a meeting, or a quote from a Finnish businessperson about the importance of silence. This will make it more relatable for your audience.

Okay, focusing on pronunciation, I noticed a few spots where we can polish things up. For instance, in "challenges," ensure you clearly pronounce the "ch" sound at the beginning. Also, in "accomplishments," pay attention to the "plish" sound. Okay, let's talk about grammar. In the phrase "most perform woman," it should be "most powerful woman." Also, "working barrier" should be "breaking barriers."

Firgun : Kadek Indra Yoni (Indra Beauty Care)

“Business Culture in UAE”

Opening: "Felicya Angelista, founder of Scarlett, navigated challenges and found success in her business journey."

Key Obstacles: "Finding reliable suppliers, ensuring consistent quality, and competitive pricing were early hurdles."

Brand Building: "Another key challenge was building a strong brand."

Greatest Reward: "Ultimately, seeing Scarlett satisfy millions of customers and lead the Indonesian beauty market was her greatest reward."

Okay, that's a great start! You're speaking clearly and with good volume. Focusing on your intonation, try varying your pitch a bit more to emphasize key words and phrases. This will make your presentation even more engaging.

Okay, let's focus on pronunciation. I noticed a few spots where we can fine-tune. For example, in "Future Career goals," make sure to clearly pronounce each syllable. It's "Fut-ture Car-eer-goals." Also, in "export," emphasize the "ex" part – "EX-port."

Feedbacks from gemini :

1. Language is clearly and already easy to understand

2. The intonation is good enough

3. More practice for more fluent speaking

“Your presentation is already very strong and shows rapid progress, especially due to your confident delivery and clear flow. To perfect it, you just need to continue focusing on practicing the pronunciation of a few technical English terms to make them sound more natural.”

This is the feedback i get after doing practice with Gemini: "To make it even better, try varying your intonation a bit to keep the audience engaged. Also, while you maintain eye contact, remember to occasionally glance away to simulate looking at different people in a real audience. Your hand gestures are good, but try to keep them a little more fluid and less repetitive. practice with Gemin

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That’s a great plan! Your Pronouciation was clear and your grammar was good. You spoke at a good pace, making it easy to understand your goals. Your hand gestures were natural and helped emphasize your points. Overall, you presented your future career goals very effectively!

That was a great first run! Your presentation was well structured and your career goals are very clear. You have a solid plan to gain skills and experience both locally and globally. For some areas to refine, let's look at a few things: First, your pronunciation of "entrepreneur" could be a bit clearer it's pronounced "on-truh-pre-nur." Second, to enhance your vocabulary, you could use a stronger term like "robust" instead of "solid" when describing your "foundation." Lastly, for grammar, consider rephrasing "following days" to "afterward" or "following this" for a smoother transition. Overall, you have a strong presentation, and with a few minor tweaks, it will be excellent.

My experience using Gemini was very enjoyable. Gemini helped me in detail, from text, pronunciation, and grammar. It made my learning process much easier and more structured. I like how clear and supportive the explanations were, which really boosted my confidence in using English. I am very grateful to Gemini for guiding me patiently and providing such useful feedback. Overall, it has been a positive and meaningful experience for my learning journey.

Instead of saying "di bidang ini" (in this field), you can use "di industri ini" (in this industry) or "di area ini" (in this area) for a more professional impression.

And the point about connecting local Indonesian products globally is very strong because you can add a specific example of a product or industry you are passionate about to truly reinforce that point.

For your pronunciation, there are just a few small things to work on. For example, in the phrase “gain as much knowledge” try to pronounce each word more clearly, especially the word “knowledge,” so it doesn’t sound slurred. In “practical experience,” make sure the “a” in “practical” is clear, and start “experience” with a strong “ee” sound. Also, in “business management,” try to make each word distinct, particularly the “u” in “business.” These little adjustments will make your delivery sound even smoother.

As for your gestures, they were natural and definitely supported your points, which made your presentation more lively. You used them with purpose, and that was effective. The only thing to improve is the speed of your hand movements sometimes they were a little too quick. If you slow them down just a bit, your gestures will have even more impact.

I received quite positive feedback. According to Gemini, my presentation was good, with clear pronunciation, correct grammar, and proper intonation. However, he also gave a small suggestion about the pronunciation of the word productivity at the end of the presentation. The word should be pronounced with the stress on the third syllable, pro-duk-ti-vi-ti.

2. that second sentence again. Focus on clearly pronouncing each word, especially "develop" and "innovative." Remember, clear pronunciation is key!

You’ve got a great vision for your future! To make your writing flow more smoothly, try using “Thus” or “Therefore” instead of “This” when connecting ideas. Also, it’s clearer to say “overseas collaboration opportunities” rather than “seek international collaboration opportunities.” Your passion for your goals really comes through, and that will definitely inspire others!

Okay, this is coming along nicely! Your enthusiasm is clear, and you've got a solid plan. To make it even better, let's look at your pronunciation of a few words. It's "licensing", not "linsensing", and "strategies", not "strategics".

Okay, let's talk about your grammar and pronunciation. Overall, you did a good job, but there were a few spots where we can make some improvements. For example, instead of saying "helping them market their excellent to products the international community", try saying "helping them market their excellent products to the international community." Also, remember to pronounce "licensing" correctly. It's "licensing", not "linsensing".

And let's talk about the content of your presentation. You've got a solid vision for your future career goals, especially your focus on exporting local handicrafts and food products. It's clear you're passionate about sharing Indonesian culture with the world. Now, to make it even more impactful, consider adding specific examples of the handicrafts and food products you'd like to export. This will give your audience a clearer picture of your vision and make it more engaging.

Your presentation has a good structure and a clear plan. However, there are a few things you can improve to make it even stronger.

Pronunciation: Your pronunciation is quite clear, but you could focus on a few words that might be difficult to say, such as "strategic" or "specialize." Practicing the pronunciation of these words will make you sound more professional.

Gesture: You already use your hands to emphasize points, which is good. To improve further, try to be more varied. Use bigger hand movements when talking about your big dream, and more controlled movements when explaining details.

Delivery: Your speaking pace is good, but you could try raising your voice volume during the most important parts, such as when you talk about building your own company. This will help your audience feel your passion. Also, be sure to take short pauses between key points to give your audience time to process the information.

Of course, here is the corrected summary in English.

Concise Presentation Feedback

Here are three key points to improve your presentation:

* Grammar: Use "My goals are" instead of "My goals is."

* Wording: Change "penetrate for crowd" to "penetrate the international market."

* Intonation: Practice lowering your voice at the end of sentences to sound more confident and assertive.

(Final Video)

My Future Career Goals

overall, my presentation is good, but to make it even better, you can focus on pronouncing words like "administration" and "management," and ensuring proper grammar, such as using "career" instead of "carry" to enhance your professional impression.

"my future career goals"