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      <title>Food Mart and Shopalot by Karen&#39;s class</title>
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      <pubDate>2018-08-29 05:29:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>KAI   Irwin</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Figure 1 shows the total sales of fresh produce at Food Mart and Shopalot from 2006 to 2016,according to a report published by Global Industry Analysts(2017).<br><br>The sales of fresh produce at <mark>food mark (Food Mart)</mark> <mark>shows&nbsp; (vt) </mark>a dramatic downward trend from 2006 to 2010,<mark>then (and then) it (?)</mark>demonstrated a <mark>significantly&nbsp; (wf) </mark>rise after 2010. The sales at <mark>s</mark>hopalot <mark>appears (??? Intransitive - no object....) </mark>a slight rising trend with a frequent fluctuation.&nbsp; &nbsp; <mark>There were many fluctuations in sales figures over the period.</mark><br><br>From 2007 to 2008, both <mark>them (both of) </mark>experienced a dramatic <mark>decrease (in sales)</mark>. The sales at Food Mart dropped by $8000 to approximately $6000,and at Shopalot,there was a drop in sales from $12000 to $9000.<br><br>Before 2008, the sales at Food Mart were higher than those at Shopalot. However,<mark>they intersected at a point.( sales for both retailers were similar in 2007)</mark> Then the sales at Shopalot exceeded those at Food Mart.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div><br><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-08-29 23:13:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wayne Jackie</title>
         <author>towwayneg0924</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/r7ev8xfeeldi/wish/276426738</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>Figure 1 shows <mark>that (delete) </mark>total sales of fresh produce at Food Mart and Shopalot from 2006 to 2016, according to a report published by Global Industry Analysts (2017).<br><br><mark>There was a large gap between two distinct groups.</mark> (??)The sales of Food Mart <mark>was(SVA) </mark>higher than <mark>another at first year</mark>, (at the beginning of the period) whereas  <mark>that </mark>of Shopalot <mark>was </mark>larger at the end. <br><br>It was clear that there was a sharp decrease in Food Mart sales from about 14000 to 5000 <mark>during (during the three years) </mark>3 years, and hit  a low in 2010. In addition, its sales of fresh produce  were exceeded by those of Shopalot in 2007. The profit  of  fresh goods <mark>sellings (delete) </mark>grew significantly between 2010 and 2012 , <mark>at</mark> (to) about 10000. In the last years, the <mark>trend of them (sales) </mark>stabilized till 2016.<br><br>The  <mark>figure of fresh food sales</mark> (The sales figures for ???)bottomed out about 9000 in 2008 and reached <mark>the (a)</mark>peak at 14000 in 2010. Furthermore, <br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-08-29 23:13:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hongyuan  Nicole</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/r7ev8xfeeldi/wish/276426742</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Figure 1 shows the total sales of fresh produce at Food Mart and Shopalot from 2006 to 2016, according to a report published by Global Industry Analysts. Overall , total sales of fresh produce decreased at Food Mart between 2006 and 2016 ,while there was an upward trend at Shopalot in the same period.&nbsp; From 2006 to 2008,&nbsp; whereas sales of fresh produce at Food Mart&nbsp; declined dramatically by 8000 $AUD,&nbsp; there was a slight fluctuation at Shopalot. <mark>Through these changes (However)</mark>,&nbsp; sales of&nbsp; both were the same (11000)&nbsp; in 2007. After that period,&nbsp; sales of fresh produce at Food Mart increased rapidly,&nbsp; <mark>even though</mark> <mark>they hit</mark> (rapidly, hitting) the bottom at nearly 5000 dollars in 2010 and <mark>they kept stable (then remaining relatively stable) </mark>from 2012 to 2016. However, sales at Shopalot <mark>climbed (..climbed, reaching a peak) </mark>a peak <mark>point (delete) </mark>at <mark>1400 </mark>$AUD <mark>in (new sentence ??)</mark>2010, the sales finally <mark>grown </mark>at 1300 dollars in 2016 after a moderate fluctuation.<br><mark>To conclude,&nbsp; the&nbsp; total sales of fresh produce at Food Mart&nbsp; decreased , while&nbsp; total sales at&nbsp; Shopalot rose marginally . </mark>(not necessary - already wrote an overall statement)<mark><br></mark><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-08-29 23:13:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jiawen &amp; Rui</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/r7ev8xfeeldi/wish/276426758</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>In general, the fresh produce sales at <mark>f</mark>ood <mark>m</mark>art (capital letter) illustrated a downward trend, compared with the upward trend of those at <mark>s</mark>hopalot. <br>In the inital two years, fresh produce sales at <mark>f</mark>ood <mark>m</mark>art were higher than those at <mark>s</mark>hopalot. In 2008, those at <mark>f</mark>ood <mark>m</mark>art decreased dramatically. At the same time, those at <mark>s</mark>hopalot also had a slight drop and <mark>overtaked </mark>those <mark>of f</mark>ood (at Food Mart) mart.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-08-29 23:13:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Doris Sarah</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/r7ev8xfeeldi/wish/276426768</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>In general, fresh produce sales at <mark>food mart&nbsp; (capital letter Food Mart) </mark>experienced a downward trend from 2006 to 2016, while <mark>that (those) </mark>at <mark>s</mark>hopalot underwent a upward trend during <mark>10 (the ten) </mark>years.<br>There was a silght decrease in fresh produce sales at Food Mart between 2006 and 2007. In contrast ,fresh produce sales at shopalot increased <mark>singinificantlly (sp)</mark>.Then,the period from 2007 to 2008 saw <mark>dramatic a drop</mark> (a dramatic drop) in fresh produce sales at Food Mart and <mark>s</mark>hopalot, decreasing <mark>to (by ??) </mark>8000 and 2000 respectively. <mark>Subsequntely (sp)</mark>, figures for Food Mart fell <mark>considerabely </mark>from 2008 to 2010, <mark>which reached (reaching...) </mark>the bottom at almost 4000 $AUD. However, there was a great rise in fresh produce sales at <mark>s</mark>hopalot,<mark>which reached (reaching)</mark> the highest point at 14000 $AUD in 2010.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-08-29 23:14:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Irene Monica</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Figure 1 shows the total sales of fresh produce at Food Mart and Shopalot from 2006 to 2016,according to a report published by Global Industry Analysts(2017).<br><mark>Obviously</mark>, <strong>(Overall)</strong>&nbsp; between 2006 and 2010, the proportion of expenditure of fresh food of food mart rapidly diminished from almost <mark>14000 dollars to 6000 dollars.</mark> <strong>(Don't need actual figures when writing the overall statement)</strong>...Meanwhile, in 2010 the <del>data of </del>fresh&nbsp; produce sales of <mark>food mart</mark> <strong>(Capital letter needed for the name of a company) </strong>hit its bottom <del>with </del><strong>&nbsp;at </strong>approximately 5000 dollars. <mark>While from 2010 to 2016, generally the expenditure of fresh production of food mart slightly show an upward trend.</mark> <strong>(only half a sentence) </strong>What is more in 2007 the fresh produce sales of <mark>food mart and shopalot</mark> <strong>&nbsp;Capital letters) </strong>were <mark>simila</mark> <strong>(sp) </strong>11000 dollars, respectively.<br>As can be seen from the line graph, the total sales of fresh produce at Shopalot experienced a obvious fluctuation between 2006 and 2016.Initially,there was a slight increase from 10000 dollars to 12000 dollars in the sales of fresh produce at Shopalot from 2006 to 2007. In the next year,the sales of fresh produce at Shopalot declined modestly from 12000 dollars to about 9000 dollars,which was followed by a significant increase from almost 9000 dollars in 2008 to 14000 dollars in 2010.&nbsp; Meanwhile, there was an opposite trend between the sales of fresh produce at Food Mart and Shopalot.From then on,the next six years from 2010 to 2016 witnessed a slight fluctuation from 14000 dollars to 13000 dollars In the sales of fresh produce at Shopalot.&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-08-29 23:14:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>An</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/r7ev8xfeeldi/wish/276426781</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>In 2006, Food Mart <mark>has (vt) </mark>much higher sales , but at the end of 2016, the sales in Shopalot <mark>come </mark>from behind and the difference between them became narrow.<br>The sales of fresh produce at Food Mart <mark>reached the (a) peak (...were at their highest)</mark> in 2006,which <mark>was (SVA) </mark>about 14000$AUD, then <mark>the (delete) </mark>Food Mart experienced a dramatic fall from 2007 to 2008, <mark>and along with the trend, they&nbsp; (delete) hit(ting) </mark>the lowest point<mark>,</mark> which <mark>was </mark>about 4700$AUD in 2010. After that, the sales increased <mark>slightly (? steadily) </mark>and they appeared to be steady from 2012.<br>The overall trend of sales of fresh produce at Shopalot fluctuated considerably. Initially, the sales of Shopalot <mark>was (SVA) </mark>10000$AUD in 2006, and they <mark>kept growth</mark> (exp)before 2007. From 2007 to 2008, the sales dropped greatly, and they bottomed out <mark>which was (delete...at)</mark> about 9300 $AUD</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-08-29 23:14:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aurora  Amber</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/r7ev8xfeeldi/wish/276427024</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Figure 1 shows the total sales of fresh produce at Food Mart and Shopalot from 2006 to 2016,according to a report published by Global Industry Analysts (2007).<br><br>In general, the decade from 2006 to 2016 witnessed a decrease <mark>of (ww)</mark>fresh produce <mark>sale(sp) of (at) f</mark>ood <mark>m</mark>art (capital letter) with dramatic <mark>fluctuationn (S</mark>. At the same time, the <mark>s</mark>hopalot sales showed a slight increase .<br><br>There are some similarities between <mark>f</mark>ood mart and <mark>s</mark>hopalot from 2007 to 2008. The sales of these two groups declined <mark>significantl</mark>. For <mark>f</mark>ood <mark>m</mark>art, the quantity of sales dropped from about 13500 to 6000 and&nbsp; the amount of shopalot sales dipped from 12000 to about 9000 respectively and the next year, the two types of sales were the same .</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-08-29 23:16:14 UTC</pubDate>
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