https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0 Sharing appositives/appositive phrases with other tribes. en-us 2016-11-10 13:46:27 UTC 2025-11-18 01:52:27 UTC hello@padlet.com nicholas_bell2 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136714415 1. The zombie, a walking carcass that was once a man, creeped slowly across the street.
2. A walking carcass that was once a man, the zombie creeped slowly across the street.
3. The peacefulness of the street was interrupted by a zombie, a walking carcass that was once a man.]]> 2016-11-10 13:48:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136714415 nicholas_bell2 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136780567 I like Mr. Bell's third sentences most because at first everything was fine, but then, the peaceful scene is subverted with gruesome imagery.]]> 2016-11-10 16:08:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136780567 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812037 1). My sister, Michelle, enjoys riding her horse, Camille, through the forest by her house. 
2). Michelle, my sister, enjoys riding her horse, Camille, through the forest by our house.
3). The calmness of riding her horse, Camille, through the forest by our house was disturbed by my sister, Michelle. ]]> 2016-11-10 17:22:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812037 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812079 1. Cookies, warm dough with chocolate chips, baked on the oven.
2. The warm dough with chocolate chips, the cookies baked in the oven.
3. Baking in the oven were cookies, warm dough filled with chocolate chips.]]> 2016-11-10 17:23:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812079 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812310 1).Erik, the nice guy likes to take care of his grandma, Sussy.
2).My brother, David enjoys watching sports with his best friend, Josh.
3).Josh and his best friend, Alex practice basketball together.]]> 2016-11-10 17:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812310 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812530 1). My brother's favorite horse, Arlo, is the fastest on the ranch. 
2). Sunset, my favorite horse, is much slower, but she is an amazing jumper.
3). My mother was jealous of our horses, so she bought her own, Mary-Beth.]]> 2016-11-10 17:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812530 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812538 1.  The psychopath, a murderer roaming the streets, stalked his next victim to her house.
2. A stalking psychopath who was once normal, carefully thought out his evil scheme.
3. The scheme roamed through his head, a previous killer who now wanted a burrito. ]]> 2016-11-10 17:24:16 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812538 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812574 example 1: Hayden, Mrs. Basham's worst enemy, never stops yelling.]]> 2016-11-10 17:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136812574 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136814881 1). Hayden,  Mrs. Basham's worst enemy, never stops yelling.
2). Mrs. Basham's worst enemy, Hayden never stops yelling.
3). The kid that never stops yelling is Hayden, Mrs. Basham's worst enemy.]]> 2016-11-10 17:30:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136814881 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136816518 I like Jenna, Xiomyra, Hussien, Shaun's first sentence the most because the imagery of the warm cookies baking in the oven makes the sentences sound calm and peaceful.

]]> 2016-11-10 17:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136816518 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136817926 We like Mak,Karson, Ilam, and Hasan's second sentence the best, because it flows very nicely and creates beautiful imagery. ]]> 2016-11-10 17:37:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136817926 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136819136 I like the first sentence the because it showed full knowledge of being able to use the appositive phrases.]]> 2016-11-10 17:40:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136819136 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136819475 2016-11-10 17:41:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136819475 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136821191 We like the 2nd sentence because it implies that the psychopath was once a normal person before he started murdering.]]> 2016-11-10 17:45:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136821191 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136821547 instead of yelling, you should put arguing. Other than that its good.]]> 2016-11-10 17:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/r71r613f7ty0/wish/136821547