Growth Padlet by Hamza Asim

English - Romeo and Juliet

hamzaa1_wso — 2025-05-13 06:25:18 UTC

this was during our Romeo and Juliet topic and was during term 1

Romeo and Juliet

hamzaa1_wso — 2025-05-13 06:26:11 UTC

CFU. I developed analysing because i had to analyse the script and find hidden meanings

Poem CFU

hamzaa1_wso — 2025-05-13 06:27:18 UTC

i had developed analysing as i had to analyse the poem and try to back a staement i made about the poem by looking through the poema nd using lines and analying them to see techniques and more

DESCRIPTIVE coureswork

hamzaa1_wso — 2025-05-13 06:27:54 UTC

I couldve made it longer and done tip top pragraphs. I devolped hard working as i had to describe aalot with a small image and had to think about waht to write

NARRATIVE coursework

hamzaa1_wso — 2025-05-13 06:28:41 UTC

i couldve made the plot more realistic here and i did in the second draft I have developed creating by creating a very intruiging lpot anf lots of description

hamzaa1_wso — 2025-05-20 06:57:41 UTC

Narrative feedback targets: use punc properly, plot problems , more description

hamzaa1_wso — 2025-05-20 07:30:43 UTC

descriptive FEEDBACK. Targets : use more punc properly , not enough words , ambitious words needed