https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u Critiques! en-us 2019-12-09 03:09:39 UTC 2019-12-16 03:26:39 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f31f.png tiombe_green https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/421430592 2019-12-09 03:14:23 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/421430592 philip_nasisi1 https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/421450714 Glow- I liked how you kept relating this class to yourself such as mentioning your creativity when your on stage and your future aspiration to own a coffee shop one day.

Grows- I think you spoke a little too fast at times, just slow it down a bit more so people can really focus on what you have to say

Great Job Tiombe!
-Philip Nasisi]]> 2019-12-09 05:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/421450714 nina_danner https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/421759398 Glow: I think you are an excellent speaker. Your use of inflection was excellent. I appreciate how you talked about your personal life. I have anxiety, too. 
Grow: Some of the unrelated graphics were distracting. If it doesn't help your point, delete it.]]> 2019-12-09 18:07:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/421759398 marygrace_mcnamara https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/422237308 Glow: Your speaking skills are amazing. Good job staying clear in your speak instead of saying "um" and "like." Grow: Some pictures weren't as relevant as your dialogue. Overall, I loved it! Great job!]]> 2019-12-10 15:59:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/422237308 dylan_kleinfeldt https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/422559491 Glow- I loved the inflection in your voice as I can tell that you are confident in the presentation you are displaying!
Grow- I feel that some of the graphics that you put within your presentation didn't make sense with what you were talking about!

Other than that, Great Job Tiombe!
Dylan Kleinfeldt]]> 2019-12-11 04:37:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/422559491 david_kobylarz https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/422572171 Glow: The way you spoke made your presentation flow and I liked how you incorporated your life into the reflection of this presentation.

Grow: There were times where you sped up your speaking. I would try to maintain the same speaking speed throughout the presentation.

--David Kobylarz]]> 2019-12-11 06:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/422572171 ionniari https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/423884781 glow: i thought your presentation was very good and well put together 
grow: i don't really have anything to say i thought you did a good job

Arianna]]> 2019-12-13 16:33:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/423884781 jonathan_bareli https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/424284488 Glow: Your presentation was nicely constructed. I enjoyed listening to present, you have a great voice and talking skills. Also, thank you for sharing your own experiences.

Grow: I liked you presentation but maybe try changing some of the visuals to better strengthen your point.  ]]> 2019-12-15 15:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/424284488 james_lopez2 https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/424368203 Glow: Your presentation voice sounded like you could be on the radio, great job!

Grow: some of the extra things in the presentation could've been deleted to make it more about the content instead of the visuals]]> 2019-12-16 02:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/424368203 https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/424372639 Glow: great speaking voice, well projected to a good audience. 

Grow: slow down and take your time on each slide :) ]]> 2019-12-16 02:43:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/424372639 https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/424379195 Glow: very good content, you had just the right balance of words and images on your slides.
Grow: I would talk a bit slower and more clearly to make the audience understand even better. Great job!]]> 2019-12-16 03:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tiombe_green/r283rhxzf83u/wish/424379195