https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684 In groups , review the resumes with the questions which are shown on the slide. en-us 2022-03-11 01:15:52 UTC 2026-02-05 06:55:41 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2159769149 2022-04-27 05:07:25 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2159769149 chong_shuming1 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435223204 2023-01-06 00:35:19 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435223204 chong_shuming1 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435223356 2023-01-06 00:35:33 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435223356 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435341260 Firstly, I would pick annex C2. it has the edited spelling errors and grammatical errors. The format has also been changed. 

I like that the resumes clearly state the important things such as her academic achievements and experiences. It is clear and concise. It is very organised. very good. amazing. 超好。

For improvement maybe that would be to use better words. Giving the employer a sense of how knowledgeable you are. ]]> 2023-01-06 03:58:54 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435341260 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435343746 we prefer resume one as the information is organised well and it also appears more professional. The second resume seems more informal. Thus, if we were to write a resume, we would write it in the first format. 

For improvement, she can improve on her grammar and vocabulary. ]]> 2023-01-06 04:03:10 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435343746 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435344159 We would pick resume 1 as it seems more professional. With the addition of a picture, it allows employers to get a grasp of her tidiness and her professionalism.
It also has little to no spelling errors as compared to resume 2, further adding on to it's professionalism. The information is also presented in a much cleaner way

Siuuuuu]]> 2023-01-06 04:03:49 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435344159 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435345544 We would pick resume 1. We like how she included short descriptions of what she worked on in her prior jobs and attached her picture. She also put the year next to important achievements in secondary school. In resume 2, her hobbies are not relevant to her potential employer. Resume 1 does not include hobbies.]]> 2023-01-06 04:06:15 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435345544 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435348776 Writing's not easy. That's why Grammarly can help. This sentence is grammatically correct, but it's wordy, and hard to read. It undermines the writer's message and the word choice is bland. Grammarly's cutting edge technology helps you craft compelling, understandable writing that makes an impact on your reader. Much better. Are you ready to give it a try? Installation is simple and free. Visit Grammarly.com today!]]> 2023-01-06 04:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435348776 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435349544 The first resume is more formal, and there is flow of information for the job giver to read. ]]> 2023-01-06 04:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435349544 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435349691 we like the one with her face bc got picture

we suggest that she use grammarly

writings not easy but grammarly can help
this sentence is grammatically correct but its wordy and hard to read

the hobbies section also seems quite useless


]]> 2023-01-06 04:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435349691 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435349727 Today's video is sponsored by Raid Shadow Legends, one of the biggest mobile role-playing games of 2019 and it's totally free! Currently almost 10 million users have joined Raid over the last six months, and it's one of the most impressive games in its class with detailed models, environments and smooth 60 frames per second animations! All the champions in the game can be customized with unique gear that changes your strategic buffs and abilities! The dungeon bosses have some ridiculous skills of their own and figuring out the perfect party and strategy to overtake them's a lot of fun! Currently with over 300,000 reviews, Raid has almost a perfect score on the Play Store! The community is growing fast and the highly anticipated new faction wars feature is now live, you might even find my squad out there in the arena! It's easier to start now than ever with rates program for new players you get a new daily login reward for the first 90 days that you play in the game! So what are you waiting for? Go to the video description, click on the special links and you'll get 50,000 silver and a free epic champion as part of the new player program to start your journey! Good luck and I'll see you there!]]> 2023-01-06 04:12:23 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435349727 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435349878 What do you like about the resumes? What are the 'plus' points of the resume? 

Resume 1 included
- her full name
- a photo of her
- her contact information 
- the link to e-Portfolio 
- things she wants to achieve
- elaboration on her work experiences
- the year of her education achievements (more specific) 
- the skills that she has 
- her interests (her hobbies) 

Resume 2 included
- her contact information 
- the date of her work experiences
- the skills that she has
- her interests (hobbies) 

improvements
- spelling 
- formatting 
- spacing
- grammar

Which resume would you pick? 
Resume 1 as it has more detailed information about her

]]> 2023-01-06 04:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435349878 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435350402 We would pick resume 1.
What I like about the resume is that it is a lot more detailed than in resume 2. e.g. In resume 2, "Salesperson - Comet IT show" while in resume 1, she also included what she did there, distributing flyers and helping w sales of Samsung products. There are also less spelling errors (I think.) than compared to 2. Lastly, the portfolio was to the point and did not include unnecessary stuff.

however, i think that her achievements should be arranged in chronological manner]]> 2023-01-06 04:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435350402 https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435350558 The design of her resumes was nice, and in resume 1 the inclusion of a photo was good. Her putting her achievements was good. However her English, such as her spelling and grammar could have been improved. She could also have elaborated more about her skills in resume 2. Resume 1 was better as it was more formal and included her contact information next to her content, which made accessing it easier. Not only that, she elaborated more about her skills ]]> 2023-01-06 04:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/bpghs/r1jd1vlrobxa684/wish/2435350558