https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm Made with whimsy en-us 2020-12-07 04:35:20 UTC 2020-12-14 23:34:02 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995295039 So in chapters you have to put your reasons and opinions and also and when revising you gotta fix mistakes and in draft put in everything your thinking of]]> 2020-12-07 18:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995295039 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995327088 you have to fix by going back and looking and revising and see your mistakes and correct them also add a little more detail.]]> 2020-12-07 18:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995327088 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995418794 chapters need opinions and details. when i revising i focus on spelling and hand writing. the drafting process went fine and it was fun

]]> 2020-12-07 18:36:21 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995418794 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995429575 chapter need a lot of detail and reasons they need to be revised ]]> 2020-12-07 18:38:26 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995429575 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995442776 Chapters need detail and organization so the readers can understand that the writer wrote.]]> 2020-12-07 18:41:00 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995442776 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995464642 a chapter needs a reason and details . when I am revising I look for miss spelling . My drafting process went fine]]> 2020-12-07 18:45:15 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995464642 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995494297 my chapters need  to have supporting details when im writing i need to add examples im going to focus on spelling and my revising is going good]]> 2020-12-07 18:51:13 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995494297 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995502923 I am hoping to add more details and diagrams and more words]]> 2020-12-07 18:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995502923 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995503361 Chapters need details and correct info in order to have a good info writing]]> 2020-12-07 18:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995503361 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995561823 it need to be long]]> 2020-12-07 19:04:15 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995561823 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995566118 It needs to inform, it needs to have a acceptable length and help the reader understand.


]]> 2020-12-07 19:05:08 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995566118 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995721128 my chapters need a little more detail]]> 2020-12-07 19:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/995721128 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/996006028 You need to give information. I will focus on staying on the topic. And lastly my drafting proses went great. ]]> 2020-12-07 20:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/996006028 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/996090187 long and detailed]]> 2020-12-07 21:16:35 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/996090187 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/996454799 1.More Detail
2.Spelling and detail
3.Good but it took long]]> 2020-12-08 00:19:41 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/996454799 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/1003667420 You need to give some information to more people then your own mom  and dad you need to tell people]]> 2020-12-09 19:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/1003667420 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/1011917222 Make my chapters not to  similar but still stay on topic.]]> 2020-12-12 04:57:17 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/1011917222 https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/1018250447 Better intros, 
conclusions and punctuation. ]]> 2020-12-14 23:32:54 UTC https://padlet.com/noushaaghajani/r1hb9qr2s05xe8pm/wish/1018250447