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      <pubDate>2025-05-21 01:35:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>근거 모음</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>사랑이 먼저다.</strong></p><p><strong>1) 왜냐하면 사랑은 우정을 뛰어넘어 두 사람 간에 더욱 깊고 의미 있는 관계를 형성할 수 있기 때문이다.</strong></p><p><strong>2) 왜냐하면 학창시절에만 느낄 수 있는 소중한 첫사랑일수도 있기 때문이다.</strong></p><p><strong>3) 호태랑 잘되면 심리적 안정감을 얻어 좋은 영향을 준다.</strong></p><p><strong>-------------------------------------------------------</strong></p><p><strong>우정이 먼저다.</strong></p><p><strong>첫째, 사랑을 한 기간보다 우정을 쌓은 기간이 더 많기 때문이다.</strong></p><p><strong>둘째, 우정은 다시 만들기 어렵다.</strong></p><p><strong>셋째, 고백을 했다가 차이면 놀림을 받을수도 있기 때문이다.</strong></p><p><strong>넷째, 호태가 고백을 받아주지 않을수도 있다.</strong></p><p><strong>다섯째, 고백을 받아줘도 오래가지 않을수도 있기 때문이다.</strong></p><p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p><p><strong>&nbsp;</strong></p><p>&nbsp;</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>조금만 발표를 천천히 해주면 좋을 것 같아</p></li><li><p>목소리를 좀 크게 해주면 좋을 것 같아x2</p></li><li><p>천천히 말해줘</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>너무 잘했어~</p></li><li><p>발음이 너무 좋고 서론도 너무 좋은 것 같아.</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>모두 다 잘한 것 같아요</p></li><li><p>잘해서 할 말이 없다.</p></li><li><p>완벽해</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>내용이 좋고, 발표를 조금 천천히 하면 훨씬 더 좋을 것 같아</p></li><li><p>완벽하다.</p></li><li><p>목소리를 좀 더 크게 해주세요</p></li><li><p>근거도 적절하고 주장도 명확하여 굿</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>서론의 내용이 너무 좋았어.</p></li><li><p>조금 더 적절한 근거를 쓰면 좋겠다.</p></li><li><p>목소리를 좀 더 크게 해줘x2</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>아주 완벽해서 피드백 할 게 없네...</p></li><li><p>서론과 통계 자료가 명백해서 좋았다.</p></li><li><p>목소리도 크고 완전 좋았어</p></li><li><p>정확한 근거 굿</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>앞을 바라보면 좋겠어....</p></li><li><p>글의 짜임이 조금 부족해 </p></li><li><p>글의 구조를 좀 더 잘했으면 좋겠어</p></li><li><p>근거가 조금 적절하지 않지만 그래도 잘했어요</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>조금만 천천히 해줄 수 있을까?</p></li><li><p>주장이 좀 더 명확하면 좋겠어.</p></li><li><p>아주 좋아 </p></li><li><p>친구들을 바라보며 발표하면 되게 완벽할 것 같다.</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>결론을 좀 더 명확하게 해주면 좋을 것 같아</p></li><li><p>잘하였습니다.</p></li><li><p>목소리를 좀 더 크게 하면 좋겠다.</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>우정이 먼저라는 걸 좀 더 강조해줬으면 좋겠어.</p></li><li><p>잘했어</p></li><li><p>글의 구조가 명확했으면 좋겠어</p></li><li><p>뒷받침 문장이 명확했으면 좋겠어</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>우정이 짱이라고 제목을 해서 좋았고 놀림거리가 3~5개월 간다는 걸 처음 알아서 좋았어.</p></li><li><p>잘했어!</p></li><li><p>나보다 잘했고 근거가 많아서 괜찮았다.</p></li><li><p>말을 조금 천천히 하면 좋겠다.</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>천천히 또박또박해줘</p></li><li><p>조금 더 천천히 말해줬으면 좋겠어</p></li><li><p>목소리를 더 크게 말해줄래?</p></li><li><p>근거가 아주 정확하다</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>목소리 좀 더 크게 해줘x3</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>좀 더 글을 구체적으로 썼으면 좋겠고, 근거를 더 모았으면 좋겠다.</p></li><li><p>목소리를 좀 더 크게하면 좋겠다.</p></li><li><p>문단이 명확했으면 좋겠다.</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>완벽한 것 같다</p></li><li><p>글이 조금 어려웠다.</p></li><li><p>조금만 더 천천히 말해주면 좋을 것 같아.</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>천천히 말해줘~x2</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>또박또박 말하며 발표해줬으면 좋겠어.</p></li><li><p>목소리를 좀 더 크게 해줬으면 좋을 것 같아.</p></li><li><p>어, 어 라는 말을 안하면 좋겠다.</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<ul><li><p>훌륭해 이렇게 완벽한 글은 오랜만이야.</p></li><li><p>글이 잘 짜여져있고, 말을 또박또박 잘한다. </p></li><li><p>말을 더듬지 않고 발표하면 더 좋을 것 같다.</p></li><li><p>첫번째로 하겠다는 자신감 굿~ 목소리도 크고 발음 또박또박</p></li></ul>]]></description>
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         <title>우정이 최우선이지!</title>
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