https://padlet.com/24lmcnulty/r0pegoqgn774 Thank you for reading my writing pieces. Please keep your comments positive and supportive. en-us 2018-12-05 15:18:07 UTC 2018-12-07 15:19:02 UTC hello@padlet.com 24grojas https://padlet.com/24lmcnulty/r0pegoqgn774/wish/312257173 Something that you did really well, was incorporating a lot of description. By adding a lot of description, it made the story so much more funnier. Another thing that you did really well was your inner thoughts and emotions. One wish I have for you is to try and incorporate a bit more figurative language. By adding more figurative language I feel like it can make your story so much more interesting. Overall, I loved this story and thought it was hilarious,]]> 2018-12-07 15:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/24lmcnulty/r0pegoqgn774/wish/312257173