https://padlet.com/23rprincipe/qzn3byw8bpui Hello, welcome to my padlet, please leave me good feedback. Thanks en-us 2018-02-01 13:36:24 UTC 2025-11-01 02:23:45 UTC hello@padlet.com 23dclavijo https://padlet.com/23rprincipe/qzn3byw8bpui/wish/237372909 I like how you did your essay. it was really good. but your hook was very short and a tiny bit not interesting. your body paragraphs are good, i like them. your Ending was like your hook, slow and not grabbing a persons attention. All in all, i really like you essay. 3 1/2 out of 5]]> 2018-03-02 13:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/23rprincipe/qzn3byw8bpui/wish/237372909 23rcawley https://padlet.com/23rprincipe/qzn3byw8bpui/wish/237435881 I loved your describing words. You really painted a clear picture in my mind. next time, try to describe kyle better so i can get to know him better
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