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Stop so much text on 2nd slide

Continue nice pace of presentation

]]> 2018-03-23 11:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245393656 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245393845 Stop - review and minimise amount of text on slides
Continue - emphasis on relevance and integration of teaching team with practice beyond the university, which emphasises the value of the programme AND emphasis on involving images to tell your story]]> 2018-03-23 11:12:51 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245393845 b7000258 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245393962 Videos are a great idea]]> 2018-03-23 11:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245393962 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394027 Header and text is a bit big on first slide]]> 2018-03-23 11:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394027 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394060 Lots of writing on this slide, can it be broken up with some images]]> 2018-03-23 11:13:42 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394060 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394083 NMC what does that mean?
The slide layout is a bit dull, don't need so many words, use images, 
NICE? 
Slide just words- dull, use imagery,
Your presentations skills are strong however, your passion  does come through Sue, maybe nerves

Do I want to be a Children's nurse slide & narrative is fabulous. Kate your presentation skills are great & your 'authority' on this subject comes across really well

Again too much text, not needed, just have the image of the child having an injection & a few others ]]> 2018-03-23 11:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394083 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394097 Explanation that all staff are qualified nurses]]> 2018-03-23 11:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394097 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394103 Make sure you introduce yourself]]> 2018-03-23 11:13:49 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394103 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394239 Define abbreviations 

]]> 2018-03-23 11:14:24 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394239 b7000258 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394273 Abbreviations ]]> 2018-03-23 11:14:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394273 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394285 Great to explain the range of things that the lecturers are involved with]]> 2018-03-23 11:14:34 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394285 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394323 Maybe include some story telling]]> 2018-03-23 11:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394323 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394365  Nice to get them to reflect on their choice and make them sure...... or could this make them think too much and opt out?

]]> 2018-03-23 11:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394365 b7000258 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394381 Too much text]]> 2018-03-23 11:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394381 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394389 2018-03-23 11:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394389 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394402 Lots of text on that second slide]]> 2018-03-23 11:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394402 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394407 What is C Q C?

]]> 2018-03-23 11:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394407 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394429 Great to keep mentioning Sheffield Hallam - the the university in the forefront of people's minds]]> 2018-03-23 11:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394429 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394486 Less text/more images might enhance your audience. ]]> 2018-03-23 11:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394486 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394594 Eye contact is focused towards the back of the room. Don't forget the people near to the front

]]> 2018-03-23 11:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394594 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394632 2018-03-23 11:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394632 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394663 Good pace in delivery]]> 2018-03-23 11:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394663 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394751 Great to explore the point of "Do I want to be a children's nurse?"]]> 2018-03-23 11:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394751 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394826 Enthusiasm is very clear and engaging]]> 2018-03-23 11:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394826 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394863 Why did you become a children's nurse? Story telling. What inspires you. Could also ask audience about their experiences]]> 2018-03-23 11:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394863 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394892 Use of humour engages the audience and not just passively observing]]> 2018-03-23 11:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245394892 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395039 When exploring why people want to be a children's nurse consider asking the audience could make it more interactive]]> 2018-03-23 11:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395039 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395052 2018-03-23 11:17:30 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395052 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395078 Could you use a student to tell the applicants why they want to be a children's nurse? Well their stories/experiences. Are there's any videos you can use as part of your presentation ?

I really think that you could make a big impact by telling a story]]> 2018-03-23 11:17:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395078 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395158 2018-03-23 11:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395158 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395256 You do make children’s Nursing very scary. Is this the intention? ]]> 2018-03-23 11:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395256 sarah_naylor https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395273 Picture slides are good but if talking for a long time it is good to also have some text of key points. ]]> 2018-03-23 11:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395273 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395287 Good to explore the range of elements including potentially managing safeguarding situations ]]> 2018-03-23 11:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395287 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395290 2018-03-23 11:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395290 b7000258 https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395357 2018-03-23 11:18:49 UTC https://padlet.com/joanna_mcnamara/qz0a73rqtmns/wish/245395357