https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr made with love from your teacher en-us 2020-09-08 07:22:45 UTC 2020-09-10 06:34:46 UTC hello@padlet.com arethaaretha01 https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375326 yes i wrote three of them. But somehow the intro and the body is in the same paragraph. And for the conclusion, I don't think it conclude enough the whole essay hehe]]> 2020-09-08 07:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375326 azizarahmatus https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375594 No, I didn't write the conclusion paragraph on my essay.

]]> 2020-09-08 07:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375594 dantipermata1702226 https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375596 Yes. The introduction is expressing the idea that is about boredom. In the last sentence of introduction paragraph I also introduced the topic. The developmental is the second paragraph and expresses the steps. The last paragraph is conclusion which is the summary of two paragraphs above.]]> 2020-09-08 07:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375596 kentputrawibawa https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375625 Yes, but it kinda messy to look. ]]> 2020-09-08 07:30:38 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375625 shafarasaz https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375747 Nooo, I deleted my conclusion paragraph because it passed the limit of words]]> 2020-09-08 07:30:41 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375747 alfianferrari1902226 https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375960 Yes, my essay have those three paragraphs. But I think the developmental paragraph doesn't develop the topic well enough and for the conclusion paragraph is still confusing to read.]]> 2020-09-08 07:30:49 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726375960 aurelliasabrina1201 https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726376115 No, my essay does not have a conclusion paragraph. I had to delete it because I wrote too many words, and it (kind of) ruin my essay. ]]> 2020-09-08 07:30:55 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726376115 rizkycameliaa https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726376315 no, Ma'am my essay doesn't have a conclusion paragraph.]]> 2020-09-08 07:31:01 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726376315 yohanakbar https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726376316 I think it does, but I kinda don't know what i have to write in my concluding sentence. So, I am not really sure with my conclusion.]]> 2020-09-08 07:31:01 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726376316 9ggilang https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726379857 2020-09-08 07:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726379857 alexialodian https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726380053 Yes, I did wrote all those three. The problem is that I didn't separate the paragraphs between introduction, developmental, and conclusion paragraphs due to limitation in characters, which might cause confusion for the readers. Also the proportions between the paragraphs are quite imbalanced.]]> 2020-09-08 07:33:16 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726380053 zakiafwa https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726380063 Yes, there are introduction, developmental paragraph and conclusion. But I think the introduction is too long and the sentence that should be on the developmental paragraph is still on the introduction ]]> 2020-09-08 07:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726380063 ZhafiraVaniRachmalia https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726380868 Yes. I thought I dit it. But, I think my job is messy before]]> 2020-09-08 07:33:47 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726380868 mirzaulkhaq1902226 https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726383531 Not yet, Ma'am. I think my essay just has a developmental paragraph. I missed the introduction paragraph and I replace it with one sentence of main idea. Then, I didn't add a conclusion paragraph since I just place a simple sentence conclusion in my essay. Thank you.]]> 2020-09-08 07:35:29 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726383531 azmyzainurrahma190226 https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726383639 No, Ma'am. My essay only has introduction and developmental paragraph. ]]> 2020-09-08 07:35:33 UTC https://padlet.com/novaarianifs/qy5kxz8q0o92pcfr/wish/726383639