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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. So far I am finding the writing process quite stressful with a lot of challenges.&nbsp;<br><br>2.&nbsp; Something that inspired me to write about racism is equality. I believe that everyone is equal and thus should be treated the same.<br><br>3. Some thing that helped me so far were the group poetry workshops. The workshops helped me get some insight as to what others are doing. Moreover, I was&nbsp;able to get feedback about my writing. Furthermore, I got some suggestions and improvements that I could make to the poem. All of this helped me plan and write my first draft.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I chose to not punctuate my sentences except for the last line in a stanza. This is because, I do not want any abrupt pauses and I want the poem to be read smoothly with a nice rhythm. I chose to capitalize the first word of every line to represent the new line. This helps the reader differentiate between the lines and sentences. This reinforces the rhythm and pacing. I used enjambment so that the lines are able to cross over and continue on another line. This helps the flow and the way the the poem is read. I believe that I did not use too many conjunctions. However I have to keep that in mind when writing my second draft. One thing that I could improve on is the transition between stanza 1 and 2. Moreover, I should improve the rhythm in the second stanza.</div>]]></description>
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