https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte What do you think makes this a good essay? Be specific. en-us 2021-03-01 14:34:14 UTC 2026-03-15 23:46:38 UTC hello@padlet.com ageslotferreira https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447308250 Paragraphs are indented, information is accurate and it doesn't take too long to deliver the message by going straight to the point. ]]> 2021-04-22 13:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447308250 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447320628 She refers back to the documents regularly, and citing specific evidence from them. She uses this evidence combined with paraphrased background info to help the reader to fully understand the topic. Her explanations of how sugar affected the economy are also very strong, as she uses the previously mentioned evidence to show the great effect sugar had on the world.]]> 2021-04-22 14:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447320628 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447321888 This is a good essay because of how it brings up points in the thesis and carries through with those points and elaborates on them. It is also very descriptive ]]> 2021-04-22 14:01:29 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447321888 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447324569 When she was using evidence from the documents, she explained what the evidence showed. Not only what the documents said, she interpreted it for the reader. She also does a good job with constantly backing up her thesis, and using the reasons from her thesis as the body paragraphs and writes the whole paragraph around that reason.]]> 2021-04-22 14:01:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447324569 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447327765 The girl writing this essay was very organized. She uses her sources and go back on them to explain and use them as reliable evidence. She explains her sources so a reader who knows nothing about the topic is able to understand where she is coming from. She also refers back to her thesis, as a way of explaining her claim. ]]> 2021-04-22 14:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447327765 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447327987 This essay was well written because of the use of the documents. Not only did the author use what was written in the documents as evidence, but they also included the time, location and who wrote the documents as more information. The word choice also contributed to the success of this essay. ]]> 2021-04-22 14:02:35 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447327987 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447328728 She explains the topic that she is writing about in more detail. She then uses the evidence to further explain and describe on how the evidence connects to the subject. She always kept the topic based off her thesis and went back to it.]]> 2021-04-22 14:02:42 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447328728 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447330265 She gives good evidence from the documents and clearly states what document the evidence came from. ]]> 2021-04-22 14:03:00 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447330265 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447331353 She wrote the essay with good use of sources. She referred back to the documents to support her claim. ]]> 2021-04-22 14:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447331353 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447333673 She gives good evidence and good reasoning in full detail while choosing important details and leaving out the useless details. she also refers back to the documents often giving direct quotes. ]]> 2021-04-22 14:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447333673 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447334254 This is a good essay because both paragraphs connect to a part of the thesis. Also when explaining she uses evidence and make sure to cite which document it was. Once finding the piece of evidence she explains what it means and how it connects.]]> 2021-04-22 14:03:43 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447334254 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447336918 She uses a lot of evidence to back her claims. Refers back to the documents a lot and uses quotes from the documents. ]]> 2021-04-22 14:04:12 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447336918 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447346566 The essay is very well structured, she uses only the important bits from her sources, and has a lot of evidence to back up her claims.]]> 2021-04-22 14:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447346566 brivas22 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447355963 I think what makes this thesis good is the amount of evidence they have to explain the documents.]]> 2021-04-22 14:07:41 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447355963 pkinsley https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447359395 I think what made this essay good was the amount of evidence in this piece. they used a lot of different documents. and they elaborated using facts on each document.]]> 2021-04-22 14:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447359395 bcolucci1 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447380595 I believe the essay was thorough and well thought out. The author structured it perfectly and made sure to give evidence after every claim she made. ]]> 2021-04-22 14:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447380595 https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447656502 This is a good essay because there was lots of evidence and a good use of sources. And the essay was also very organized and cited there sources in the text by including the name of the documents, as well as the time, location, and writer of the documents. ]]> 2021-04-22 15:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chelsea_mangione/qwrl3lxj80cfmlte/wish/1447656502