https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7 How well are these conclusions written?? en-us 2017-03-01 02:04:31 UTC 2025-01-17 03:36:44 UTC hello@padlet.com knelson12 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/156911508 2017-03-01 02:13:36 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/156911508 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677088 2017-03-08 14:58:41 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677088 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677348 No pa]]> 2017-03-08 14:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677348 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677510 2017-03-08 14:59:42 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677510 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677736 I don't like that they stated their ]]> 2017-03-08 15:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677736 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677774 2017-03-08 15:00:14 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677774 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677819 2017-03-08 15:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677819 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677919 Using some dead words]]> 2017-03-08 15:00:33 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677919 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677992 Their conclusion sounds like they have no schema. This conclusion does not hook the story up.

]]> 2017-03-08 15:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158677992 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678023 To meny ]]> 2017-03-08 15:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678023 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678099 The conclusion is not summing it up that well

]]> 2017-03-08 15:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678099 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678157 No paragraph]]> 2017-03-08 15:01:10 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678157 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678186 2017-03-08 15:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678186 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678226 To meny peryeds

]]> 2017-03-08 15:01:19 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678226 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678276 2017-03-08 15:01:25 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678276 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678335 2017-03-08 15:01:33 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678335 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678345 2017-03-08 15:01:34 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678345 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678373 2017-03-08 15:01:36 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678373 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678441 They are using rip words not powerful 

]]> 2017-03-08 15:01:43 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678441 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678453 The conclusion is not powerful ]]> 2017-03-08 15:01:44 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678453 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678552 Only says those are my three reason

]]> 2017-03-08 15:01:58 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678552 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678565 I don't know we're the conclusion ]]> 2017-03-08 15:01:59 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678565 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678603 2017-03-08 15:02:04 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678603 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678639 2017-03-08 15:02:09 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678639 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678797 The conclusion was not powerful it did not hook the reader!]]> 2017-03-08 15:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678797 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678845 Not powerful conclusion]]> 2017-03-08 15:02:35 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678845 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678859 2017-03-08 15:02:37 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678859 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678868 2017-03-08 15:02:38 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678868 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678873 I thought no it could be better by using different word choice ]]> 2017-03-08 15:02:38 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678873 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678917 They really don't have a powerful word choice for their conclusion or in most of there paragraphs at all

]]> 2017-03-08 15:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678917 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678963 Needs more power but really good.]]> 2017-03-08 15:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158678963 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679033 2017-03-08 15:03:00 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679033 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679039 It doesn't have a powerful conclusion . Have better word choice]]> 2017-03-08 15:03:01 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679039 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679148 It does not have proper spelling

]]> 2017-03-08 15:03:15 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679148 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679552 It's listing to much

]]> 2017-03-08 15:04:11 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679552 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679679 Need better word choice and dead words

]]> 2017-03-08 15:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679679 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679700 Doesn't wrap up and using dead words]]> 2017-03-08 15:04:26 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679700 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679741 Thay didn't use grate word chou]]> 2017-03-08 15:04:32 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679741 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679927 Wo]]> 2017-03-08 15:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679927 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679979 Q]]> 2017-03-08 15:05:06 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158679979 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680035 Listy

]]> 2017-03-08 15:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680035 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680205 Never told us why]]> 2017-03-08 15:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680205 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680240 Listy]]> 2017-03-08 15:05:46 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680240 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680463 Not powerful ]]> 2017-03-08 15:06:11 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680463 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680594 2017-03-08 15:06:29 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680594 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680614 2017-03-08 15:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680614 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680640 Dead words]]> 2017-03-08 15:06:36 UTC https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680640 https://padlet.com/knelson12/qwbgpgc8k8i7/wish/158680687 They talk to the reader a lot

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