https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 21:38:31 UTC 2026-03-21 07:11:56 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f965.png https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1509821394 Persuasive essay: I love how you started your imagine with “ everyone eyes are on her” it gave me a chill down my spine. I also like how your warrant was so impactful. ]]> 2021-05-10 16:00:36 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1509821394 27ndarmarajah https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1509830837 Hi Delaney! I love your first paragraph. The picture was great. First the situation you were describing was great and you had every detail that needed to be there. “White collared t-shirt with a dark blue blazer over it. The girls were wearing skirts that were passed their knees with tights under them. The boys had a white and blue tie on. She couldn’t  tell if someone liked sports, art, or music.“If that couldn’t get someone persuaded I don’t know what could. I could also easily picture that situation. In addition, your reasons were great. They are amazing reasons. With those reasons almost no one could say no, and your warrants 100% back it up and could persuade almost everyone. “uniforms causes them to feel self conscious and uncomfortable.”    “Many people can not afford school uniforms.” I don’t have a wish. Your essay was perfect. There is nothing I would change your essay was persuasive in every way possible.]]> 2021-05-10 16:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1509830837 https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1510595332 2021-05-10 18:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1510595332 https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1513556131 2021-05-11 14:29:05 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1513556131 27jogg1 https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1513922641 I like that you are being sincere about your reason and claim.
All of your sum ups are really convincing and I like them.
There are a few errors here and there but if you can spot them and fix them, that would be great!]]> 2021-05-11 15:40:42 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1513922641 27kchaves https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1612851422 Hey laney, i loved your piece tooth tragedy.  I thought it was so creative and the pictures were absolutely amazing and funny, i think that the truth was very creative and it got me attached and entertained, the way you wrote the last slide with the vegetables and days was really good and i enjoyed reading it, i have no wish for you, it was beautifully written! Good job]]> 2021-06-17 18:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1612851422 27cchichester https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1612868856 Hi Delaney, your piece was amazing! The first star is that I love how you described how the teeth looked with all the colors and patterns. The second star is that I love how you wrote about 2 different situation with 2 different people. I couldn’t really think of a wish your piece was so good Great job!]]> 2021-06-17 18:39:38 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/qvnrikr96p95l1ln/wish/1612868856