https://padlet.com/24mwilliams1/qthmqvcti02k Please comment appropriately on my pieces and thank you for reading and the comments. en-us 2018-12-06 16:02:32 UTC 2026-02-21 19:39:25 UTC hello@padlet.com 24ltozlu https://padlet.com/24mwilliams1/qthmqvcti02k/wish/312277999 I think your suspense narrative is really good. I think you should check your spelling on some of your words though. I understood what you wrote but other people may read it wrong. Fixing these errors could possibly make your story better. Other than that i really like the concept of your story.

]]> 2018-12-07 15:45:50 UTC https://padlet.com/24mwilliams1/qthmqvcti02k/wish/312277999 24ltozlu https://padlet.com/24mwilliams1/qthmqvcti02k/wish/312286336 Overall your vignette was pretty good. I really liked the challenge you were trying to pull off. I noticed that you had very few spelling error and you're missing quotation marks in some places, but other than that I don't think there were anymore problems.]]> 2018-12-07 16:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/24mwilliams1/qthmqvcti02k/wish/312286336 24ltozlu https://padlet.com/24mwilliams1/qthmqvcti02k/wish/312287674 I really liked this one. It made me feel empathy for Ursula. I don't have any other words other than the fact that it was awesome]]> 2018-12-07 16:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/24mwilliams1/qthmqvcti02k/wish/312287674