https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7 Glow and Grow en-us 2018-02-10 21:37:40 UTC 2025-10-24 23:55:25 UTC hello@padlet.com benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308221 You sounded confident in your speaking and explained why each aspect of your website was important. I also liked how you ended the video because it really showed how much you have learned and what you will take away from the new technology skills you gained.
My only critique would be regarding the audio.  The audio was muffled  at times and difficult to understand.  There were one or two awkward pauses throughout the voice-over but overall I thought you did a very good job. ]]> 2018-02-10 21:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308221 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308233 I thought you described your website very well and touched on the most important aspects of your website. You really took the time to be patient and not rush your presentation.
My critique would be to fix the audio blip at the beginning of the presentation.  At times the audio was also muffled but other than that it was a very good presentation.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:04 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308233 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308244 I really enjoyed how you described your lesson plan in this video and you sounded very confident in your speaking which is something very important.
My only critique is that at times the voice-over has an "echo" at times and makes it hard to understand certain words. Otherwise, this was a very good presentation.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308244 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308263 I really liked how you spoke slow and sounded prepared throughout the voice-over.  You explained things very well and made sure to touch on every aspect of the website.
At times there were awkward pauses and the voice-over was sometimes muffled. Besides these two critiques, I thought the presentation was done very well.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308263 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308275 You sound very prepared and focused throughout the entire voice-over.  I could tell you took the time to practice and really know your information well before recording. 
My critique for this is that the voice-over sounds a little like an "echo" which makes it hard to understand at times. Also at times, the voice-over becomes a little hard to understand. Overall, it was very interesting and I knew you were well-prepared.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:24 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308275 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308289 2018-02-10 21:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308289 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308304 Very good speaking and describing each aspect of website.  Went very in-depth with every aspect of the website.
Spend less time going through the lesson plans and entire PowerPoints, instead briefly show them so it leaves viewer interested to look at them on their own.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:38 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308304 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308327 Very good describing each aspect of the google website and taking the time to explain everything.
My only critique is that the voice-over does not sound as prepared, maybe write out what you are going to say before doing the recording. Some parts of the voice-over are bumpy and hesitant. Overall, very informative and well done.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:47 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308327 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308352 The audio is very good and you sounded very well-prepared.  You spoke slow and knew your information very well.
My critique for this would be when showing the "emaze" presentation have some audio instead of it being silent while you click through the slides.]]> 2018-02-10 21:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308352 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308374 You sounded very well-prepared and confident in your speaking about your website.
There was a time when describing the group presentation where the voice-over cut off and no words could be heard. Sometimes the audio cuts out at random times, but otherwise very good.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:04 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308374 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308391 You sound very confident in your speaking and I could tell you were very well prepared before you began the voice-over.
My only critique would be to try and avoid awkward pauses and speak a little more slower. Otherwise, I thought it was very well done. ]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308391 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308403 I liked how you spoke about the aspects of your website and made sure to include why you thought certain aspects of your website were important.
My critique would be to speak a little slower, there were times when you spoke fast and it was hard to understand what you were saying.  There were a few awkward pauses throughout the presentation but overall it was very good.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308403 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308417 You really seemed to know your information well as you described the aspects of your website.
My critique is that the voice-over is a little muffled at times and hard to understand.  You spoke a little fast but overall it was a very good presentation. My other critique would be to have the website on the screen instead of the home page of the "Screen-Cast-O-Matic home page.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:24 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308417 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308447 I really liked how you spoke slow and I thought it was interesting how you added a video of yourself into the bottom of the screen when you did the recording. It added more to the presentation and made it very interesting.
My critiques would be to avoid filler words such as "um," etc.  This can be avoided by writing out what you are going to say before you begin the recording.   My other critique would be to not go into as depth with every single aspect of the website, rather just briefly describe them.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:35 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308447 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308476 2018-02-10 21:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308476 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308491 You went into depth about the different aspects of your website, making it very informative and clear for people to understand.
My only critique would be to sound a little more confident in your speaking. Also, try to avoid awkward silences throughout the voice-over.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:49 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308491 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308513 You sounded very well-prepared and spoke very slow.  These are two key aspects in order for the audience to know and understand what you are trying to show them.
My only critique would be to avoid awkward pauses and not go into much depth about the lesson plan. Instead, just briefly describe it and not go through each slide of the lesson plan.]]> 2018-02-10 21:41:56 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308513 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308530 Very good describing every aspect of your website.  You made sure to talk about every aspect of what was included on the website.
My critique would be to sound a little more prepared so there are no hesitations or awkward pauses throughout the video.]]> 2018-02-10 21:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308530 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308712 You spoke very well and sounded extremely confident in your speaking. I could tell you knew what you were talking about because you were prepared. I also liked how you concluded your video and did not just simply end the video. My only critique would be to spend less time going into extreme depth of every Powerpoint included in the website and instead just briefly describe it.]]> 2018-02-10 21:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308712 benevenia_maria https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308736 Your website was very well described and you made sure to hit every aspect of the things you included in the website.
My only critique would be to use less filler words when you speak, such as "um," etc. Maybe write out what you are saying before you do the voice-over. Otherwise, I really enjoyed watching and listening to this presentation because you sounded extremely confident in your speaking. ]]> 2018-02-10 21:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/benevenia_maria/qtdmnr892ip7/wish/230308736