Emma by Jeff Edge

Xoe

2018-03-07 21:57:54 UTC

Your logo is similar to other logos it doesn’t really have to do with your game it should be like a house or something like that in my opinion. I also wish that you made more eye contact with us instead of looking at what you made and the wall . I wish that you showed it all to us . I like your box it’s super cool looking . You didn’t really show us the cards so that we know what they look like . I really like your poster ! I don’t think that the ribbon on the rule book is the best because it could get messed up . Good job 👍 I like you game a lot !

Maya Samipur

2018-03-07 21:57:57 UTC

This game is spectacular!!
I like the different houses you have!! Maybe you should have more color black and dark green dosent really pop. The cards are really detailed and looks like a lot of hard work has gone into them. Maybe speak a little louder at the pol.

Jack Williams

2018-03-07 21:57:58 UTC

The poster looks very big and colorful which is a good thing. The idea is really great and it is different every time. The top of the box can have eather more color or more pictures. The game sounds a lot like clue.

Jesse

Jesse_Koeppel — 2018-03-07 21:57:59 UTC

I don't think that welcome home fits the name because your not the one whose moving in. I like that you have random things you like and you get welcome gifts to give away. i like this game implements the idea of sharing, witch is a life skill that is highly needed. the colors are nice, but the poster is bland, the bows on the poster looks good but the other parts do not

Joe

2018-03-07 21:58:01 UTC

I like the game idea, however, I don't think the name best fits the game.

Make sure you explain this game throughly in the rulebook as in my opinion, it is quite complex.

I like your game a lot.

Riley

rhoffm — 2018-03-07 21:58:02 UTC

I like the idea. Sounds fun! Love your poster.

Fintan

FintanRH — 2018-03-07 21:58:03 UTC

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good poster
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cool box
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could have better name
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brought game
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nice concept
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interesting. thats all i really have to say.

Mr. Edge

jeff_edge — 2018-03-07 21:58:04 UTC

First off, the poster board was perfect. I love the detail, the bows, the pictures of the game, and the paragraphs. They really work together well.

The box is incredible. I love how it looks like a gift. The board is also terrific. I have always been a fan of your cul-de-sac idea. The rulebook also looks great.

Thank you for going through a demonstration! I feel like a lot of learners weren't doing that.

In the future, make sure you are facing your audience. Half of the audience ended up behind you for your presentation.

Colt

2018-03-07 21:58:04 UTC

I like the box.I like how you can collect the things that you don’t have but someone else has but you don’t know who.I also like the cards and game components.

Oliver

oliver_benson — 2018-03-07 21:58:04 UTC

the name is a bit boring, so you should probably change it
I like how you can choose what house you can get
it's good that you can choose a profile/character
the cards are good additions to the game
good subjects for the game cards
the board looks great
the box looks like a game made by hasbro™.
kind of like go fish and uno
well thought out demographic
the rulebook is easy to read and comprehend.

Kane M

2018-03-07 21:58:04 UTC

I like the name a lot it seem like the name to a nice reunion,calm and relaxing game which you don't see a lot. The different cards and favorite cards make this game much better that having it with out nay cards.I would play this game almost any time I could time.

Gannon

2018-03-07 21:58:05 UTC

Amazing poster. I have played your game before and it’s really really fun. Really nice box and board. Really great pieces and cards. Simple and fun but not too simple and not over complicated. Really great idea and really great job 👍🏻👍🏻Clear objective but the name doesn’t fit.

Julius Ellington

2018-03-07 21:58:05 UTC

I like the name and the story of the game. It sounds great. The board looks awesome and what I love about it is that it looks like a present (I love presents)! The poster looks like you put in hard work but in the white spots there should be some designs. The board looks cool and I like how you're living on a cul de sac. The rulebook looks fine and laminated & professional

Zaq

zbensi — 2018-03-07 21:58:05 UTC

I like how you get to guess who has what.

SELMA

stimpe — 2018-03-07 21:58:06 UTC

Welcome Home is super cool!

I like how the cards work. Your houses are super well drawn! The back makes sense so that if they loos something can look at the back.

Noa

2018-03-07 21:58:06 UTC

Your houses are really nice and well drawn. I LOVE YOUR GAME I THINK ITS REALLY WELL DONE

Seth

2018-03-07 21:58:09 UTC

• cards seem very small are they supposed be that way?
• The homes look amazing great are
• box looks like it was professionaly made

Beau Bauman

2018-03-07 21:58:10 UTC

Hmm idk about this idea? you presented it in a robotic monotone, that could have been better. The demographic is odd as 9 yr olds might not enjoy the idea of GIVING gifts. I think that board games leaning more towards fiction than reality are more sucessful.

Charlette

2018-03-07 21:58:11 UTC

I like the name of he game. The poster is super duper eye catching I love it. I really like the idea. I really like your game you explained it very well it doesn’t tweet to confusing and I think the key demographic is accurate. The board looks nice. Your whole game is super neat.

Caden

sargentoyeeherman — 2018-03-07 21:58:12 UTC

The name is super cute. The poster is eye catching. The board is a little dark. I really like the houses, they are super well drawn. I love the logo, but it is a little like another logo I have seen.

Caedmon

2018-03-07 21:58:14 UTC

Great name. Definitely captures the theme of the game. The board is very unique
The art is very colorful

Jonah

2018-03-07 21:58:15 UTC

It looks nice and fun, but I don't completely understand it.
the box looks really nice and would stand out in a crowd of boxes It has every thing a box needs.

Jake Poindexter

jpoind — 2018-03-07 21:58:15 UTC

I like the name it really relates to the game! The concept is really cool like you have to get your niebhor a welcome gift and there are cards that go along with the gifts. And you can trade with other players and the demographic works great i would make it 7+ but thats my opinion.

Teagan Ryan

2018-03-07 21:58:28 UTC

I love everything about Emma’s game the packaging is great the poster is great and so is the idea. The poster is great because of the glitter tape and the ribbons. The rulebook is really great with the ribbons and very simple game instructions. I would definitely buy this game if I saw this in stores

Romi Cohen

rcohen7 — 2018-03-07 21:58:30 UTC

The name is very different and unique. You were very prepared. I love the back of the box and how there are pictures to represent the game set up

addison lee

2018-03-07 21:58:36 UTC

I love this game. super clever and i have never seen a game like it. i love how you play. i love the concept. i really like how you included the survey results.

Maya Sasi

MayaSasi — 2018-03-07 21:58:42 UTC

The name fits the game very well. I like that you have to give the neighbors a house warming gift. I like that there are a lot of different things that you can like. I like that in your presentation you showed what it's like to play the game. The poster is eye-catching. The age demographic fits the game well.

Rees

2018-03-07 21:59:22 UTC

I can tell she put some effort into the board and box looks fun.

Ruby

rrobin1 — 2018-03-07 21:59:51 UTC

I love the idea! sounds super cool. this game really fits in with my life. I once moved to a cul de sac , and was greeted by nice neighbors.

Talia

sargentoyeeherman — 2018-03-07 22:01:50 UTC

Your rulebook is super neat and it looks nice. The box should have a little more color on it.