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      <title>L11 : G121- 1L : FEEDBACK ON PITCH by DEBORAH TAN</title>
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      <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:07:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>AIN</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>good content and explanation of your product. you can make your slides more interesting by adding photos and colors </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:45:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Darren Y.X</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Good: They were honest and realistic with their ideas.<br>Bad: There was a lack of clarity because it is too wordy.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:46:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Eugene</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249071585</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Research was well presented using paraphrarsing to make the slides not have alot of words. the introduction was interesting showing the topic and the problem with ease<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:46:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gina</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249071592</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>too many content in one slides, wordy<br>there are confidence in presenting&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:47:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Shermel</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249071770</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Research was well said and nicely organizes by the team, they came out with very innovative ideas.  Need to show more picture for better reference.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:47:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Husni</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249074893</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Overall their project seems interesting.Some slides are too wordy nevertheless it was well explained.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:54:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Javier</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249075441</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Some slides are very bland, too wordy. However, interesting concept and well-explained.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:55:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tristan</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249076858</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>very clear and neat systemigram, slides were too wordy but well conversed<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 04:58:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jun Xiang</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249077863</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Presentation was well presented but wording of the slides was too lengthy and could have been simplified</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 05:00:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>kiat ching </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249102911</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>quick and swift introduction&nbsp;<br>clear and concise explanation of product with concepts given in proper&nbsp;<br>research is given but needs some statistics and numbers to enforce on the evidence and claim&nbsp;<br>systemigram is given but there is a lack of links <br>slides needs to be rearranged&nbsp;for better coordination </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 05:55:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>AIN</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249103020</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>it is very detailed and it consists of a lot of information </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 05:55:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>CS</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249103063</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Good: Time Management<br>Bad: Storyboard arrow</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 05:55:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>YX</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249103244</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Fast , gets to the point.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 05:56:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hilman</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249103735</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The systemigram, the arrow does not show where it goes so I was confuse however the whole presentation went smoothly and was within the time frame<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 05:57:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tristan</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249106343</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>managed their time well as they have completed their presentation and finished going through the slides<br><br>systemigram is too simple, not fully utilising the purpose of systemigrams</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 06:01:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Eugene</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249109970</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Slides are very well done! very easy to understand and super super simple.<br>but there is a lack of audience interaction</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 06:10:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>kiat ching </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249111784</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>slides are very simple and easy to understand&nbsp;<br>research is present at there with clarity of understanding&nbsp;<br>RITE slide is there but it is unclear on how the options have a clear comparison. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 06:13:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Shermel</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249112171</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Slides are well put together by the team and explained the important information. pictures and information are shown nicely on the slides. Can be more clear and louder when sharing about their prototype.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 06:14:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>gina</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249112521</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>clear visual of information<br>good time management</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 06:15:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jun Xiang</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/debstan2307/qsxr5eejbvq31zwk/wish/2249113381</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Presentation was swift and there was also a prototype during the presentation</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-25 06:16:58 UTC</pubDate>
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