OneSpace - WRITING 6A Online (Thứ 3, 8h-9h30pm) by https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing en-us 2023-07-31 15:24:34 UTC 2023-11-30 14:28:55 UTC hello@padlet.com LEARNER BOOK iebteacher22 https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2653636539 2023-07-31 15:26:38 UTC https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2653636539 Homework iebteacher22 https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2653642858

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+ Đầu giờ thấy cho các bạn chơi trò chơi ôn tập bài cũ: https://quizizz.com/join?gc=308988
+ Các bạn học về kiến thức:
- Outline : ( introduce, prg1, prg2,prg3, conclusion)
- Các bạn đọc và trả lời câu hỏi đoạn văn : The Advantages of city life
- Từ vựng: diverse : very different, mayor : The leader of city (thị trưởng), outweigh : to be more important than]]> 2023-07-31 18:16:13 UTC https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2653702003 Content iebteacher22 https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2653702189
+ Đầu giờ thấy cho các bạn chơi trò chơi ôn tập bài cũ: https://quizizz.com/join?gc=527284
+ Các bạn học về kiến thức:
- Living a big city
- Body paragraph
- essay writing
- Topic sentence: Living big city is better

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+ Đầu giờ thấy cho các bạn chơi trò chơi ôn tập bài cũ: 
https://quizizz.com/join?gc=003389
+ Các bạn học về kiến thức:
THERE are more activities to do in a larger city

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+ Đầu giờ thấy cho các bạn chơi trò chơi ôn tập bài cũ: https://quizizz.com/join?gc=308988
+ Các bạn học về kiến thức:
- The Advantages of city life]]> 2023-08-21 18:02:45 UTC https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2667784739 Homework iebteacher22 https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2667785147 https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1Llfmpx64mLZvVOA6YnyGBj79inypZ2oDsuexOmW59vU/edit]]> 2023-08-21 18:03:10 UTC https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2667785147 Record iebteacher22 https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2667785738 2023-08-21 18:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2667785738 Record iebteacher22 https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2667790685 https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1KrNZjZTArARP907ctmEmcytMxOz_Vu77]]> 2023-08-21 18:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2667790685 22/8/2023- SỶ SỐ iebteacher22 https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2669631242 Có mặt:  Lâm1, Tiki, Mina, Hồng Mai, Minh

]]> 2023-08-23 04:26:09 UTC https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2669631242 Homework iebteacher22 https://padlet.com/iebteacher22/sydney11writing/wish/2669634657 Write a paragraph about an animal you find interesting. Describe the animal and why you like it.
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1vwimIYG0ktjwt42oGZUOmC_uio1tzE_fOFY8WJ3jMP4/edit

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+ Đầu giờ thấy cho các bạn chơi trò chơi ôn tập bài cũ: https://quizizz.com/join?gc=097133
+ Thầy sửa bài tập về nhà chủ dề landmark
+ Các bạn học về kiến thức: What is a paragraph?
+ Planning process: 
1. Brain-storm 
2. Create an outline 
3. Write a first draft 
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  • Các bạn luyện kiến thức với link quizz: Các bạn luyện kiến thức với link quizz: 
  • Các bạn học activity 22 : writing an essay
  • Word to know:  accomplish: hoàn thành, basic: cơ bản: invention: sự phát minh, focus: tập chung, prevent : ngăn chặn...
  • Các bước viết: + step 1 : brainstorm 
  •                            + step 2: outline 
  • Thầy cho cả lớp ôn tập lại qua blooket: https://play.blooket.com/play?id=7506113






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  • Các bạn luyện kiến thức với link : https://quizizz.com/join?gc=867139 
  • Thầy nhắc lại kiến thức cũ 
  • Thầy gọi các bạn trình bày bài viết về topic đã được giao về nhà tuần trước.
  • When children move to a new school it can be scary / lonely
  • he first step to take when trying to make new friends would be to join a social group of your interests. meeting people with mutual interests .....

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  • Bắt đầu buổi học các bạn join quizz làm bài tập: https://quizizz.com/join?gc=261365
  • Kiến thức: Essay format 
    • + Introdution paragraph
    + Body paragraph 1
    + Body paragraph 2
    + Body paragraph 3
    + Concluding paragraph
    + Cuối giờ các bạn ôn tập qua blooket: ttps://play.blooket.com/play?id=4176827


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  • Bắt đầu buổi học các bạn join quizz làm bài tập:https://quizizz.com/join?gc=219785 
    • Kiến thức: Additional Topics for Writing
  • + Introdution paragraph
    + Step1: Brainstorm
    + Step2: Outline
    + Step3: Draft



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  • Các bạn bắt đầu buổi học, ôn tập kiến thức qua quizz

  • Các bạn học chủ đề: What is paragraph ?

  • A narrative : Befor, During, After

  • Topic sentence - main subject and the controlling idea



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  • Các bạn tiếp tục học về chủ đề : What is paragraph ?

  • A narrative : Befor, During, After


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  • Các bạn hôm nay học kiến thức: writing topic sentences

  • Brainstorming practice


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    Các bạn làm bài tập về chủ đề 1.2

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    + Benefits of Studying eng 

    + Activity 8: Writing your own Paragraph:


    = Topic sentence ( controlling. Idea)

     Body : Statement 1 + support 

                 Statement 1 + support. 

                 Statement 1 + support 


    Concluding sentence with it’s purpose


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    Các bạn làm bài tập về chủ đề 1.3

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    • Thầy sửa các bài tập về nhà của học sinh

    • Activity 9: Creating Question leading supporting detail

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    + Benefits of Studying eng 

    = Topic sentence ( controlling. Idea)

     Body : Statement 1 + support 

                 Statement 1 + support. 

                 Statement 1 + support 


    Concluding sentence with it’s purpose


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    Các bạn làm bài tập về chủ đề 1.4

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    Các bạn làm bài tập về chủ đề 1.5

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  • Ngày hôm nay các bạn học về kiến thức:

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    Các bạn làm bài tập về chủ đề 1.6

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