Going deeper into AfL - Feedback 2 by CPD HELP https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu Let's assess the drawing of a monkey en-us 2020-04-21 09:18:57 UTC 2026-02-21 16:00:39 UTC hello@padlet.com helpcpd https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/944842527 2020-11-20 11:03:34 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/944842527 4 rupneet_kk https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966637452 To me its neat. colours would have been better.]]> 2020-11-28 03:10:57 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966637452 Anis https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638074 4]]> 2020-11-28 03:12:06 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638074 3 cvolden https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638186 2020-11-28 03:12:20 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638186 cute rupneet_kk https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638188 Innocent
Small 
Sweet

]]> 2020-11-28 03:12:21 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638188 - easily identifiable as a monkey cvolden https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638665 - child-friendly
- accurate/symmetrical]]> 2020-11-28 03:13:13 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638665 Anis https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638792 - cute]]> 2020-11-28 03:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638792 cute https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638815 2020-11-28 03:13:31 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966638815 Anis https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639052 - neat drawing]]> 2020-11-28 03:13:57 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639052 Neat rupneet_kk https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639124 Features are visible.]]> 2020-11-28 03:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639124 Anis https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639234 - Include the tail and colour]]> 2020-11-28 03:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639234 Is very cute and the features have been drawn symmetrically and accurately. cvolden https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639262 2020-11-28 03:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639262 Could add colour cvolden https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639617 2020-11-28 03:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966639617 Aysha https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966640030 2020-11-28 03:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966640030 Padma https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966640088 Its looking with many questions in the mind]]> 2020-11-28 03:15:56 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966640088 Include and bring in some monkey features if it is supposed to represent monkey. May be a tail. rupneet_kk https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966640197 2020-11-28 03:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966640197 Padma https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641161 2020-11-28 03:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641161 4 theodorekl https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641310 2020-11-28 03:18:17 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641310 Detailed drawing structure of a monkey. theodorekl https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641355 2020-11-28 03:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641355 1 nadia_halim1 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641495 2020-11-28 03:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641495 maryam32 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641575 Depends - what is SC??
could be any!!!]]> 2020-11-28 03:18:46 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641575 4 nea9389 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641696 2020-11-28 03:18:59 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641696 I love your drawing, such a nice picture of a monkey nadia_halim1 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641784 2020-11-28 03:19:09 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641784 I noticed you have worked on making the full monkey structure shape correctly. Good work ! theodorekl https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641794 2020-11-28 03:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641794 Beautiful but I have no idea where the monkey is nadia_halim1 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641808 2020-11-28 03:19:12 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641808 nea9389 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641814 cute full detailed picture of monkey ]]> 2020-11-28 03:19:12 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641814 Perhaps you can add details to show the location of the monkey? nadia_halim1 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641968 2020-11-28 03:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641968 maryam32 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641976 A lot of effort has gone into drawing precisely]]> 2020-11-28 03:19:28 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641976 3 veronique_kenel https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641982 2020-11-28 03:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966641982 nea9389 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642151 I like the monkey is drawn in a way that it is asking for something? food maybe?]]> 2020-11-28 03:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642151 Nice drawing of a monkey clearly sitting somewhere veronique_kenel https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642159 2020-11-28 03:19:48 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642159 maryam32 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642331 Confident use of mouse/ trackpad to draw curves/ lines.

]]> 2020-11-28 03:20:05 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642331 nea9389 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642448 The picture would be perfect if you add colours to it. Is the tail hidden? ]]> 2020-11-28 03:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642448 Well done for drawing a nice monkey in a sitting position veronique_kenel https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642498 2020-11-28 03:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642498 I like how you drew your picture, but notice it's missing it's tail and colours. theodorekl https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642508 2020-11-28 03:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642508 maryam32 https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642939 Improve what exactly???
All depends on SC. 
Unless we know what we are working towards, we will not be able to provide a feedback that will allow improvement]]> 2020-11-28 03:21:08 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642939 I wonder if the monkey is sitting on a branch or in the middle of the rainforest... Can you add some details showing where the monkey is? veronique_kenel https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642990 2020-11-28 03:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/helpcpd/qqwh2ztguzjnuvzu/wish/966642990