Peer Review Activities by Matthew Tidwell https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935 en-us 2018-09-19 13:14:21 UTC 2018-09-19 17:28:46 UTC hello@padlet.com Rana + Leann leannlofton1 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283426345 - By giving factual information for us to turn into good writings. 
- By allowing to be able to form a real opinion of our topics. ]]> 2018-09-19 13:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283426345 Rana + Leann leannlofton1 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283428637 L - I learned the emotion that was actually tied to this era, with the subject it makes it seem like no one cared or they just wanted to change because it’s right not because they were emotionally driven. 
R - She realized the importance of color and using children in pieces of propaganda. Both of these draw others in, to help understand the propaganda. ]]> 2018-09-19 13:55:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283428637 Lacey and Jordan heath_232 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283430475 - Bring attention to specific information that we would use later on in our research. 
- Accurate description ]]> 2018-09-19 13:58:04 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283430475 Alex and Margot caldwell_761 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283431032
- Both topics have goos statistic evidence to back up the campaigns. 
- Easy to connect with the audience, which allows us to have a large amount of persuasion. ]]> 2018-09-19 13:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283431032 Sami and James matthews_602 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283432277 -Provides a deeper understanding of the image that leads to connections of historical events or what was happening
-Creates research questions the writer can ask himself when researching ]]> 2018-09-19 14:00:42 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283432277 Leah and Marissa slutzker_4 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283432953 1. By giving facts about your propaganda you have to support them with research to help support why your paper is propaganda.
2. By asking questions and giving your opinion, you also have to research the opposing opinion. ]]> 2018-09-19 14:01:44 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283432953 Lacey and Jordan heath_232 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283434226 J - Never noticed that the club in the poster had blood on the end, and that it held the word Kultur. Also, never noticed that it is common in highschool classrooms. 
L - I was not aware that there were wartime cartoons. Also, did not realize exactly everything that the children of Germany Went through during this time period. ]]> 2018-09-19 14:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283434226 Logan lccook84 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283434701 2018-09-19 14:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283434701 Isaac and Jadon ream_430 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283434729 - By identifying how the situation was portrayed in the propaganda, I can see how accurately that compares to the situation in actuality. 
- I want to find out exactly when my propaganda was created, what its historical context is, and what action it intends to persuade its audience to take.]]> 2018-09-19 14:04:35 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283434729 Alex and Margot caldwell_761 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283435655 A - Never noticed how in depth the ad was. Why the color schemes, why they chose the words they did. Never noticed the threat and the double meanings associated with the ad. 
M - That there is not just negative health effects of smoking around children, but also social effects that negatively effect children too.]]> 2018-09-19 14:06:03 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283435655 Rana + Leann leannlofton1 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283436064 L -  Orig. “ She was loosing her youth, strength , and hope in humanity “ 
 Fixed - Children can easily be manipulated but it is up to us to protect their innocence and happiness at all cost . 
R -
Original: The Anti-Saloon League wanted to make the entire nation free from alcohol.
Fixed: The League’s original intention was to prohibit alcohol locally in Ohio, but it decided to reach out large-scale and attempt to make the entire nation alcohol-free.]]> 2018-09-19 14:06:44 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283436064 Marissa and Leah slutzker_4 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283437272 L- When analyzing my source, I realized their body positioning explains a lot about the message they are trying to send and they made it like that specifically. I also realized the details of the American flag in the text is also supposed to appeal to your sense of being a citizen and standing up for what’s right. 
M- I noticed to focus more on the smaller details such as the color of the background and to ask yourself, “ Why does this matter?”. The orange background of the poster represented the color of beer. ]]> 2018-09-19 14:08:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283437272 Lauren & Troy laurenstarkey171 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283438529 -(T) Analysis uses specific examples from the movie to set up  research for the factual evidence used.
-(L) Analyzing the themes found within the movie to research how they intentionally effect a younger audience.]]> 2018-09-19 14:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283438529 Sami and James https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283438866 S - I was able to discover the connection between the ragged men and the woman holding the baby, how men during that time period were unable to support their families due to being unemployed. 

J - I was able to identify certain emotions that could be conveyed by something in a photo like aggression with a clenched or the feeling of hope.
]]> 2018-09-19 14:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283438866 Ryan butler_1025 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283439055 - What impact the propaganda had on the people that saw it.
- What type of information was spread at the time of this campaign.]]> 2018-09-19 14:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283439055 Logan lccook84 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283440495 When looking at my primary source I found that since you are analyzing something so closely that you think about way more topics and information than briefly looking at it for a min or so. ]]> 2018-09-19 14:13:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283440495 Marissa https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283441455 Original- The focus of the color is making you think about drinking at the bar and how to get back. 
 
Revision- The main focus of the orange background and beer glass give the viewer the feeling of drinking and driving home from a bar. ]]> 2018-09-19 14:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283441455 Alex and Margot short_352 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283441689 Margot : 
Original- “Another form of social effect is the smell”.
Revised- “Secondly, a negative social effect is the odor of smoke that attaches onto children that they carry”.]]> 2018-09-19 14:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283441689 Lacey and Jordan heath_232 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283441765 L - “ Hanz is hysterical whenever he responds again to the question, his face turning red as he slurs the innocent, saying that the weak deserves to die.”

Revised: Hanz becomes hysterical as he responds again to the question, his face turning scarlet with anger as he slurs the innocent, truly believing that the weak deserves death. 

J - “The poster gives the idea that the area has been ravaged by war.”

Revised: The background image of America gives the person looking at it, the idea that it has been ravaged by war. ]]> 2018-09-19 14:15:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283441765 Leah slutzker_4 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283442618 L- Origional- “ A kid is in the background, on the ground, getting beaten up by two kids.” 
New- “The victim is depicted helpless. On the ground, arms being held above his head by two bullies, with no one around to help him.”]]> 2018-09-19 14:17:29 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283442618 Isaac and Jadon ream_430 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283442639 I - Through analyzing the movie, I discovered the large amount of mental abuse that new military recruits had to endure. 
J - I discovered the omnipresent fear of voting black people into positions of power through analyzing my propaganda. ]]> 2018-09-19 14:17:31 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283442639 Logan lccook84 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283443071 Weak sentence: “This is because more teens actually have phones, and they use it anywhere and everywhere.”

Revised sentence: “This is due to a larger amount of teens that carry these phones and use it excessively wherever they go.”]]> 2018-09-19 14:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283443071 Ryan butler_1025 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283444038 I noticed that the campaign focused on non-drug users, trying to keep them from ever trying drugs, instead of targeting people that were already addicted.]]> 2018-09-19 14:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283444038 Alex and Margot caldwell_761 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283444701 Alex
Original: The blue and red lights in the background of the ad is a representation of the police lights, and represents someone being pulled over.
New: The flashing blue and red lights that are in the background brings a sense of fear. It shows a fear of being pulled over, or fear of being caught. 

]]> 2018-09-19 14:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283444701 Lauren & Troy laurenstarkey171 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283445285 -(T) I discover in the analysis of the primary source the United States are displayed through the media as “idiots” which implies that the US is not taking the situation seriously. On the other hand North Korea is taking it very seriously.

-(L) I discovered the importance of the themes themselves to the story of the movie. Without the themes the movie would just be another superhero movie.]]> 2018-09-19 14:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283445285 Isaac and Jadon ream_430 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283446612 I - Original: The men also act and speak in unison and in the exact same manner. 
Revision: Approximately a dozen different men perform identical actions and all speak in unison with the same diction and tone upon command. 
J - Original: The black man’s monstrous appearance and snarling face utilize pathos to create fear in the mind of the audience.
Revision: The caricature’s monstrous appearance and grotesque, snarling face utilize pathos to establish fear in the mind of the audience. ]]> 2018-09-19 14:23:36 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283446612 Julian https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283453334 - Explains why certain methods were used, how they were propaganda and how it made the target audience feel.]]> 2018-09-19 14:33:49 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283453334 Julian https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283454810 In my primary source I noticed how it appealed to the emotions of the viewer in a positive/misleading way to trigger a quick decision. Through the primary source it deceives the audience to believe in the credibility of the product through a well known celebrity.]]> 2018-09-19 14:36:23 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283454810 Lauren & Troy laurenstarkey171 https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283456360 -(T) Orig. “ This deception used by North Korea portrays an un-true leader and image of the country and this falsehood is exposed by the Americans which, in turn, is propaganda against North Korea’s supreme leader of Kim Jong Un.”
New: “This deception used by North Korea portrays a false image of their country and leader which is used as propaganda against Kim Jong Un by the Americans.”

-(L) Orig. “As Helen pursues her new job Bob must stay home with the kids, creating an atmosphere in which gender roles are switched and the importance of family.”
New: “As Helen pursues her new job, Bob must stay home with the kids, creating a flip in gender roles and displaying the importance of family.”]]> 2018-09-19 14:38:56 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283456360 Kim and Kyri https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283547656 K- In the process of analyzing my primary source I discovered that when it comes to sensitive subjects these kinds of campaign groups such as 'Youth Defense most often use an emotional appeal to try and persuade whoever their targeted audience is. ]]> 2018-09-19 17:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283547656 Kyri and Kim https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283549882 Original:  "In this video is a very dark setting and feel"
Revision: This video immediately makes the viewer feel an extreme sense of sadness andd darkness.  ]]> 2018-09-19 17:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/PeerReview935/wish/283549882