Writing strong "show me" details into your informational writing! by Shawna Turner https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev Read the paragraph below and revise it to add "show me" details! en-us 2017-01-08 23:50:11 UTC 2017-01-09 01:46:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Dartstarget.png Video games are a great way to relax from the stress of life. When you play a video game, you forget about everything you have to do and can just rest so that you have the energy to complete your work later. Every afternoon I play video games to help me relax. It is really fun. sturner41 https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145887125 Revise the personal example to make it "show" the reader how video games helped him relax. ]]> 2017-01-08 23:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145887125 Ze revision edwardswilliam_macallan_2016 https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145887505 Video games are a great way to relieve stress from life. Whenever you play a video game, you can take your mind off everything important that you have to complete. Every afternoon I collapse on the couch and start playing video games.  I can have fun by solving the impossible puzzles in these video games as I stare at the screen in frustration, and then I fall off the couch and start screaming when I finally finish the puzzle.

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LOL]]> 2017-01-09 00:23:28 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888106 Video games are a great way to relax from the stress of life. When you play a video game, you forget about everything you have to do and can just rest so that you have the energy to complete your work later. Every afternoon, after school the first thing I would do is to go on my computer or phone to play something so I won't get stressed with all of the school work, video games will help me relax. Molly_Rachlin https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888125  ]]> 2017-01-09 00:24:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888125 Hi everyone this is Yoyo here, this is my opinion. 3107412392 https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888147 Every weekend when I have nothing to do, I will play video game to help me relax, because when you play it, you will be in the world of yourself, it helps yourself to relax, while nobody can interfere. SO that's why I say, and prefer Video games are a great way to relax from the stress of life.]]> 2017-01-09 00:24:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888147 Videogames(hongyu https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888157 everyday I come back home with an entire back pack of homework and I just throw my backpack on the floor and start playing video games to relieve my stress, when i play video games i just stay in my world and dont think about all those stuff that causes me stress.]]> 2017-01-09 00:24:46 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888157 Video games https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888158 Video games help you to relax, for example you had a test today and you didn't do very good at it, like right now you really just want to forget everything and do something else that is fun, well video games is the best way to release stress, when you are playing video games you don't need to think about things that is not in that game, so that's a very good way to release stress]]> 2017-01-09 00:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888158 lalalalalalalaalalalaalalalaallaalala https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888844 2017-01-09 00:45:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145888844 ' elijah_kahn_2016 https://padlet.com/sturner41/qqavhbxnzaev/wish/145891740 '

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