Student Sample Analysis by https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9 en-us 2021-11-22 16:36:36 UTC 2025-12-03 15:41:03 UTC hello@padlet.com How does the writer introduce the reader to the promise/dominant ideology? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906743958 2021-11-22 18:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906743958 Does the writer provide an arguable thesis? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906744242 2021-11-22 18:18:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906744242 Does the writer provide a topic sentence that signals the topic of the paragraph? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906744609 2021-11-22 18:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906744609 Will the reader know when these events took place? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906744788 2021-11-22 18:18:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906744788 Should the writer specify when, in history, these events took place? And cite that research? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906744941 2021-11-22 18:18:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906744941 Is the writer providing sufficient evidence to persuade the reader that history is relevant? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906745266 2021-11-22 18:18:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906745266 The write seems to assume that the audience/reader as a lot of information. Could the paragraph be improved if the writer began by trying to meet the reader where they are at? Should the writer have done more to unpack these ideas? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906746447 2021-11-22 18:19:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906746447 Could the writer do more to help the reader better understand the history of the ideologies of nativism and xenophobia BEFORE they argue for their relevance today? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906746632 2021-11-22 18:19:30 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906746632 Do you think the audience/reader will be persuaded by the reasoning and evidence provided in this paragraph? Is this evidence enough? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906746859 2021-11-22 18:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906746859 Could the writer do more to help the reader better understand the harms of the contradiction? kshklyan https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906746994 2021-11-22 18:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kshklyan/qphx5pluw7yatwc9/wish/1906746994