5th Period Answer Experts by HALEY RAMIREZ

5th Period Answer Experts by HALEY RAMIREZ https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax Made with the strength to succeed en-us 2018-02-19 16:05:59 UTC 2026-03-02 18:07:24 UTC hello@padlet.com Mrs. Ramirez-10 ramirezh2 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233388546 F: Change this to which- if you use which the sentence is a fragment WRONG
G: Change save to safe- safe is the wrong meaning WRONG
H: Change later to latter- double consonants WRONG
J: No change needed: RIGHT]]> 2018-02-20 17:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233388546 Maddie Bohn-9 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857208 A- change your to you're , it is a contraction and used the right way.
B- change attention to antention, it is spelled wrong.WRONG
C- change ingredints to ingredinets ,no because it is not a change.WRONG
D- sentence 28 does not need to be changed.WRONG

]]> 2018-02-21 17:06:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857208 Libby Baker-6 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857345 F- delete the comma, you need the comma because it is a complex sentence.WRONG!
G- change grabed to grabbed, grabed is the wrong grammar, and grabbed is the right grammar. So it is RIGHT!
H- change that to it, that does not sound right in the sentence.WRONG!
J- no change should be needed, you do need to change grabed to grabbed.WRONG!
So the right answer is G.]]> 2018-02-21 17:06:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857345 Hunter Butler-2 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857533 F: My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me Wrong-did not make sence
G:My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals Wrong- because it did not have the.
H: My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals,she warned me Wrong - because you do not need the comma.
J:My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals Right]]> 2018-02-21 17:06:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857533 Gracelyn Wilmeth- https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857605 2, F: the animals can't warn you WRONG
G: the period in the sentence does need to be there WRONG
H: the cama does not need to be there
J: there is no change needed RIGHT

]]> 2018-02-21 17:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857605 Macayla Burnett- 6 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857703 F- Delete the comma- If I deleted the comma the sentence would make no sense. The comma also helps the sentence flow.- WRONG
G- Change grabed to grabbed- It uses the wrong spelling- RIGHT
H- Change that to it- If you put it it would make the sentence sound funny- WRONG
J- No change should be made- Grabed should be changed to grabbed- WRONG]]> 2018-02-21 17:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233857703 Eviana Quillin-5 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233858487 A: Subway cat seemed happy to be on his own once again.- It is a good ending sentence.It flows.RIGHT!!
B: He was the subway cat, and now he was worried about finding his own food.- Not a good ending sentence. Does not need comma.WRONG!!!!
C: He carted his silly little self right to the front door.- He was already at the door at the time. Didn't make since. WRONG!!!
D: And that is now the end of the story about the brave little subway cat.- Not a good ending. WRONG!!!!

]]> 2018-02-21 17:08:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233858487 Montana Pearson-6 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233858516 F-Delete the comma-WRONG
G-Change grabed to grabbed-RIGHT.Grabed is wrong because it is spelled wrong,but grabbed is right because it is spelled correctly.

H-Change that to it-WRONG because that sounds correct.

j-No change should be needed-WRONG]]> 2018-02-21 17:08:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233858516 Rylan.wangler https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233858856 1.where should tyler add the sentence. It is cold outside but warm in the subway.
A.After 10.WRONG
B.After 11.WRONG
C.After 12.WRONG
D.Should not be added RIGHT]]> 2018-02-21 17:09:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233858856 Joshua McCawley-2 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859035 F:My mother shrieked about approaching animals that warned me WRONG G:My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals.WRONG H:My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals , she warned me. WRONG J:RIGHT ]]> 2018-02-21 17:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859035 francisco lozano-1 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859105 A. AFTER sentence-10-the sentence dos't tak aburet the subway beien warem WRONG:B after sentence-11 says abut waken down the stret WRONG:C after sentence 12 taken abut how cold autsayd but how werm in the swabay WRONG:D no sentence neded RHIT]]> 2018-02-21 17:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859105 luke oliver-1 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859117 A:after sentence 10, becuase it is not even talking about the subway-WRONG
B:after sentence 11,becuase it is not even talking about the subway-WRONG
C:after sentence 12,it is not even talking about the subway-WRONG
D:none of the above-RIGHT]]> 2018-02-21 17:09:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859117 Remi-10 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859612 F: Change this to which-if you use this in a sentence it is a complete sentence and if you use which in a sentence it is a fragment WRONG
G:Change save to safe-different meanings WRONG
H:Change later to latter-double consonants WRONG
J:No change needed RIGHT]]> 2018-02-21 17:10:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859612 tory mcbride-1 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859893 A: After sentence 10-It didnt sound right WRONG
B:After sentence 11-It does not fit WRONG
C:After sentence 12-It does not make scence-WRONG
D:It should not be put in this pharagraph-RIGHT]]> 2018-02-21 17:10:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859893 Michael Featherston-2 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859934 F- The word that shouldn't be there at the end of the sentence .
G- The period between shrieked and as.
H- The comma makes the sentence all wrong .
J- It is all right and good with everything.]]> 2018-02-21 17:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233859934 Rainee wangler_2 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233860131 F:My mother shrieked approaching strange animals that warned me.WRONG.
G:My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching strange animals.
H:My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals,she warned me.
J:My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.

]]> 2018-02-21 17:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233860131 colton number 3 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233860988 a yet RIGHT b in the same way WRONG c for example WRONG d therefore WRONG]]> 2018-02-21 17:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233860988 Emily-1 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233860992 A:after sentence 10
It doesn't sound right WRONG
B:after sentence 11
It would make the sentence sound wrong. WRONG
C:after sentence 12 don't sound right WRONG
D:This sentence should not be added to this paragraph
because it made no sense this one is RIGHT ]]> 2018-02-21 17:12:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233860992 f he turned and his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233866493 2018-02-21 17:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/233866493 luke oliver-11 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234346125 A:insert comma after planned makes since-RIGHT
B:delet but it dose not make sience-WRONG
C:change she knew to they knew she is saying it-WRONG
D:no change it needs a change-WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 17:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234346125 Hunter Butler-5 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234346244 A: Subway cat seemed happy to be on his own once again Write because it sounds perfect.
B: He was the subway cat,and now he was worried about having to find his own food. Wrong because you do not need comma.
C:He carted his silly little self straight to the door Wrong it dose not make sence about it.
D:And that is now the end of the story about the brave little subway cat I met one day.Wrong at the end of it did not make sence]]> 2018-02-22 17:06:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234346244 Maddie Bohn -6 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234346356 -F delete the comma ,it does not need a comma. WRONG
G- change grabed to grabbed ,that is the right way to spell it. RIGHT
H- change that to it , that does not sound right.WRONG
J- no change needs to be made to sentence 6 , no because it needs a change. WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 17:06:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234346356 Michael Featherston-3 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234346758 A Yet. this should added because yet is the same way of saying over time.
B In the same way.this shouldn't there because it is not the same way as saying over time .
C For example. this kind of saying a question and line 23 does not .
D Therefore. it just should not be there and i don't know why anyone would pick D.

A is the right answer.]]> 2018-02-22 17:06:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234346758 RYLAN.WANGLER.5 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347116 Tyler want's to add a closing sentence 40' and help bring his paper to close.
A.Subway cat seemed to be happy on his own again.RIGHT

B.He was subway cat and was worried that he would have hunt is own food.WRONG
C.he carted his little self straight to the door.WRONG
D.And that is the end of the story about a brave little subway cat I met one day.WRONG

]]> 2018-02-22 17:07:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347116 Remi-11 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347284 A:Insert a comma after planned-After the word planned was but and you always put a comma in front of a conjunction RIGHT
B:Delete but-It would not sound right WRONG
C:Change she knew to they knew-We are only talking about mom and she is singular and they is plural WRONG
D:No change needed-WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 17:07:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347284 Libby Baker-3 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347300 sentence 23 Over time we formed sort of a friendship.
A - yet , if you read yet at the beginning of the sentence . It helps the sentence transition better.RIGHt!
B - in the same way, it does not sound correct in the sentence.WRONG!
C - for example, you're not giving any examples after the transition.WRONG!
D - therefore, that one is wrong because it does not sound right in the sentence.WRONG!]]> 2018-02-22 17:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347300 Gracelyn Wilmeth-4 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347310 F: Does not have a coma WRONG
G: It is RIGHT cause it's a complex sentence RIGHT
H: Which should be replaced with he WRONG
F: you don't put two complete sentence together WRONG ]]> 2018-02-22 17:07:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347310 Eviana Quillin-3 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347424 A: yet- It goes strait into the sentence perfectly-RIGHT!!
B: In the same way- Does not sound right in sentence.Is not comparing. Repeating.WRONG!!
C: For example- Not giving an example.-WRONG!!
D: Therefor-sounds bad in sentence. Does not transition well.-WRONG!!! ]]> 2018-02-22 17:08:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347424 Macayla Burnett- 3 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347571 A- Yet- It helps the sentence transition better- RIGHT
B- In the same way- If you added that it would be repeating- WRONG
C- For example- This makes it sound weird- WRONG
D- Therefore- It sounds ok but yet sounds sounds better- WRONG

]]> 2018-02-22 17:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347571 francisco-3 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347589 A-yet also but-WRHT-B-In the same way WRONG-C-For example WRONG-D-Therefore-WRONG.]]> 2018-02-22 17:08:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347589 Rainee wangler_1 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347606 A:After sentence 10.WRONG
B:After sentence 11.WRONG
C:After sentence 12.RIGHT Because to me it sounds right to pick that answer
D:This sentence should not be added to this paragraph.]]> 2018-02-22 17:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234347606 joshua mccawley:5 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234348201 A:subway cat seemed happy to be on his own once again. RIGHT
B: IT didnt talk about him not finding food. WRONG
C:IT did not talk about his him being silly. WRONG
D:It was good but A was better. WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 17:09:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234348201 tory mcbride-3 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234348429 A:Yet-if you go back and read the first sentence before that-RIGHT
B:In the same way-It does not make scense-WRONG
C:For example-For example does not fit-WRONG
D:Therefore-If you read the LAST sentenc after that it does not work-WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 17:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234348429 Emily-2 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234348655 F:My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me. that is not the right way to revise-WRONG
G: My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching strange animals. it don't need a . in the sentence-WRONG
H:My mother shrieked approaching strange animals,she warned me. it does not need a coma-WRONG
J:My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals. sounds perfect like a complete sentence-RIGHT]]> 2018-02-22 17:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234348655 Montana.Pearson-5 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234352115 A. Subway cat seemed happy to be on his own again

B. He was the subway cat ,and now he was worried about having to find his own food
C. He carted his silly little self straight to the door
D. And that is how the end of the story about the brave little subway cat i met one day]]> 2018-02-22 17:14:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234352115 colton 5 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234352940 a subway cat seemed happy to be on his own once agian RIGHT b he was the subway cat'and]]> 2018-02-22 17:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/qpczgb5vk7ax/wish/234352940