(7B) DO NOW: A Sentence That's Too Wordy and/or Vague by Dario Sulzman

marisoll

2023-11-21 15:52:07 UTC

"I would also like to add that this is the second time in our young character's life that her father has left. You may wonder if this is what he does every time, then why does her mother continue allowing her father to see her? "

Isabelle

2023-11-21 15:53:02 UTC

At that moment all I could think about was how this was the end of the world.

steph

2023-11-21 15:53:35 UTC

"He still saw me as this beautiful bright colored flower... He was the sun,water and soil that I needed to grow until one day that sun set and it never rained again, nor did that flower receive soil and the flower died. One by one each petal slowly crumbled off and the flower never became the same bright marvelous flower she once was. "

Ian

2023-11-21 15:54:12 UTC

"This will enable me to live a life where I’m working from home, earning enough money to live peacefully, and where I can pay back my parents for everything they’ve done for me, even if they won’t allow me to."

Adrian

10233310 — 2023-11-21 15:56:41 UTC

Well there isn’t really one singular thing that led me to this choice, rather, it was multiple different factors.

niasha

2114776 — 2023-11-21 15:57:36 UTC

"the only time we were really together was during the end of the day when he lays down with the news playing on the television scrolling on his phone and I lay next to him watching TikTok without saying a word."

Sherlyn

2023-11-21 15:58:19 UTC

I am very self aware that I wasn't planned in their immediate future, both thinking that once they finished their house, my mother would go back first when I initially was born to reunite with my older sister, while my father would work for a couple months until we saved up enough money to get us through Mexico for a year.

bella

2023-11-21 15:58:24 UTC

"Even then, going home and feeling empty and violated, he wanted more. When I stood up for myself, he hated that and then didn't want anything to do with me. I was useless to him. I felt so ashamed because I still loved him. He took something away from me I'd never get back and I still loved him."

Mimi

2023-11-21 15:58:25 UTC

"From the outside people can say my life is a perfectly painted picture, my mom might say that it's a picture that's painted black and white. Yet I don’t see a picture at all."

eliana

2023-11-21 17:00:34 UTC

"Freshman year made me realize why colleges don't really care about your grades as much as they care about extracurriculars because anyone could make good grades, not everyone can be you though, no one person has the same exact story, the you you are behind the grades is all that makes you stand out. And the truth is behind the good grades and camera I was nothing…."

Taylor

2023-11-22 00:24:53 UTC

"After waking up from my nap, I snacked. We landed before I realized."