https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb en-us 2021-11-18 21:38:58 UTC 2025-12-03 10:14:56 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1907247076 Hello Hellen! I’m Emma Sugianto from 5B,

One of the elements of your work I noticed was that your topic  is based on self experience.

Your heading is: “How Can We Prevent Speeding From Happening”. Instead of this maybe you can change the happening into “Occurring”???

I have no idea whether you are in control of this or not, but unlike other girls in Year 6, your website doesn’t have a FeedBack option. This padled appeared in Bibliography.

Other then these small details, I really enjoyed reading your information and viewing the infographics and images you have imported.

Good Luck!

]]> 2021-11-23 01:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1907247076 https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1907265375 I have recently noticed a typo in your Questions page in the first section in the second sentence. Instead of my, I’m guessing it should be by.]]> 2021-11-23 01:12:52 UTC https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1907265375 https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1911406496 Hi Hellen
Your photo essay shows all the dangers of speeding very clearly and shows how severe it can be. I liked how you related the topic to your life, like when your family got in the car crash]]> 2021-11-24 22:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1911406496 https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1911413040 Hi Hellen
 this website was very good and your information was very clear. 
Your photo essay had some very detailed pictures
You could’ve included more information in your research column]]> 2021-11-24 23:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1911413040 https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1911414077 Hi Hellen. 
-I liked how you made your inforgraphic clearly and easy to read.
- In the third page, which is question/research/self experience, putting why you’re passionate about this topic made me interested.]]> 2021-11-24 23:03:57 UTC https://padlet.com/hou32/qokkph1ifx2gx4bb/wish/1911414077