Digital Painting Critique- C Period by Ms Elizabeth Palmer https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8 **Save your work as a JPEG **Upload your JPEG **In "Title" write your color scheme (ex: Analogous- Purple, Pink, Blue) **In "Write Something" describe what you need advice on en-us 2017-11-13 18:53:11 UTC 2024-12-08 20:43:43 UTC hello@padlet.com CRITIQUE RULES elizabeth_palmer1 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206423562 **Post your work as a JPEG WITHOUT THE CONTOUR LINE LAYER- line it up neatly in a single row to the right of this post

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**Choose 6 different works from your peers that do NOT sit near you

**Name one thing the artist is doing well and should NOT change

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]]> 2017-11-13 18:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206423562 Split Complimentary- Purple, Blue, Green https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206704505 How can the water feel more like water against the lilly pads?

]]> 2017-11-14 13:52:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206704505 Red, Green, Blue. split complentary https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206704591 :)
definitely more in the green area. i messed up and erased it all. so i had to restart. and some work on buildings]]> 2017-11-14 13:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206704591 Pink, Blue, Yellow https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206705713  i'm not done yet.  should i add anything to make it look better?]]> 2017-11-14 13:54:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206705713 Analogous Orange, Yellow, Red rem211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206705716 How to make bottom right look better.]]> 2017-11-14 13:54:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206705716 split complimentary Blue, yellow, Green - not done yet https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706207 2017-11-14 13:55:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706207 Analogous Orange, Yellow, Red https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706378 How can I make the water look more like water]]> 2017-11-14 13:55:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706378 split- complementary orange blue purple https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706641 What color should I make the background?]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706641 Analogous, Red, Pink, orange https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706733 I still need to finish the sky]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706733 Split Complimentary- Orange, teal, blue https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706754 Any help with the sky? I don't think it looks right but I can't quite put my finger on what to do about it.]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706754 Split Complementary: Orange, Red, Blue eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706796 How do I make the bushes in the bottom right look better?]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706796 pink, blue, purple analogous https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706841 not done what should I add

]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706841 Split Complementary - purple, orange, blue https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706998 how do i make the lily pads more realistic]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206706998 Analogous- Light Blue, Dark Blue, Purple https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206707001 What should I do for the background?]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206707001 Split Complementary- Pink,Orange,Green https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206707007 what color should I make the background? (not done yet)]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206707007 Split Complementary - Orange, Pink, Red https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206707055 I am unsure how to add more depth to the water. I feel as though it should maybe have more depth. Thoughts?]]> 2017-11-14 13:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206707055 Analogous- Green, Dark Blue, and Light Blue https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206707261 What other colors should the sky be?]]> 2017-11-14 13:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206707261 Split Complementary: Gold, Green, Magenta alg211 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206708287 Do the shading on the trees good?]]> 2017-11-14 13:58:57 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/qoinu1l72rr8/wish/206708287