https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt en-us 2021-01-19 17:00:24 UTC 2026-03-16 13:59:18 UTC hello@padlet.com vwithers https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102246991 0 or 1 or 2 or 3 or 4]]> 2021-01-19 17:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102246991 vwithers https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102246995 0 or 1]]> 2021-01-19 17:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102246995 vwithers https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102246999 0 or 1]]> 2021-01-19 17:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102246999 1118121 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102443347 The author does a decent enough job of answering the question and stating the devices the rest of the author's essay would be referencing. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:35:34 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102443347 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102444446 The author or person who wrote the essay did have a thesis. It wasnt not found in the first senctance but the thesis was present and they had facts to back it up]]> 2021-01-19 17:35:45 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102444446 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102446739 The writer creates a thesis that answers the question and is arguable.]]> 2021-01-19 17:36:11 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102446739 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102447841 1 resonds to prompt with thesis]]> 2021-01-19 17:36:23 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102447841 1236113 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102450569 The author does a good job of answering the question and stating the devices that were used in the story. I would give the author the point. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:36:54 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102450569 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102451316 The author does create a defensible thesis in the 5th sentence, 1 point

]]> 2021-01-19 17:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102451316 113588 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102451568 Though it takes three full sentences, the author does state a full thesis with the name of the text, the author, the author’s purpose and intent, and the tools that are used. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102451568 1118121 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102451700 The author does not consistently use commentary to explain why their evidence matters. They do, however, give a good amount of evidence and some occasional genuine commentary. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:37:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102451700 184566 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102455172 1
The author provides a defensible thesis that includes the comment on the human condition, along with the specific devices used by the author, and strategically includes the WHY. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:37:43 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102455172 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102455190 The writer gives lots of evidence to prove their point and also explain why. Some of the descriptions could use more explanation. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:37:43 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102455190 1118121 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102456783 The author uses contractions and, without an intriguing hook or smooth transitions, the author does not really deserve a point of sophistication. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:37:59 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102456783 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102460909 The evidence is there they give enough examples to prove the statement, but they evidence isn't strong I'm pretty sure they could have found more quotes and ways to prove their point or thesis]]> 2021-01-19 17:38:39 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102460909 113588 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102465368 The author uses examples from the text and defends them, but seems to get a little lost in their commentary, not entirely relating their points back to their thesis and staying on track with their original claims.]]> 2021-01-19 17:39:22 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102465368 1236113 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102466155 The author provides a lot of evidence but does not relate it back to their thesis statement.]]> 2021-01-19 17:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102466155 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102467741 1
They responded with a defensible thesis that was able to address the prompt and paints a bigger picture ]]> 2021-01-19 17:39:46 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102467741 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102468744 They pretty much just got through the assignment they wrote a thesis and evidence but nothing more, so I think they did not get the sophistication.]]> 2021-01-19 17:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102468744 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102469352 I'd say 3, it provides evidence but isn't that strong

]]> 2021-01-19 17:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102469352 184566 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102470118 3
The author does explain how their evidence connects their thesis multiple times, but when explaining some explanations do seem to fall short of achieving the score of a 4. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102470118 113588 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102473329 The majority of this response could be shortened in order to be more direct and concise. The transitions are not smooth, and the overall essay seems a bit cluttered and disjointed. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102473329 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102475725 0
While exploring some interesting ideas about the text the authors writing is not the most smooth and there are areas where the language could be improved not quite enough to get the point]]> 2021-01-19 17:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102475725 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102485720 0, they didn't go past the thesis and evidence.]]> 2021-01-19 17:42:59 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102485720 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102486513 3
The author does go by the devices rather than ideas that are established but provides very interesting ways that some of the devices are explored and gives some more precise examples of those devices and does expand on them decently well ]]> 2021-01-19 17:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102486513 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102489423 Altogether, the essay is written really. The amount of evidence and details was really impressive. The bit about the B sound was especially skillful.]]> 2021-01-19 17:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102489423 184566 https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102495505 0
The author does put some sophistication into their essay, but the way it was ultimately structured does not give it the ability to fully achieve a 1. ]]> 2021-01-19 17:44:45 UTC https://padlet.com/vwithers/qnijwv87491p1qdt/wish/1102495505