https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4 Write your responses in appropriate column that has your assigned number. en-us 2022-05-09 17:26:41 UTC 2025-12-04 22:56:26 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231773361 This essay seems to be more of an outline.]]> 2022-06-27 20:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231773361 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231773754 This essay does not analyze the documents. It simply states what the docs are generally about.

]]> 2022-06-27 20:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231773754 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774128 Definitely has an argument that was supported by the documents provided. The writer also did a great job of pointing out the connecting the theme of the documents & applying it to his/her analysis. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774128 agrogman https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774140 Thesis is strong
The essay had good examples and did reference the documents. 
Made points that fit into the timeline of the prompt
Had analysis as to why the documents proved the thesis 

]]> 2022-06-27 20:50:47 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774140 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774247 Mentions speaker for docs where applicable. Analyzes how the docs answer the prompt. Uses HIPP.]]> 2022-06-27 20:51:04 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774247 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774321 Essay 1C is a list of what is each document and ignores all other parts of the task. Essay is descriptive and not analytical and never formulates a defensible claim.]]> 2022-06-27 20:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774321 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774463 This essay is document-driven. "In Doc A, it talks about . . . " It fails to connect the documents to a claim or to source them.]]> 2022-06-27 20:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774463 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774586 Introduction doesn't hold much contextualization nor a solid thesis. Simply an outline or annotations of specific documents. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:52:00 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774586 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774948 This essay has a complex thesis statement that is supported throughout the essay by providing evidence from documents and a detailed analysis of those documents. This essay also uses outside information to support the thesis statement. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:52:50 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774948 agrogman https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774970 No thesis statement
References to the documents are not strong and do not flow well in the essay.
Reads like a pre write]]> 2022-06-27 20:52:54 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231774970 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775049 Developed thesis, contextualization, uses the docs in service of the argument, good sourcing of the docs, complexity]]> 2022-06-27 20:53:05 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775049 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775050 Develops a consistent argument throughout; uses sources seffectively]]> 2022-06-27 20:53:05 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775050 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775289 Lists documents, but lacks thesis statement & analysis]]> 2022-06-27 20:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775289 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775325 Student creates a defensible claim by providing both sides of the imperialistic debate. An analysis of the documents that goes beyond descripting with outside information peppered throughout. Provides both points and counterpoints for the arguments of the documents to show a deep understanding of the topic at hand.]]> 2022-06-27 20:53:28 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775325 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775439 Essay 1C is not cohesive at all. It is almost written as a list or bullet pointed outline. They are missing major components of an essay- contextualization and thesis. Also, they did not do any sourcing or use any outside evidence. This essay would score very low. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775439 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775662 Essay 1A uses evidence from documents, cites documents]]> 2022-06-27 20:54:25 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775662 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775706 The student described the various motives for imperialism and used the documents to support the descriptions, but he/she didn't seem to address the part of the prompt about the relative importance of the different causes, so it doesn't seem as though the student had a deep understanding of the motives. However, he/she did attempt to make the response complex by including anti-imperialist viewpoints.]]> 2022-06-27 20:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775706 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775717 There is no thesis statement in the essay and the context is lacking significant details. The body paragraphs are more of an outline rather than an essay centered around the thesis statement. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231775717 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776087 1-A
 
1. Structured well. Context and thesis sets up argument 
2. Well developed thesis. Note it includes a counterargument. 
3. Judicious use of documents. No long quotes. 
4. Uses sourcing skills (context, audience, purpose, or point of view) to SUPPORT their argument. 
5. Use of historical facts but and explanation of those facts supports thesis. 

1-C

1. Student did not set up DBQ with context and thesis. Did not use documents to make an argument (there was none). Displayed poor understanding of context. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776087 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776102 This would be an exemplar that I would give to my students. It is clearly organized and clearly sites information from the documents. It is document driven. You can tell that they understood the documents and let them inform their argument. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:55:29 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776102 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776373 Essay 1C lists documents and describes them superficially]]> 2022-06-27 20:56:13 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776373 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776432 No thesis or contextualization. Goes through docs in order without trying to group them.]]> 2022-06-27 20:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776432 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776489 Seemed to build an argument that the US wanted to expand due to superiority complex and gain industrial footholds across the world. Also, mentioned specifically why some were opposed to expansionist policy. Used sources to back up claim of American Superiority as well as contrasting views. In conclusion repeated their thesis. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776489 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776563 In Essay 1A, the students provides the reader with background information and an thesis that is argued throughout the essay. The students uses paraphrased text evidence to support their analysis of guiding question. Lastly, the student does a good job in supporting their claims through thoroughly bringing new insight to historical period being analyzed rather than simply stating facts.]]> 2022-06-27 20:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776563 jtmason5508 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776588 I thought that Essay 1A demonstrated their understanding of the US's turn towards Imperialism and the reasons behind it. Their weakness was omitting the relative importance of these points.]]> 2022-06-27 20:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776588 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776799 Good contextualization, brings in outside evidence and uses docs well.  Students demonstrates a nuanced understanding of the topic.]]> 2022-06-27 20:57:21 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776799 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776958 This essay provides a clear thesis is connected back to consistently in well-organized body paragraphs with reasoning. The body paragraphs also provide numerous examples of specific evidence from documents that do in fact support the thesis and line of reasoning in a given paragraph.]]> 2022-06-27 20:57:47 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231776958 jtmason5508 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777134 In Essay 1C the student lists all documents but gives no insight or discussion as to their importance to the US's expanding role.]]> 2022-06-27 20:58:13 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777134 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777263 2022-06-27 20:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777263 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777351 The author has a good thesis, contextualization, and supporting evidence. However, I wonder if they could have been more to the point. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777351 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777604 This student just made a list of the documents and tried to describe what each was discussing without first creating an argument or thesis. There wasn't any analysis because there wasn't a thesis that the documents were supposed to provide evidence for.]]> 2022-06-27 20:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777604 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777735 There is no thesis or claim. The student is very vague and did not contextualize any historical background knowledge. Student seems to be able to deconstruct the document but does not relate it back to the question nor give it a true purpose to back up any claim. This seems almost as an annotation or outline not an essay. ]]> 2022-06-27 20:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777735 https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777873 This essay does not have input from the students thought process to answer the prompt, rather resorting to restating facts. Level 1 DOK of analysis.]]> 2022-06-27 21:00:15 UTC https://padlet.com/avdistrict/qn72sdi5advgeyi4/wish/2231777873