week 7 by PEACH https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w developing 'beautiful sins' en-us 2021-11-03 14:40:01 UTC 2023-05-28 23:18:37 UTC hello@padlet.com goals (1) keepinpeachy https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1892428433
  • Finish writing 'beautiful sins'.
  • Experiment with alternative structures.
  • Start planning for string quartet week.
    • ]]>     2021-11-15 21:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1892428433     development (4) keepinpeachy https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1892430165 The second verse into a chorus. 

    I really like the melody overall, although I feel I definitely need to keep working on it and neaten it up in places. I feel it might be cool to alter the pre-chorus slightly, maybe repeating the 'my' after 'embodies' - I'm hearing some nice BV harmonies over the top.]]>     2021-11-15 21:52:18 UTC https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1892430165     reflection (5) keepinpeachy https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1892431144 Things I'm happy with:
    • Development so far.
    • Lyrics.
    • Overall direction of track.

    Still to do:
    • Tighten melody.
    • Think about BV's.
    • Finish tracking.
    ]]>     2021-11-15 21:53:07 UTC https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1892431144     lyrics (3) keepinpeachy https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1908996816 'Burnt out like stars
    I fall into a million pieces
    Forever chasing meaning
    I fall asleep so I can breathe and
    Dream of another life
    Another mind
    Some other 'I'
    To feel, or to die?'

    Developing from the first section, I wanted this verse to be more about how my relationship with my regret makes me feel, as apposed to further describing 'her'. I really like the rhythm of the phrases 'another life, another mind, some other I', they seem to kind of trip over each other -  especially on top of the beat which is very lazy and swung anyway. ]]>     2021-11-23 17:53:25 UTC https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1908996816     initial ideas (2) keepinpeachy https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1938528989 My initial melody idea for the second verse.

    This week my main focus has been on writing another section, or a second verse. I'd like it to be similar to the first section with some slight dynamic differences in the melody. ]]>     2021-12-09 15:38:55 UTC https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1938528989     string quartet research (6) keepinpeachy https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1939191031 In preparation for string quartet week next week I intend to do the following:
    • Research Björk and the Brodsky quartet - Keirons' suggestion.
    • Find 3 reference tracks.
    • Research tips for programming semi-realistic strings.
    ]]>     2021-12-09 21:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/keepinpeachy/qkoo2pdc2c1he74w/wish/1939191031