https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78 Made with serendipity en-us 2018-10-01 11:20:36 UTC 2018-10-02 12:19:01 UTC hello@padlet.com gryesn https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/287537757 In Turkey, there are millions of students who live with their parents until they leave home for university. Because their universities at another cities. As a result, they have to live at dorm or alone at an apartment. Consequently, there are some adventages and disadventages living alone away from family at another city such as psychological and financial effects.

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İrem]]> 2018-10-01 11:50:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/287537757 umut_suluhan https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/287538822 In Turkey,there are millions of students who live with their parents until they leave home for university. However, there are some responsibilities for living alone but most of the students don't have view how to live alone far from home.There are disadvantageous and advantegeous of living alone at university.

İREMNUR AKSULTAN UMUT]]> 2018-10-01 11:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/287538822 ssenassman https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/287539245 In Turkey, there are millions of students who live with their parents until they leave home for university. Lots of students dream about living alone at university. They want to be independent and free. However, their life become both easier and harder at the same time.There are both disadvantages and advantages of living alone at university.]]> 2018-10-01 11:54:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/287539245 Tugra_Mutlu https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/287542489 In turkey most of student cant decide to stay at home or dormity when starting to university. Some students prefer to stay at home ratner than other students who stay at dorm. The think that living at home changes their life positively. The most important disadvantege is psychologic problems]]> 2018-10-01 12:03:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/287542489 ozan_tekin_85 https://padlet.com/ozan_tekin_85/qk55h2xlty78/wish/288060290 Dear all,
Your introduction starts with a nice general statement and takes the reader by giving more specific information (explanation or example) on the topic. However, your thesis statement is not connected to the previous ideas well. How can you create a good transition between the background information and the thesis statement? Use linkers? Add another idea to transition? All the best,

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