Words - Metaphors and Similes by Joe https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall Mr Hewitt's Wall en-us 2017-07-19 01:53:37 UTC 2018-02-07 09:58:20 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Terminator.png Mr Hewitt - Instruction jhewitt3 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179003031 Each student is to post their mini story that uses a few metaphors or similes to make their writing more engaging or interesting.
Write your story underneath the most appropriate heading.]]> 2017-07-19 01:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179003031 Simile jhewitt3 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179004077 When we comparing a 'thing' to a another completely different 'thing' to make our writing more interesting.
'His passion was like a fire inside of him']]> 2017-07-19 02:09:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179004077 A. Example jhewitt3 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179086950 Timothy rode off into the unknown forest it was as dark as the night despite the early hour of the day. He could feel his horse underneath him struggle with the weight of the world on its back, the weight of all his troubles. As he approached the forest the darkness hugged him and pulled him closer his eyes the only bright thing in this place shining like two laser dots against the gloom.]]> 2017-07-20 02:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179086950 J. Hewitt jhewitt3 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179087349 Blood like a volcano erupting from  the wound, a dark cloud spotted on the horizon seeming to take the shape of a laughing face, mocking the injured man. All goes as black as coal.

Like a thunder bolt the boy wakes from this dream suddenly sitting up as straight as an arrow in bed, who was the man in the dream?, why was he hurt?]]> 2017-07-20 02:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179087349 Metaphor jhewitt3 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179087940 Definition  “a figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable.” ]]> 2017-07-20 02:21:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179087940 Oliver rheeder https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155167 I feel like I walk 100  Miles in black cold I see a light behind I start to run it get bigger Like a sponge my getin sucked in like a veckyumecleaner in to the light ]]> 2017-07-21 00:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155167 Peter.Z https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155217 2017-07-21 00:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155217 Jordan g https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155240 I was walking upon the river with my stick and my heavy bag, walking down rough hills wobberling side to side down the track. Suddenly I felt this heavy weight on my back moving side to side pulling me around, I stoped and took my heavy white and red bag I didn't see anything but my back was so sore like a boxer getting punched in the face. I had a break having my huge yummy sandwich and my chocolate milk, I wen tin my phone and went on to the camera app and took a photo of this amazing view and we I turned my phone on to my bag I saw a dead looking white ghost just laying on my back]]> 2017-07-21 00:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155240 Christian https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155241 There was this guy named bill. He was at the MCG watching BVS finle. Bill could hear the people screaming when the bulldogs won. Now bill needed to get out of there. He could see the exit but everyone's was rushing to it. It was like the rat race. I still needed to find a way out]]> 2017-07-21 00:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155241 Jude 🚼 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155254 Jano kissed Cornelius like a monkey eating a banana ]]> 2017-07-21 00:48:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155254 Declan https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155255 I was riding my bike, feeling the wind hitting against my face. I was going so fast I felt like a supercar, I was going to fast! I started wobbling like my nana's old rocking chair, BAM! I hit a tree like an axe, my head was so bloody it was like I went to war. 

The bike was broken, it looked like a monster truck went over it, my family were there to support me, instead of my sister taking photos for snapchat. My family quickly carried me to the car with a towel around my head. While we were driving I start to have a massive head ache, but it was no ordinary head ache I felt like I was carrying the world on my head, we finally got to the hospital and they rushed me to a room, they took out all the rocks, tam bark and grass that were in my head. 

While they were doing that I was having a lovely dream and then I woke up suddenly as if it was a horror story. After the horrific incident I finally recovered and I was straight back on a bike. My parents were in shock, but I had to, I had no choice, the marathon is tomorrow because I accidentally volunteered as tribute. 

I told my mum and dad "I need to learn fast mum and dad". They were telling me I can't go back on a bike but I had to. After that I got a bike out of my shed and adjusted it so it fitted me, "Mum and Dad, I am going to ride my bike... alone. My parents GASPED! They said to me “You are absolutely CRAZY!” They couldn't believe it. 

My Dad was not taking nothing from what I just said, he was going with me wether I like it or not! I was not arguing with that so we started to head off. As soon as we got to the park I hopped on my bike and my dad gave me a big push and I was off like a super car. 

I started peddling as fast as I could go like my life depended on it, I started to wobble, I was in this position again, I was going to hit a tree and split open my head again. I told my self “Tuffen up Declan, stop being such a baby, just peddle and keep looking straight.” 

So I took my advice and I kept peddling. I dodged a couple of obstacles and trenches, I went over a big bump, I was in the air, I was flying (well at least I thought I was) I saw my dads eyes they were as big as his belly, I just realised I could potentially die. 

I started to panic, “WHAT DO I DO?! WHAT DO I DO?!” I made sure that I had good grip and I was ready to land like an airplane, In 3, 2, 1! BAM!… I successfully landed the bike, my dad was astonished. I new that he knew that he couldn't believe it. The dust coming off me like I an explosion went off, I couldn't believe it my self that I managed to do that.

]]> 2017-07-21 00:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155255 Hugo https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155302 As the loud sounds come from two side, bullets pass through to each other repeatedly as if it was two Liamas spitting at each other, I see an ocean of blood that suddenly erupted on me.

I grabbed my rifle, it was as cold as Antartica and as dark as a shadow


]]> 2017-07-21 00:49:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155302 Joel the boss story https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155428 I was walking in the jungle as silent as the calm ocean next to the shore .i went to sleep in the dark scary night. The next day i woke up. The sun was lighter then the gods in the sky. I was ready for a wonderful adventure I was cutting through the big leaves as they snapped. As I was adventuring I saw a ginormous dinosaur i ran as I herd the giant steps behind me it was like an earthquake behind me.the dinosaur broke all the trees down in its path it was like a explosion of nukes. I ran and ran and I fell over a big rock and fell down a hill. I hade broke my leg like a celery stick. I was in pain like a bullet through my leg. I hid in a cave and I lost the dinosaur. Sooner or later a guy came and helped my broken leg up like a broken stick I was safe.

]]> 2017-07-21 00:50:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155428 Zane Heeney https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155441 Myself and my mate sam were playing in a grand final before the game we went to Macca's drive through and got our egg and bacon mc muffins and pancakes. We rocked up got our stuff on and run through the banner but it turned out sam and I were the only ones on our team. We got to our positions and we had to do something so we bashed the other team up and played the game and won. The End]]> 2017-07-21 00:50:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155441 Sam. M https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155455 I was walking with my m8 Zane dibble so Zane and I played footy in the back with Zane and we so something that looked like a elephant as tall as a building.]]> 2017-07-21 00:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155455 Jude https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155488 2017-07-21 00:51:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155488 Alexander https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155554 Rich men like swimming in money and have one pool filled with dollar bills and gold chains ]]> 2017-07-21 00:52:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155554 Spencer https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155585 I was heading over to my mates house and on the way a saw a gang the name of the gang was MACCABOIIIII they were as tuff as a coconut shell they wore nautica shirts and pants, I finally got to my mates house we started to play this new game he got it was Rainbow Six Siege, he was as bad as a rock so I had too show him some tips, his name was Sam soon later his mum came home had some KFC for lunch the chicken was as sweet as candy, on my way home I was on my way home when I saw another gang called SPIKY they look so much ruffer then the MACCABOIIII gang and when I finally got home to my sweet family I was filled with beans to see them.]]> 2017-07-21 00:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155585 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155590 Jordan  Boglis

Hey walked to a dead end where  there was  a old women nitting a top then there was a old man called Gazza he chased me down until I he swung his axe at me I ducked and lefted.]]> 2017-07-21 00:53:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155590 Bipin https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155616
I saw a beautiful British woman looking in a mirror upset I asked her what was wrong she said can’t you see it’s a ]]> 2017-07-21 00:53:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155616 Harry https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155646 There was a man he's name was king Download he always felt down causes he hasn't been downloaded for a long long time ]]> 2017-07-21 00:54:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155646 Jude https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155804 Jano is fishing in troubled waters]]> 2017-07-21 00:56:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179155804 Jude https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156027 Frank is s cold as ice]]> 2017-07-21 01:00:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156027 Angus https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156056 A curious child asked his mother: “Mommy, why are some of your hairs turning grey?”

The mother tried to use this occasion to teach her child: “It is because of you, dear. Every bad action of yours will turn one of my hairs grey!”

The child replied innocently: “Now I know why grandmother has only grey hairs on her head.”

]]> 2017-07-21 01:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156056 Jude🃏 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156139 Lenard is Like a screaming baby in a pool of crap c

]]> 2017-07-21 01:02:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156139 Jordan g https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156192 I was swimming in the river along the river bank and I felt something pulling me under the water when I looked down I saw a hand with 2 fingers and red eyes like a wolf starring at in the night]]> 2017-07-21 01:03:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156192 Declan https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156199 His Dead look on his face was so scary as if it was a horror story.]]> 2017-07-21 01:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156199 Some pirates are bad and they steal gold and they are based around Africa. https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156206 2017-07-21 01:03:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156206 Jude https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156249 My dads tummy is like a bowling ball]]> 2017-07-21 01:04:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156249 Jordan g https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156279 I was walking down the hall way in the abandoned hospital hearing screams and echoes saying save your ,life or else. I was running down the hall way as fast as a rabbit running away from a fox, I turned around the corner and I fainted ]]> 2017-07-21 01:05:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156279 Jude https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156321 Zane rolled me as smooth as finns hair]]> 2017-07-21 01:06:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156321 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156353 Jordan Boglis 

I was walking down the street and I saw a couple of tennagers a bit older than me who were rolling a old lady I  said stop then I saw it's was Sam maccafe then I case him then he jumped other the fence then I did the same then sam tripped then I returned the bag to the old lady.]]> 2017-07-21 01:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156353 Joel. The scary party https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156393 I was in a party with my mates as the beats vibrated the floor. Then out of no where it all stoped and the lights turned off like when the sun leaves at night. We didn't know what happened then we see a doll trist it's head look at us and pointed at us like a demon in a body. We where scared then out of no ware from behind a guy with a chain saw cuts my friends head of the head sounded like a leave snap as the blood sprayed out I escaped but to that day when people go their they die.]]> 2017-07-21 01:07:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156393 Zane https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156412 He was dressed so cool I could've sworn he was an eshy]]> 2017-07-21 01:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156412 Sam. https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156547 2017-07-21 01:09:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156547 Sam.m https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156548 2017-07-21 01:09:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156548 Jordan g https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156600 I was walking down the road looking a thing the hot girl who made my eyes catch on fire with cuteness hearts.]]> 2017-07-21 01:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156600 Jude https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156618 I went to school and I was so tired I felt like a sloth I thought I was going to late and but I kept slipping on the slow snail 🐌 trail that I left behind.]]> 2017-07-21 01:11:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156618 Zane https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156654 He got it from all angles today he was in the wars]]> 2017-07-21 01:11:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156654 Peter.Z https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156882 Soviet-Afghan War

Afghan has fighting war for 40 years, but first from soviet invasion.]]> 2017-07-21 01:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179156882 https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179157190 Jordan Boglis 

The Germans invaded Stalingrad and the Russian's where determined to  save there country  they would do anything to save it the Germans had better weaponry But could they do it ]]> 2017-07-21 01:19:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179157190 dan https://padlet.com/jhewitt3/Wall/wish/179678813 hey

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