Пупр by Kate Kuskova https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2 Реализована великая мечта en-us 2017-11-05 09:10:07 UTC 2025-12-14 08:56:24 UTC hello@padlet.com kuskovakaterina1998 https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/203601453 2017-11-05 09:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/203601453 Gilyova Xenia xgilyova https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/208570986 2017-11-20 03:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/208570986 Skachkova Svetlana s_cvet https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/208620898 2017-11-20 09:03:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/208620898 https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/211416513 2017-11-29 14:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/211416513 TG review https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/212563562 Beautiful, but tragic. 
You've done a very nice job! I can sense all the emotions you put in and that is definitely your forte.
Nevertheless, there is a number of mistakes (lexical and grammatical), which you should go over and work on, so that you won't make the same ones again.
Overall, that is a very deep and heartfelt story, that just needs a touch of correction.
Keep up the good job!😊

]]> 2017-12-03 06:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/212563562 I.P https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/212568858 This story makes me sad, because I know how it is hard to lose a person you love. It is the greatest pain that you physically and emotionally feel all over your body and soul.  It is suffering of the worst kind. The loss is terrible and painful and things will never be the same again. So you get your real taste of being alone in the grief.  
The piece of writing «has» a lot of courage, reality and truthfulness of occurring events and their effect creates a mixed, powerful mood that echoes and increases between the story and reader as we go through the «textual landscaping» which is variously sad, shocking, frightening, and poignant. There are some little mistakes, which relate to the use of pronouns, structure of sentences. The author uses colloquial and distinctive language, which blends a realist narrative style. Overall, this work is worth reading.

]]> 2017-12-03 08:24:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/212568858 After reading I still have mixed feelings, quite positive beginning turns into a horrific, dramatic end. As I understood from the story, the English proverb: "My home is my castle" can remind the saddest memories for a lifetime. This is a safe place which should be your home can be dangerous one. From this text we can see that « time is not always a best cure», not all tragedies are forgotten after a time. Thanks to the author for sharing with us such a thought-provoking story which I will remember for a long time. Veronika Ratnikova 10/10 https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/212617254 2017-12-03 16:44:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/212617254 Leonteva J https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/212700765 For me this particular story was the most shocking one. I really liked the structure and introduction especially. The use of language is really nice, it gives a vibrant picture and it becomes easier to imagine the details described in the story. There were some mistakes connected with collocations, but it's only a matter of time and experience. Though I never experienced anything like that myself, I still can understand author's feelings. 
I hope my humble review can motivate you to continue writing and improving your English :)]]> 2017-12-04 03:45:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/212700765 Oleg Kaystrov dartye https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/213163237 2017-12-05 07:12:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/213163237 Painfully beautiful cheshirskiy8kot https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/214237911 Actually, in my opinion, this is one of the brightest works here. I have neither expected to read so dark and intense story, nor I've thought it to be that deep and that tragic. The idea is outstanding: the first-person narrative ideally shows all depth of the character's sufferings and loss. The problem of domestic violance, not emphasised but still very obvious, is very pressing nowadays, especially in our country, where recently  the law on dicriminalisation of domestic battery has come into force.
Also, the feelings are marvellously depicted, as well as the psychological scenery. 
The greatest drawback is GRAMMAR. Sometimes there is no punctuation, sometimes words are omitted or misspelled. I truly feel that this work has a great potential, but you have a long way to go. I really hope that you will find strength to deal with your grammar, because you have an enormous talent that will probably shine very bright in the future. Apart from the mistakes, I think this deserves the highest mark.
ps also, I hope that this story is the result of a very vivid and sophisticated imagination. I wish no one ever felt what the main character went through. ]]> 2017-12-07 17:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/kuskovakaterina1998/qj60jba41bm2/wish/214237911