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      <title>TOEIC APLUS35431 - L11 WRITING by Hương Trần Quỳnh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nhàn, Thanh, Huy, Loan<br><br>In the middle we can see two people, they seem a businessmen because they are wearing suit and bringing a brief. They are walking on the road and discussing about sth. In the background, there are several modern buiding and some of the tree.<br><br><strong>--&gt; Feedback: </strong><br>In the middle, we can see two people; they seem to be businessmen because they are wearing suit<strong>s</strong> and <strong>carrying </strong>a brief. They are walking on the road and discussing something. In the background, there are several modern building<strong>s</strong> <strong>along with some trees.&nbsp;</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-03-15 11:52:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Group 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Phuong, Thịnh, Minh, Chi<br><br>A show is being performanced by a band on the street. On the right, a woman is sitting and playing a violoncello. There is a opening violin case in the middle of the picture. On the left, 2 people are watching the street performance.<br><br><strong>--&gt; Feedback: </strong><br>A show is being <strong>performed </strong>by a band on the street. On the right, a woman is sitting and playing a violoncello. There is <strong>an </strong>opening violin case in the middle of the picture. On the left, <strong>two </strong>people are watching the street performance.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-03-15 11:52:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Group 3</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Anh, Thuận, Tuyền, My<br><br>There are 4 people in the library. Two of them are wearing hat and they are sitting on the left of the picture. On the background, there are several books are being arranged on the bookshelf. The man that in the middle of the picture, is excited with their project. They are looking at monitor. There are several laptops, glasses of water and books on the table. To the right of the picture, there is a man discussing with others.<br><br><strong>--&gt; Feedback: </strong><br>There are <strong>four </strong>people in the library. Two of them are wearing hat<strong>s</strong>, and they are sitting on the left side of the picture. <strong>In </strong>the background, <strong>several books</strong> are being arranged on the bookshelf. (Bỏ There are do có "being aranged" là động từ chính). The man in the middle of the picture is excited about their project (bỏ that và ","). They are looking at <strong>the </strong>monitor <strong>joyfully </strong><em>(máy tính nào? đã xác định nên dùng "the", thêm adv jofully cho câu đỡ ngắn và thêm từ vựng, đa dạng cấu trúc)</em>. There are several laptops, glasses of water, and books on the table. <strong>On </strong>the right side of the picture, there is a man discussing with others.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-03-15 11:52:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Group 4</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nhân, Tuấn, Trinh, Phụng<br>When i look at the picture, there are three people. In the background, there is face statue of seven presidents of the US, so i guess they are at Rushmore mountain. The woman is wearing plain dress while both of the men are wearing suit and tie. I think they are very enjoying this moment because they are all smilling<br><br><strong>--&gt; Feedback: </strong><br><em>- Hạn chế dùng I để miêu tả tranh. I thường không trang trọng và mang tính chủ quan.</em><br><strong>There are </strong>three individuals seen in this image. In the background, there is a face statue of seven presidents of the US<strong>,</strong> <strong>which could be on</strong> Rushmore Mountain. The woman is wearing a plain dress<strong>,</strong> while both of the men are wearing suit<strong>s</strong> and tie. It seems that they are enjoying this time <strong>tremendously since</strong> they are all smiling.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-03-15 11:53:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Vy, Châu, Huyền, Ngân <br>There are three people in this picture, two women and one man. They are maybe police and they are investigate something. There are some evidence on the ground. The woman holding the camera is taking photos of the evidence. The man who is wearing a sunglasses and standing behind her is taking notes about things in the box on the ground. The other woman is follow their actions. They seem quite serious, maybe they meet some problems in investigation.<br><br><strong>--&gt; Feedback: </strong><br><em>Mình recheck lại evidence là không đếm được nhé team.<br></em><br>There are three people in this picture<strong>:</strong> two women and one man. They are maybe police, and they are <strong>investigating </strong>something. There is some evidence on the ground. The woman holding the camera is taking photos of the evidence. The man who is wearing sunglasses and standing behind her is taking notes about things in the box on the ground. The other woman is <strong>following</strong> their actions. They seem quite serious; maybe they meet some problems in <strong>the</strong> investigation.&nbsp;<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-03-15 11:56:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Toeic Speaking Writing Examinee Handbook - Scroing Guide - Question 6,7 </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Các yếu tố đạt điểm tối đa (3 điểm): </strong><br>- Câu trả lời mô tả các ý chính của hình ảnh.&nbsp;<br>- Việc lựa chọn từ vựng và sử dụng các cấu trúc cho phép diễn đạt mạch lạc các ý tưởng.<br>- Đọc rõ ràng, rành mạch để người nghe có thể hiểu và nắm bắt được ý tưởng người nói.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-03-16 07:49:13 UTC</pubDate>
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