Recounts- Whole Class Writing Activity by Dianne Dunchie-Coley https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4 Lost in the Bushes en-us 2017-08-17 23:59:18 UTC 2017-08-23 00:53:30 UTC hello@padlet.com Lost in the bushes dianne_dunchie_coley https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181543842 Each student is to add two sentences to make up the recount.]]> 2017-08-18 00:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181543842 Last year my friends and I went to the Waitakere Ranges on a class trip. dianne_dunchie_coley https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181544093 2017-08-18 00:02:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181544093 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4 dianne_dunchie_coley https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181545573 2017-08-18 00:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181545573 We saw a group of sheep when we went back https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546765 2017-08-18 00:26:31 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546765 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546833 with no one can get me up for the all night]]> 2017-08-18 00:27:11 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546833 We had a great time in the trip. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546850 2017-08-18 00:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546850 I https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546874 2017-08-18 00:27:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546874 I brought many foods. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546928 2017-08-18 00:28:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546928 We fell down a big hole https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546999 2017-08-18 00:29:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181546999 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547022 It was really hard to come out of the hole.

]]> 2017-08-18 00:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547022 We had fishing in the brook, we caught some fishes. So we ate on the barbecue. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547033 2017-08-18 00:29:25 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547033 Teacher came to help me https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547041 2017-08-18 00:29:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547041 One of my friend was dead https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547085 2017-08-18 00:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547085 My teacher called the ranger to come and help me get out of the hole. dianne_dunchie_coley https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547166 2017-08-18 00:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547166 The ranger used rope made from flax trees to pull me out of the hole. dianne_dunchie_coley https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547218 2017-08-18 00:31:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547218 By no o help to get https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547226 2017-08-18 00:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547226 At that moment we were fishing, my friend had fallen in to the rapid river. I had to call someone to help her, but there was no radio wave, so I have to rescue her by my self. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547250 2017-08-18 00:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547250 I was embarrassed,but I was not injured dianne_dunchie_coley https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547263 2017-08-18 00:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547263 Was s https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547265 2017-08-18 00:31:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547265 Fish ate my all food so I lost my lunch. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547408 2017-08-18 00:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547408 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547415 Then we did some activities like Swimming, playing Football and walking around some bush to find out some information of the Waikatakiri Ranges.]]> 2017-08-18 00:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547415 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547564 I abandoned my friend, because my friend want me die with him.]]> 2017-08-18 00:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547564 I got really hungry but I don't have any food. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547811 2017-08-18 00:37:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547811 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547968 It was really hard me to survive in the bushes but I still survived by drinking some water from the hole where there was some fresh water in it]]> 2017-08-18 00:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181547968 had a g time at the bushes but I feel scac of my f this per is caarzy https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548151 Because this person called me died with him]]> 2017-08-18 00:41:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548151 Ranger hung the ropes to us. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548230 2017-08-18 00:42:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548230 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548251 Happy trip for us, all classmates was very enj]]> 2017-08-18 00:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548251 However the rope burned out while I was climbing. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548384 2017-08-18 00:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548384 OOpopo https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548405 2017-08-18 00:43:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548405 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548433 It was a fun and exciting trip but it was a very dangerous trip I have ever been from my school.]]> 2017-08-18 00:44:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548433 I has a t at bushed but i does want to play with this per any,ore More beca this per calll died with him https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548458 2017-08-18 00:44:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548458 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548959 On the bus, we are encountered a landslide, all people fall down the mountain]]> 2017-08-18 00:45:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548959 I decided to live in this bushes. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548997 2017-08-18 00:46:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181548997 I enjoyed the time https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549487 2017-08-18 00:47:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549487 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549551 I enjoyed the time and the day with my all friends, but I was sad that some students were injured in the bushes.]]> 2017-08-18 00:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549551 this bushed https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549741 2017-08-18 00:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549741 I had a great time in this trip, someday I want to go there again and make a better menories with the same member. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549813 2017-08-18 00:50:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549813 an can see the bir fly up and https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549881 2017-08-18 00:51:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549881 It was great and unforgettable trip for us. https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549888 2017-08-18 00:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549888 https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549915 This trip will be memorable trip that I have ever been.]]> 2017-08-18 00:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549915 It was very happy trip for me, although my friend dead https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549993 2017-08-18 00:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dianne_dunchie_coley/qi29pjhjtpv4/wish/181549993