https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2 Pick 1 claim from your practice to post on this wall. en-us 2018-02-14 13:51:17 UTC 2018-02-20 15:44:27 UTC hello@padlet.com fosterk5 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477332 Basketball is the best sport because ____, _____, and ______.

]]> 2018-02-14 13:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477332 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477427 Summer is the best season because it gives you a chance to have a long break and relax, you can swim more, and you can play a different variety of sports that you can't play in the winter.

Awesome claim!!!!!! This is a great start!! You state your opinion and 3 reasons. If I could suggest anything to make it even better, I would say try not to use the word 'you'. We do not want to address the reader. This would also help to make it concise. ]]> 2018-02-14 13:53:51 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477427 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477445 Dogs are better pets than cats because Dogs Play with you and run around but most cats just sleep most of the day and they make your floor full with cat hair.

Remember, a claim is only 1 sentence. Dogs are better pets than cats because _______, _________, and _________. Keep it concise! Save the details for later.]]> 2018-02-14 13:53:53 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477445 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477592 Dogs are better than cats because they are smarter, more athletic, obedient, and people say that a DOG is a man's best friend.

Awesome claim! Try to keep it down to only 3 reasons so it can stay concise. ]]> 2018-02-14 13:54:14 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477592 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477749 Basketball is a better sport than football because it is safer, easier to access, and gets you in better shape.

Awesome claim!!!!!! This is a great start!! If I could suggest anything to make it even better, I would say try not to use the word 'you'. We do not want to address the reader. ]]> 2018-02-14 13:54:36 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477749 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477939 Summer is the best season because you don't have school or homework and can relax with friends and family. Summer is also the best season because you can swim, go to the beach and spend time outside. You can also do things that you couldn't do in Winter.
Nina Benioff


Remember, a claim is only 1 sentence. Summer is the best because _______, _________, and _________. Keep it concise! Save the details for later.]]> 2018-02-14 13:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477939 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477984 dogs are better than cats it's pretty obvious dogs protect you and your family, dogs enjoy being around you, dogs are always happy and exsited 

Remember, a claim is only 1 sentence. Dogs are better than cats because _______, _________, and _________. Keep it concise! Save the details for later.]]> 2018-02-14 13:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231477984 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478187 early dismissal is a great thing because there is more of the day to have and you can get homework done earlier.


Early Dismissals are great because _______, _________, and _________. Keep it concise! Save the details for later.]]> 2018-02-14 13:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478187 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478517 2018-02-14 13:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478517 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478532 2018-02-14 13:56:23 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478532 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478661 Dogs are way better pets because they are very loyal, dependent, and can be trained to do various things. one is a seeing eye dog who help the blind get around.

Remember, claims are only 1 sentence. The first sentence is a great claim! Don't add the second part. That can be added as details later in the essay. ]]> 2018-02-14 13:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478661 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478758 at least one day of the week we should have a late start to school. We should have this, because we shouldn't have to get up so early every single day of the week, just to go to school so early. If we have a 2 hour delay once every week kids would be much more happy throughout the day.
sydney navarro

Remember, a claim is only 1 sentence. Late starts should happen once a week because _______, _________, and _________. Keep it concise! Save the details for later.]]> 2018-02-14 13:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231478758 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231479172 dogs are better than cats because they are more active, more friendly


Please remember punctuation and capitalization. Add another reason to this claim. 

Dogs are better than cats because they are more active, friendly, and _________.]]> 2018-02-14 13:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231479172 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231479430 Dogs are better than cats


Remember to add your 3 reasons. Dogs are better than cats because ________, __________, and ___________.]]> 2018-02-14 13:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231479430 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231479553 2018-02-14 13:58:25 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231479553 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231479748 2018-02-14 13:58:48 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231479748 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231898775 Basketball is better than football because it is safer, and an easier way to get in shape.]]> 2018-02-15 14:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231898775 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231899590 2018-02-15 14:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231899590 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231899651 Pets are the best they play, cuddle and defend homes.]]> 2018-02-15 14:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231899651 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231900506 Early Dismissals are the best because there's more time to do other activity, classes are shorter, and we have more free time.]]> 2018-02-15 14:12:53 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231900506 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231901422 Phones should be allowed in school because there a good resource if you use it correctly, you call someone if there is an emergency, and you can look up something quickly  ]]> 2018-02-15 14:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231901422 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231902159 Dogs are way better pets because they are very loyal, dependent, and can be trained.]]> 2018-02-15 14:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231902159 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231902739 Early dismissal are the best because you don't have to stay in school for 7 hours,and for the rest of your day you can chill you can also have enough time to do your homework   Adriana ramirez

]]> 2018-02-15 14:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231902739 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231903635 Summer is the best season because it gives people a chance to have a long break and relax, people can swim more, and everyone can play a different variety of sports that they can't play in the winter.]]> 2018-02-15 14:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231903635 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231904441 Summer is the best season because it gives people a chance to relax, there's no stress of school, and there's a number of activities. ]]> 2018-02-15 14:19:16 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/231904441 https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/233324318 I think that we shouldn't try to make homework our number priority 100 % of the time.

That is because, that if we do,]]> 2018-02-20 15:38:21 UTC https://padlet.com/fosterk5/writing2/wish/233324318