Part 3 Essay (5J) by WAK JEMAH @ MIMAH AP KAMPOK Moe https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y Writing Good Conclusions en-us 2020-11-05 02:06:22 UTC 2025-10-28 23:31:46 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f338.png g48404480 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634040888 Some people say that young offenders should be sent to an army camp for a while instead of being sent to prison.
Is this a good or bad idea for young offenders?
Write about:
i) being punished for crime
ii) learning life skills
iii)_________ (your own idea)

Plan:
1. Introduce your topic and your opinion
2. Make a point about punishment to support your opinion.
3. Make a point about learning life skills to support your opinion.
4. Use your own idea in support of or in contrast to the other points, or to show why an opposing viewpoint is wrong.
5. Summarise your opinion and add a comment.]]> 2021-07-02 00:13:24 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634040888 g48404480 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634041388 (1) Nowadays, many young people commit crimes. They will be charged and send to prison. However, I think young offenders should be sent to an army camp.(2)
In the first place, sending young offenders to prison is a ____ idea because _______________________
_______________________________ .
This is unfair because ____
_____________________________________________________________________ .

(3) Instead, young offenders should be taught to learn life skills such as _________, ___________, _____________ and _________________. ________
______________________________ ______________________________
They can learn these skills and be awarded certificates so that they can find jobs once they leave the camp.
______________________________
_______________________________

(4) These useful skills and knowledge can be applied in their future lives to ensure the continuity of life. _________________________
_________________________________.

(5) To sum up, the skills and discipline learnt at the camp can shape young offenders to become responsible citizens in the future. _________________________________ 
__________________________________ 
____________________________________.



]]> 2021-07-02 00:13:49 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634041388 g48404480 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634060743 3 parts
1. email 80 words
2. Guided writing 125
3. Essay (4 choices)
-review
-report
-article
-narrative (story)
-essay (argumentative / debate)]]> 2021-07-02 00:26:59 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634060743 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634076933 Nowadays, many young people commit crimes and they will be charged and send to prison. However, I think young offenders should be sent to an army camp.
In the first place, sending young offenders to a prison is a  bad idea because life is very hard there. This is unfair because they are young offenders are naive when they committed the  crime.
Instead, young offenders should be taught to learn life skills such as cooking class, leaning  english  and
computer. They can learn these skills and be awarded  certificates so that they can find jobs once they leave the camp.
   ]]> 2021-07-02 00:36:55 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634076933 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634079541 Nowadays, many young people commit crimes. They will be charged and send to prison. However, I think young offenders should be sent to an army camp.
In the first place, sending young offenders to prison is a bad idea because life is very hard in the prison. This is unfair because they are young offenders who committed the crime .
Instead, young offenders should be taught to learn life skills such as leaning english , cooking class ,repair car and learn music class.This will let them know the difficulties of society and prevent them from making mistakes in later life .They can learn these skills and be awarded certificates so that they can find jobs once they leave the camp. This can bring hope to these young offenders lives.
These useful skills and knowledge can be applied in their future lives to ensure the continuity of life. 
]]> 2021-07-02 00:38:36 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634079541 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634081044 Nowadays, many young people commit crimes. They will be charged and send to prison. However, I think young offenders should be sent to an army camp.
In the first place, sending young offenders to a prison is a bad idea because life is very hard there. This is unfair because they do not realise the consequences of their actions.
Instead,young offenders should be taught to learn life skills such as cooking, cleaning, baking and sewing. This can teach them to be independent. They can learn these skills and be awarded certificates so that they can find jobs once they leave the camp.]]> 2021-07-02 00:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634081044 Nowadays, many young people commit crimes. They will be charged and send to prison. https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634081074 However, I think young offenders should be send to an army camp.
In the first place, sending young offenders to prison is a bad idea because is a life is very hard in the prison. This is unfair because they are young offenders who commited crime.
Instead,young offenders should be taught to learn life skills such as ]]> 2021-07-02 00:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634081074 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634081289 Nowadays, many young people commit crimes. They will be charged and send to prison. However, I think young offenders should be sent to an army camp. In the first place, sending young offenders to prison is a bad idea because life is very stressful in the prison. This is unfair because they are young offenders when they committed the crime. Instead, young offenders should be taught to learn life skills such as cooking, sewing and computer.This can teach them to learn more and live independently also will make them realise how difficult is society. They can learn these skills and be awarded certificates so that they can find job once they leave the camp.]]> 2021-07-02 00:39:39 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634081289 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634088524 Nowadays, many young people commit crimes and they will be changed and send to prison.
However , I think young offenders should be sent to an army camp.
In the first place , sending young offenders to prison is a bad idea because is a life is very hard. This is unfair because they are young criminals.
Instead , young offenders should be tought to learn life skills such as learning to cook , mowing the lawn , cleaning the environment and learning english. This well tell them about how to live independent.]]> 2021-07-02 00:43:56 UTC https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634088524 g48404480 https://padlet.com/g48404480/qh6p723xh1qmw57y/wish/1634092427 -will be bullied by hardcore criminals
-life is very hard in the prison.
-will be influenced by other criminals
-life is very stressful in the prison.
_______________________________
i) they are young when they committed the crime.
ii) they do not realise the consequences of their actions
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