IB_W13: Writing Practice by Academic ALI

5 steps to write a problem-solution paragraph

AcaAli — 2024-06-04 13:41:29 UTC

main idea
supporting idea
example
solution
results

Prompt: Obesity

AcaAli — 2024-06-04 13:42:31 UTC

Reasons:

unhealthy diets
lack of knowledge
late dinners
...

phong paragraph

vannguyen10185 — 2024-06-04 13:49:42 UTC

One of the clauses that so many people are now overweight is that they lack in exercise and physical activity. These days it is common for people to lay around, watch TV and generally be a couch potato. For example, in the UK, about 37% of it population have never exercise or play sport. To address this issue, the government should encourage people to exercise more and take part in activities. This will hopefully help to make a change in the way people live.

Tom's paragraph

2024-06-04 13:53:06 UTC

Obesity is when someone weighs a lot more than what's healthy. It's caused by eating too much junk food, not moving enough, genes, and our places. To solve this, we need to help people make better choices. We can do this by teaching them about good food and exercise. It's also important to make healthy food cheaper and easier to find. We should stop advertising unhealthy food so much. Making it easier to walk or bike around our neighborhoods can also help. Also, having friends and family who support healthy choices can make a big difference. Doing these things together can help fight obesity and keep our communities healthier.

Anh Thư - Lily's paragraph

2024-06-04 13:54:31 UTC

One of the main reasons that lead to obesity is unhealthy diet. Unhealthy diets include eating large amounts of junk or processed food, drinking too much alcohol,... In particular, over 46% of adults, and more than half of the kids in the US have unhealthy diets. To resolve this issue, we should develop a healthy diets that is low in calories and sugar and exercise more often. By making healthy lifestyle changes, you can prevent and treat obesity.

Bacon

2024-06-04 13:57:55 UTC

Children these days are getting fatter than in the past. This is for a number of different reasons, such as unhealthy diets, lack of knowledge about nutrition and junk food addiction. People these days are less active, they mostly sit on the couch to watch TV or play video games all day. So, to solve the problem, adults should encourage children to go outside and find the activites they like. This will become their hobby soon. This should be able to change their health issues.

Nhi

2024-06-04 14:00:33 UTC

One of the reasons that so many people are overweight is that they lack knowledge in dieting. It is common in countries to have fast food restaurant in every city. Therefore it attracted many people to buy unhealthy foods instead off a balanced meal. The solution is that people should ask professionals advisers in healthy dieting and follow groups on social media to follow a diet with other people.