ES1000 SG05 Consolidate and Reflect by Sarah Somarajan

Winston

2022-11-08 02:19:24 UTC

1. Weakness that I identified is I lack coherence and sentence structuring in my writing. Points that I wrote might be repeated which could be deleted.

2. I feel that my most improved aspect is learning to structure my paragraph using compare-contrast and cause-effect. In addition, having a clearer topic sentence also helps with making the paragraph clearer.

3. Further improvement to work on is my grammar and also sentence structuring.

4. I am a more confident writer now, as I have learnt useful concepts that I can apply to future essays.

Heidi

2022-11-08 02:25:11 UTC

I felt my sentence structure and flow of writing rather subpar. Honestly this module taught me things l didn't realized l had issues with. It taught me a lot about topic sentence and after each time l finished a paragraph writing task, l felt l was improving and getting better. I would say my sentence structure still needs work but l felt it has gotten better. After this module, l feel more confident in my writing because l understand how to frame my paragraph and apply in my essays. Thank you Miss Sarah! <33

WENHAO

2022-11-08 02:27:21 UTC

1.always tend to write long sentences that do not make any sense, i was managed to cut down my sentences by adding in transition markers after this module.
2.More cohesion within the paragraph.
3.How to arrange ideas within a paragraph and within a whole essay.
4.I think so? I feel that maybe i dont have as much problems as i thought after the quizes.

Gun

2022-11-08 02:29:14 UTC

THR

2022-11-08 02:30:33 UTC

What weakness have I identitfied?
I realized that I am weak in verbs and making coherent sentences.
Thanks to this module, I realized that i am weak in such aspects, letting me look morre in depth into this subject and becoming more open-minded to learn related contents.

Most important aspec of my writing:
I will say it is the verbs and conjunction sentences. Since in the past, all my English tutors will always complain to me how I write lengthy sentences with no conjourning words or fullstop. Thanks to this module, I have learnt better.

Futher improvement:
I might have imporved on my verbs and conjunction but it is still not enough. Something else I need to improve on will be finding sources.

How i feel:
I can now read and roughly gauge how wrong a sentence feel like now

MEME

2022-11-08 02:30:44 UTC

Christine

2022-11-08 02:30:57 UTC

1.Weakness: grammar and vocabulary.
The quiz and writing task helped me practise.
2.I thinks it is my grammar and organization of sentences in a paragraph.
3.Still need to work on the grammar and accuracy of vocabulary.
4. maybe?(lol)
Thanks very much Sarah thank you for your patience on my bad writing!!!

Qin Hui

2022-11-08 02:32:14 UTC

1. Weakness in sentence structure (lack of flow and transition), grammar, and writing out of points. This mod has helped me to identify key phrases and components that make a good essay/writing.
2. Clearer sentence/paragraph structure, better use of transitional words
3. Sourcing and extracting the right information and putting them together (flow)
4. Slightly confident but there is a lack of clear writing
process

wake up

2022-11-08 02:32:59 UTC

forbes 2

2022-11-08 02:37:23 UTC

1. I used to forget the more technical and basic aspects of writing such as the use the linking words to show cause and effect/contrast/relation. Now I am more aware of the small details that makes my essays better.

2. Linking from one point to another and composing different points together to reach a singular conclusion

3. I would like to be able to weave in examples as I feel that I have troubles quoting or making references.

4. I am a more confident writer now when I revisit my progress from paragraph writing task 1 to paragraph writing task 3. I am more aware of the basics and actively apply them, which I have forgotten for awhile

YING ZI

2022-11-08 02:44:00 UTC

1. Weakness: failed to construct a proper sentence, failed to link up sentence with conjunctions, vocab skills is not so strong.
2. Most improved aspect: able to construct a proper sentence and linking words
3. Further improvements: to be able to construct an effective and well-written topic sentence. Also, to write a proper paragraph.
4. An improved writer after ES1000? Hopefully, I will be more confident in writing a paragraph or even an essay without much errors. ES1103 seems like there's a lot of good writers...