Murder in the Camp by Johan Nayar https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp Made with magic en-us 2017-09-28 10:24:34 UTC 2024-05-31 08:40:29 UTC hello@padlet.com The situation was more stressful. Because their car was broken someone cut its wire. They were trying to escape from this camp. They were sure that there had a insane murder in this camp. They found another car but it had no petrol and one tyre is flat. There had a workshop near the main office, Max and Fred tried to find some gallon of petrol in there while Chris tried to change a tyre. After he finished, suddenly he heard Max screaming. https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192009006 2017-09-28 11:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192009006 Fred ran back to the car with a gallon and said ‘’hurry up, max is dead and the murderer is coming’’. They filled petrol and drove away. Next morning the police found a crime at the camp. There were 3 victims one was an officer in his office, second was a young man in the workshop not far from the camping area and third was another man in a car under the mountain. The murder is still a mystery. https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192009052 2017-09-28 11:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192009052 Fred and his friends Max and Chris decided to go camping together in a small camp on a mountain. But something strange had happened in that camp. First, the electricity and phone signal were cut. So Fred decided to go to ask only one officer but he ran back to camp because he found the officer dead. https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192009517 2017-09-28 11:28:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192009517 Comment by Wei-Hsuan nayar https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192387335 Absolutely this is a mystery story and easy, clear to read. Also, it can be more exciting.]]> 2017-09-29 10:20:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192387335 comment by Maraheb https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192388209 great scenario]]> 2017-09-29 10:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192388209 Comment by Johan nayar https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192388535 Great mystery! Maybe you should be writing the last season of Game of Thrones?]]> 2017-09-29 10:27:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192388535 Comment by Sofia https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192388873 I really liked the mystery, very good story.]]> 2017-09-29 10:29:09 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192388873 Response by Max nayar https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192390499 Actually I think my story is nonsense hahaha. Anyway thanks for every comment :)]]> 2017-09-29 10:38:15 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192390499 Comment by Suwan https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192392520 And Fred? Maybe he could escape from a murderer, he became another victim as his friends but polices couldn't have found his body yet, or Fred was that insane person. For what it's worth, if I get a chance to go camping someday, I'll go alone or with my family.]]> 2017-09-29 10:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nayar/murdercamp/wish/192392520