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      <title>Prepare for the Of Mice and Men Assessment by Henry Petrie Nhc</title>
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      <description>Everything you need to prepare for the Of Mice and Men assessment.</description>
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         <title>18. Download this graph and open it in word</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It shows how the tension rises and falls in Chapter 5, and has plenty of quotes to support each change.<br><br>If you describe how the tension goes up and down at key moments, you will be on track to get plenty of marks.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>12. Better English Essay Words</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Here are some words you should and should not use in your essay.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>14. Making your notes</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162818254</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>You will need to prepare one A4 side of notes for this assessment, which has the title:</div><div><br></div><div>"How does Steinbeck create drama through changes in mood and atmosphere in 'the barn scene' of <em>Of Mice and Men</em>? Show your understanding of how this relates to the rest of the novella.”</div><div><br></div><div>Your notes must:</div><div>§ All fit on a single side of A4 paper.</div><div>§ Not be a detailed plan or structure for your essay.</div><div>§ Be a sort of ‘shopping list’ of key quotes and ideas you want to talk about.</div><div>§Be bullet-pointed (not full sentences)</div>]]></description>
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         <title>20. Extension activity - Chapter 5 PETER Paragraph Practice</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162818255</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Work through these questions one at a time to practise structuring your paragraphs for an essay.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>19. Activity 5 - Read and consider Chapter 5</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162818258</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Download this document and open it with Adobe Reader or Adobe Acrobat. <strong>Do not open it in your internet browser - this is important.<br></strong><br>When you have opened it with Adobe, you will see the highlights have questions attached. The highlighted bits are quotes you may want to use. If you can answer all the questions in this document, and talk about some of them in your essay, you will achieve well.<br><br>This will take time to do well. You may like to work with a partner.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>17. Points you may consider exploring in your essay</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162818260</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>§ The symbolism of the ‘Jackson fork’ at the start.<br><br></div><div>§ How Lennie killing the puppy (and other damage he has done before) builds tension because we expect something else bad to happen.<br><br></div><div>§ The sounds coming in from outside.<br><br></div><div>§ The use of light in the scene.<br><br></div><div>§ How Curley’s Wife ignores the danger signs of Lennie, and why.<br><br></div><div>§ The symbolism around Curley’s Wife, eg. “red”, “sausages”.<br><br></div><div>§ Words, phrases, and descriptive techniques which create both calm and tense atmospheres at different times.</div><div><br>§ How Curley’s Wife and Lennie move closer and further apart during the scene.<br><br></div><div>§ George’s (and others’) warnings about Curley’s Wife here, repeated by Lennie, and before.<br><br></div><div>§ Words and phrases used to describe Lennie struggling against Curley’s Wife.<br><br></div><div>§ Words and phrases used to describe Curley’s Wife lying dead in the hay.<br><br></div><div>§ How the scene changes once the men come into the barn, particularly how Curley reacts.<br><br></div><div>§ The atmosphere at the end of the scene (time of day, use of light), and what we know will come next.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>11b. Example of detailed PETER paragraph</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Steinbeck’s use of light imagery enhances the rising and falling tension in the atmosphere of the barn scene, as well as symbolising several key themes of the novella. At the start of the scene, the sun “sliced” into the barn. The word “sliced” suggests violence, danger or injury, possibly foreshadowing the revelation that Lennie has killed his puppy already, and will go on to kill Curley’s Wife. These “slices” of sunlight also create “bright lines” on the hay. These lines would resemble the bars of a cell window, and so could be related to how certain characters are trapped or confined: Lennie feels trapped in a bad situation, panicking about what he has done to the puppy, while Curley’s Wife is trapped in a lonely situation by her marriage to Curley. <br><br>In contrast to the bright light at the start of the chapter, when Curley’s Wife is killed, the light around her is described as “growing soft,” suggesting a sombre respectful atmosphere. At the end of the chapter, the light is fading further and the barn is “darkening.” The sun setting could symbolise the end of George, Lennie, and Candy’s dream for their farm, as well as the hopes, dreams, and life of Curley’s Wife.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>8. Top tip - analyse, don&#39;t describe</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162818262</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>DO NOT </strong>spend time retelling the story. The person who marks your essays know what happened.<br><br>Instead, you need to look at the <strong>choices and techniques</strong> Steinbeck has used to create a certain mood or atmosphere. We are interested in your understanding of <strong>how </strong>and <strong>why</strong> Steinbeck has told the story in a certain way, not what happens in the story.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>1. Follow the Numbers</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162818838</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Read through each box in number order</div>]]></description>
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         <title>2. Before you begin, you will need...</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162819111</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. Headphones / speakers<br>2. A copy of Of Mice and Men<br>3. A blank piece of lined paper for making notes.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>6. Activity 2 - Now take this quiz to check your Of Mice and Men knowledge</title>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-27 14:07:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>4. Activity 1 - Watch this summary of Of Mice and Men</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162822842</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Watch this quick summary to remind yourself of the key plot details and themes of the story.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3. Assessment in a nutshell...</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162823193</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>You're going to write an essay on the atmosphere in Chapter 5 (the 'barn scene') of Of Mice and Men.<br><br>This is the scene where Lennie kills Curley's Wife, and your essay will talk about how Steinbeck makes contrasts between a calm atmosphere and a tense atmosphere before she is killed.<br><br>You can have a copy of the book, and one A4 side of notes in the assessment with you.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>5. Another Summary</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162824410</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Here is a written summary of the story, in case you prefer to read rather than watch.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-27 14:14:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>7. Your essay title</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/162825526</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>How does Steinbeck create drama through changes in mood and atmosphere in 'the barn scene' of <em>Of Mice and Men</em>? Show your understanding of how this relates to the rest of the novella.”<br><br><br><strong>Note: Your essay is on chapter 5. You might mention other parts of the book, but you should not waste time going into detail about chapters 1, 2, 3, 4 or 6.</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <title>9. Top tip - Keep your quotes short and focused</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163085561</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The best quotes are shorter than 7 words, and ideally just 1-3 words.<br><br>Make sure you don't just retell what the quote is saying, but suggest reasons why it is effective language to create a particular effect. Here are some examples of quotes being used with different levels of success:</div>]]></description>
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         <title>D-grade use of a quote</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163086001</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Candy tells George that Curley is always picking fights with bigger men, as if Curley was angry that he was not bigger: “He’s alla time picking scraps with big guys. Kind of like he’s mad at ‘em because he ain’t a big guy”</div>]]></description>
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         <title>C-grade use of a quote</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163086091</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Candy tells George that Curley is always picking fights with bigger men “Kind of like he’s mad at ‘em because he ain’t a big guy.”</div>]]></description>
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         <title>A-grade use of a quote</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163086142</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Candy tells George that Curley is “alla time picking scraps with big guys”, and that, perhaps, the reason is that “he’s mad at ‘em because he ain’t a big guy.” In this way, Steinbeck conveys the idea of Curley seeming to be angry at the whole world, and permanently on the edge, looking for trouble.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>10. Activity 3 - Effective use of Quotes</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163086370</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>What makes the C-grade analysis better than the D-grade? Why is the A-grade analysis even better?</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2017-03-28 12:02:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>13. Activity 4 - Literary Terms you can use</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163171579</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Check your understanding of these literary terms that you can use in your essay using these flashcards.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>15. Getting familiar with Chapter 5</title>
         <author>hpetrie</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163172579</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>You should now have the background knowledge you need to begin preparing for the assessments, as you now know:<br><br><br>+ An overview of Of Mice and Men<br>+ Some techniques and terminology you can use in the essay<br>+ What the essay is looking for<br><br>Now we can begin looking at Chapter 5</div>]]></description>
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         <title>16. Top tip - Your essay title</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163173396</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Remember, the title for your essay is:<br><br>"How does Steinbeck create drama through changes in mood and atmosphere in 'the barn scene' of <em>Of Mice and Men</em>? Show your understanding of how this relates to the rest of the novella.”<br><br>Everything you write should link directly back to this title, and to chapter 5.<br><br>That means:<br>+ <strong>Do</strong> use words from the question, such as 'atmosphere', 'mood' and 'relates'.<br>+ <strong>Do </strong>use plenty of quotes from chapter 5.<br>- <strong>Do Not</strong> describe what happens in the rest of the story or just retell the story.<br><br><br><strong>Every single line you write should directly link back to the question above, so don't just write everything you know about Of Mice and Men in general.</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <title>What your notes should look like</title>
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         <title>21. Marking Criteria for Of Mice and Men</title>
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         <title>3a. Preparation checklist</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/hpetrie/ofmiceandmen/wish/163181072</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>By the end of your preparation, you should:<br><br>+ Be familiar with the overall plot of Of Mice and Men<br>+ Undestand literary terms from the flashcards, such as 'foreshadowing', 'imagery', and 'symbolism'<br>+ Have (re)read Chapter 5 in full<br>+ Have considered key points for your essay from Chapter 5<br>+ Have created one A4 side of notes for your essay<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>11a. How to write an essay paragraph</title>
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